Gham ko gham ki tarah guzaro tum.....( Ghayel )

by Sajid_Ghayel on July 02, 2013, 06:24:12 PM
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Meri nayee ghazal.
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Gham ko gham ki tarah guzaro tum
Issey behtar jahaaN sanwaro tum

Har dua us talak pohachti hai
Shart yeh hai usey pukaro tum

Kal yahi sar tumhara kaatega
Isko sar se abhi utaaro tum

Aao zinda karen mohabbat ko
Main tumhe aur mujhe niharo tum

Qais ab ho chuka bohat ghayel
Sangh laila ko ab ke maaro tum

Sajid Ghayel
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«Reply #1 on: July 02, 2013, 07:34:19 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: July 02, 2013, 07:50:05 PM »
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Meri nayee ghazal.
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Gham ko gham ki tarah guzaro tum
Issey behtar jahaaN sanwaro tum

Har dua us talak pohachti hai
Shart yeh hai usey pukaro tum
true
Kal yahi sar tumhara kaatega
Isko sar se abhi utaaro tum

Aao zinda karen mohabbat ko
Main tumhe aur mujhe niharo tum

Qais ab ho chuka bohat ghayel
Sangh laila ko ab ke maaro tum

Sajid Ghayel

nice,sir
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«Reply #3 on: July 02, 2013, 08:39:15 PM »
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Ghayal Sahaab Aadaab O as salaam... !


Wallaah janab kia kahne badi hi khoob aur umdaa gazal kahi hai janab... sabhia shaar behad khoobsurat aur umdaa rahe...

Is khoob kalaam par humari hazaaroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahiye ... Bazm meiN aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

AllaaH Hafez... 



Meri nayee ghazal.
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Har dua us talak pohachti hai
Shart yeh hai usey pukaro tum


Behad khoob sher kaha hai Bhai daad daad daad...


Qais ab ho chuka bohat ghayel
Sangh laila ko ab ke maaro tum


Maqta toH bus Laa jawaab raha ...  Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard
Bahut hasi aa rahi hai, Sajid Bhai bhi aisi gustaqiyaaN karte haiN abhi maloom hua..

Waise kahiN aapk SGGFC waloN ko sher samjh meiN aa gaya toH aapki toH lag hi gayi samjhiye...  Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard

Sajid Ghayel
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«Reply #4 on: July 02, 2013, 09:35:22 PM »
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 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Behtreen Peshkash.
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«Reply #5 on: July 02, 2013, 10:40:16 PM »
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waaah sirji waaah
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«Reply #6 on: July 03, 2013, 09:30:35 AM »
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Har dua us talak pohachti hai
Shart yeh hai usey pukaro tum


Aao zinda karen mohabbat ko
Main tumhe aur mujhe niharo tum
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #7 on: July 03, 2013, 10:18:43 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #8 on: July 03, 2013, 12:40:44 PM »
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bahut khoob ghayal ji
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«Reply #9 on: July 03, 2013, 12:43:48 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
bahut hi achchi ghazal pesh ki hai aapne. waise sabhi ashaar bahut achche hai par yeh sher bahut pasand aaya.

Har dua us talak pohachti hai
Shart yeh hai usey pukaro tum
so true.. Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #10 on: July 04, 2013, 03:00:22 AM »
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waah waah bahut khoob Ghayal jee, 2nd she'r bahut achha laga.
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«Reply #11 on: September 05, 2013, 01:10:34 PM »
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Sabhi dosto ka bohat bohat shukriyaaaa Khaskar Parwaz bhai aapka aapne SGGFC ki yaad dila di.........mai to mano bhool hi gaya tha.......hahahahahaha kya din they woh bhi.
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