Gham-E-Zindagi Ko Jeene Mein Rakha Kya Hai "Khwaish"

by khwaish on June 20, 2010, 11:42:44 AM
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«Reply #15 on: June 22, 2010, 12:08:10 PM »
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Matla bohat khoobsurat raha khwaish saheb....
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«Reply #16 on: June 22, 2010, 12:53:37 PM »
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Wah wah khwaish ji bahot khoob likha. Daad qabool farmyen.
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«Reply #17 on: June 22, 2010, 04:06:20 PM »
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Quote from: khwaish on June 20, 2010, 11:42:44 AM

Aankhon mein hai par aankh ne dekha Nahi abhi
Woh pathar Jisse Maine Tarasha Nahi Abhi..

Palkon Ne Thaama hai jisse umar bhar
Woh Ahhq ka katra aankh se Barsa Nahi Abhi...

Gham-E-Zindagi ko Jeene Mein Rakha Kya Hai
Par marne Ki Bhi Koi Aarzoo-E-Tamanna Nahi Abhi...

Kaun Kehta Hai Faaslo mein Log Ek duje Bhool Jaate Hai
Dooriyan Laakh Sahi par Woh Shaks ne Mujhe bhoola Nahi Abhi..

Zindagi Ki Iss Afra-Tafri mein Har Koi Mashroof Hai
Par Woh Shaks Meri Zehan Se Utra Nahi Abhi...

Khilone Ki Tarah Yahan Dil Bhi Tooth The Hai
Chot Khaakar Bhi usne Kuch seekha Nahi Abhi

"Khwaish" Duniya Ki Bheed mein Khud Ko Dhoondhta Hai!!!!
Apne Hi Aks Ko Jisne Kaagaz Par Utaara Nahi Abhi...



                 ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~

"Aankhon mein hai par aankh ne dekha Nahi abhi"

"Khwaish" Duniya Ki Bheed mein Khud Ko Dhoondhta Hai!!!!
Apne Hi Aks Ko Jisne Kaagaz Par Utaara Nahi Abhi.

Bahut achchhey Khwaish bhai!

                    - abd bundeli
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«Reply #18 on: June 22, 2010, 05:55:25 PM »
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Azeem ji , Madhuji bahut bahut shukriya..
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«Reply #19 on: June 22, 2010, 05:58:23 PM »
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BAHUT BAHUT SHUKRIYA QADEER SAHEB!
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«Reply #20 on: July 04, 2010, 12:09:06 PM »
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Quote from: mamta bajpai on June 20, 2010, 03:33:12 PM
KHWAISH JI BAHUT KHOOB ! AAP KI IS PESHKASH SE BARBAS PARVEEN SHAQIR JI KI LIKHI EK GAZAL MUJHE YAAD AA GAYEE.......PESH-E-KHIDMAT HAI...........

TUJHSE TO KOI GILA NAHI HAI
QISMAT ME MERI SILA NAHI HAI

BICHADE TO NA JANE KYA HAAL HO
JO SHAKHS ABHI MILA NAHI HAI

JEENE KI TO AARZOO HI KAB THI
MARNE KA BHI HOUSLA NAHI HAI

JO ZEEST KO MOTBAR BANA DE
AISA KOI SILSILA NAHI HAI

KHUSHBOO KA HISAB HO CHUKA HAI
OR PHOOL ABHI KHILA NAHI HAI

IS THES PE DIL KA PHOOT BAHANA
CHOONE ME TO AABALA NAHI HAI

Pasand Farmane Ke liye aapka teh dil se shukriya mamtaji..

Aur bahut bahut khoob sharing ki hai aapne mamta ji.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #21 on: July 04, 2010, 12:10:11 PM »
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Quote from: Azeem on June 20, 2010, 03:40:42 PM
Bohat Achche KHwaaish Bhai,.
And Nice One Mamta Ji,.

Bahut Bahut Shukriya Azeem Bhai.. icon_flower
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«Reply #22 on: July 12, 2010, 11:16:21 AM »
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Quote from: klaskar on June 20, 2010, 08:19:54 PM
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bahut bahut khoob... bahut hi umda Khwaish ji...!!!

Teh Dil Se Shukriya Kapilji.. icon_flower
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«Reply #23 on: July 12, 2010, 11:41:31 AM »
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"Khwaish" Duniya Ki Bheed mein Khud Ko Dhoondhta Hai!!!!
Apne Hi Aks Ko Jisne Kaagaz Par Utaara Nahi Abhi...

hmmmm........no words.....hum aapki shayrik deewane hote ja rahe hain jaise jaise padh rahe hain......
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«Reply #24 on: September 23, 2010, 08:43:14 AM »
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Quote from: nazar ghouri on June 21, 2010, 01:13:43 AM
wah khwish saheb bahot khoob janab

Nazar saheb Aapse Kuch Tareef Ke Bol Mil Jaaye To yakenn Ho Jaata Hai ke Kuch Acha Hi likha Hai Humne..

Teh Dil Se Aapka Shukriya Jo Aapne pasand farmaya icon_flower
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«Reply #25 on: September 23, 2010, 08:55:50 AM »
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wah ji wah bahut badhiye likha he apne~
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«Reply #26 on: November 15, 2010, 04:06:02 PM »
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Quote from: madhuwesh on June 21, 2010, 07:12:56 AM
Bahut hi khoob Khwaish ji very touchig gazal,beautiful lines by Mamta ji.great creation. Hats off to you! Both Thumbs Up Both Thumbs Up Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause


Teh Dillll Se Shukriya Madhuji.. icon_flower
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«Reply #27 on: March 13, 2011, 09:45:21 AM »
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Quote from: Qadeer.toopchi on June 21, 2010, 01:49:24 PM
Bhai yaar Khawish saheb , Kya koi qazana likh kar rakha howa apne , Roz eak nayi Taqleeq ke saath  tashreef farma rahete ho , Bahoth qoob Hamesha ki tarhan ,  dad hazir hai ,, Allah apko hamesha khush rakhe


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Qadeer Bhai Aapki nazar Agar Inn Kalaamo par padh Jaaye to Wohj Vaakai kisi Khazaane Se Kam nahi..Aapna Apna waqt diya aapka bahut bahut shukriya Bhai..Yuhi saath dete rahiyega icon_flower
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«Reply #28 on: July 29, 2011, 07:35:06 AM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Likha Hai Khwaish Ji Bahut Hi Behtreen icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
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