Ghaneri raat..........................................Aqsh

by aqsh on February 26, 2013, 01:34:39 PM
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Ghaneri raat hai phir chaand bhi, dekho mukammal hai
Na jaane kyuN yeh dil mera, bahut hi aaj paagal hai

Labon par hai tabassum, aur aankhoN meiN bhari masti
Pukaare tujhko mera dil, machee jo is meiN halchal hai

Jage armaan ki baanhon mein, tumko mai jakad hi looN
Na jaane kyunN haya teri, mujhe roke har ik pal hai

Behak kaise na jaaye hum, bhala dil kyun na dhadke ab
Hawa se jo sarakta aur, lehraata yeh aanchal hai

Sada deti tujhe ab “Aqsh” ki, har ek dhadkan hai
Mita de faasle ki man hua, mera bhi chanchal hai

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«Reply #1 on: February 26, 2013, 01:57:43 PM »
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wah wah wah kya baaat hai aqsh jee nihayat umda ghazal kahi hai daad qubool karen
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«Reply #2 on: February 26, 2013, 02:04:00 PM »
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wah wah wah kya baaat hai aqsh jee nihayat umda ghazal kahi hai daad qubool karen
thank you sooooooo much aarish ji
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«Reply #3 on: February 26, 2013, 02:06:13 PM »
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Hawa se jo sarakta aur, lehraata yeh aanchal hai

chota sa ehsaas hai..par jisne dekha hai vo hi iska maza le paayega.
kya baat hai..badhiya..
bas yun hi likhte rahiye..

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«Reply #4 on: February 26, 2013, 02:08:23 PM »
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khubsurat ghazal
daad daad
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«Reply #5 on: February 26, 2013, 02:12:48 PM »
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Hawa se jo sarakta aur, lehraata yeh aanchal hai

chota sa ehsaas hai..par jisne dekha hai vo hi iska maza le paayega.
kya baat hai..badhiya..
bas yun hi likhte rahiye..


thank you soooooooooo much mukesh ji. is ehsaas ko aap shayad bakhoobi jaante honge.
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«Reply #6 on: February 26, 2013, 02:16:03 PM »
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khubsurat ghazal
daad daad
thnx sarfira ji
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«Reply #7 on: February 26, 2013, 02:29:05 PM »
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Very nice Aqsh bhai.Bahut sunder Ghazal kahi hai aapne.Deron Mubarakbaad kabool kareyin.
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«Reply #8 on: February 26, 2013, 02:31:04 PM »
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Very nice Aqsh bhai.Bahut sunder Ghazal kahi hai aapne.Deron Mubarakbaad kabool kareyin.
thank you sudhir ji...
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«Reply #11 on: February 26, 2013, 03:28:08 PM »
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Ghaneri raat hai phir chaand bhi, dekho mukammal hai
Na jaane kyuN yeh dil mera, bahut hi aaj paagal hai

Labon par hai tabassum, aur aankhoN meiN bhari masti
Pukaare tujhko mera dil, machee jo is meiN halchal hai

Jage armaan ki baanhon mein, tumko mai jakad hi looN
Na jaane kyunN haya teri, mujhe roke har ik pal hai

Behak kaise na jaaye hum, bhala dil kyun na dhadke ab
Hawa se jo sarakta aur, lehraata yeh aanchal hai

Sada deti tujhe ab “Aqsh” ki, har ek dhadkan hai
Mita de faasle ki man hua, mera bhi chanchal hai



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«Reply #12 on: February 26, 2013, 03:32:32 PM »
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Aqsh jee, shaandaar, beautifully written, bahut bahut khoob, bahut pasand aai ye ghazal, dheroN daad aur ek Rau qubool kareiN.
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«Reply #13 on: February 26, 2013, 04:19:57 PM »
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aqsh ji behtreen peshkash aap ki,
bahut khoob,
superb...
very very nice....Usual Smile
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«Reply #14 on: February 26, 2013, 05:09:44 PM »
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thank you sooooooo much saini sir
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