GHAR KI DULHAN....////.................................////....IFTAKHAR

by Iftakhar Ahmad on October 20, 2014, 11:12:27 PM
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«Reply #15 on: November 06, 2014, 02:46:37 PM »
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Akash jee, bahut shukriya.
bahut hi khoobsurat peskash sirji Usual Smile
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«Reply #16 on: November 06, 2014, 02:48:00 PM »
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Zarra saheb, jaankar bahut khushi hui ke aapko ghazal itni pasand aai. Phir aapke taareef karne ka andaaz bhi to niraala hai. Bahut achha lagta hai aapke comments dekh kar, bahut bahut shukriya.

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mohabbat me rang mein padhne waale ko rangti huwee is beintehaa khoobsurat ghazal par dheron dheron daad Iftakhaar bhai!!! Is ki khoobsurti masti chanchalta maasoomiyat ... na jaane kitne rangon se rangi hai ye chunar jise ghazal ki shakl mein aap ne push kiya hai !!! marvellous!!!


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«Reply #17 on: November 06, 2014, 03:08:43 PM »
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Wah Wah Wah Bahut umda ghazal hai janab dad qubool karen ...darje zel sher ko dekh len shutur ghurba ka aib dar aaya hai ..

K  sakhiyoN   se   tum   zikr   karti   ho  mera
Saheli  se    teri     pata     kar     chuke  haiN

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«Reply #18 on: November 10, 2014, 04:44:51 PM »
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Qadeer saheb, bahut shukriya itni tawajj: se ghazal padhne ke liye. Misra-e-oola meN maine 'sakhiyoN' likha hai aur misra-e-saani meN 'Saheli', mere khayaal se ye sahi hai, phir bhi agar aapko aisa lag raha hai to thoda explain kareN.
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«Reply #19 on: November 11, 2014, 05:32:40 AM »
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baat sakhiyun saheli ki nahi tum aur teri ki hai ....Pahle misre me kissi ko tum se khitaab kar doosre me tu ya teri se khitaab karna shutur gurba hai ...mai ghalat bhi ho sakta hun aap tahqeeq kar len ...shukriyah ek baar dad hazir hai aapki is ghazal per aaj idhar aana hua to aapka comments parha ...pahle misre me agarche lafz tum baandha gaya hai to doosre misre me lafz tumhari ka mahal hai na ke teri ka ....ab ghaleban aap samjh gaye hunge
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«Reply #20 on: November 11, 2014, 11:31:53 AM »
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Nehaayat haseeN  ek  khata  kar chuke haiN
Mohabbat  ki  ham  ibteda  kar  chuke  haiN
icon_flower icon_flower :icon_flower:mubarak ho janaab!
Hai haq  dil  pe   mere  mukammal  unhiN ka
Jo tohfe meN  dil  ham  ataa kar chuke haiN
mujhe dil nahin dimaag chahiye mere paas iski kami bahut hai Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard!
Maraz  ishq   ka    hai    jo   sab  be  asar hai
Dawa kar  chuke  haiN  dua  kar  chuke haiN
haan ji isi ka ilaaj nahin hai na pahle tha na aane waale dino.n mein hoga crybaby2 crybaby2 crybaby2 crybaby2!
Mohabbat   meN   hai   ab   fana  meri  hasti
Mohabbat ki  qeemat  adaa  kar  chuke haiN
 Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard =)) Laughing hard!
Mujhe  sang    unke     basaani    hai  duniya
Mohabbat  meN   ye   faisla  kar  chuke  haiN
ek tarfa faisla badaa jaan lewa hota hai janaab icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower!
K  sakhiyoN   se   tum   zikr   karti   ho  mera
Saheli  se    teri     pata     kar     chuke  haiN
haan ji meri saheliyo.n ko koi baat hazam hi nahin hoti.aakhir aurat ka basic nature hai ye Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard!
BanaaeNge tujh  ko  hi  ham  ghar  ki dulhan
Ye ghar waaloN se  mashwera kar chuke haiN
acha mujh se bina mashwera kiye Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard!



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«Reply #21 on: November 11, 2014, 02:00:53 PM »
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HaaN maiN ab samjha, sorry, ye ghalti hai, iss per mujhe sochna hoga, bahut shukriya aagaah karne ka.

baat sakhiyun saheli ki nahi tum aur teri ki hai ....Pahle misre me kissi ko tum se khitaab kar doosre me tu ya teri se khitaab karna shutur gurba hai ...mai ghalat bhi ho sakta hun aap tahqeeq kar len ...shukriyah ek baar dad hazir hai aapki is ghazal per aaj idhar aana hua to aapka comments parha ...pahle misre me agarche lafz tum baandha gaya hai to doosre misre me lafz tumhari ka mahal hai na ke teri ka ....ab ghaleban aap samjh gaye hunge
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«Reply #22 on: November 11, 2014, 02:02:00 PM »
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Bahut nawaazish Sheba Mam, shukriya hausla afzaai aur Rau ka.
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«Reply #23 on: November 11, 2014, 03:27:53 PM »
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Qadeer saheb, maine misra change kar liya hai:

K sakhiyoN se tu zikr karti hai mera
Saheli se teri pata kar chuke haiN

baat sakhiyun saheli ki nahi tum aur teri ki hai ....Pahle misre me kissi ko tum se khitaab kar doosre me tu ya teri se khitaab karna shutur gurba hai ...mai ghalat bhi ho sakta hun aap tahqeeq kar len ...shukriyah ek baar dad hazir hai aapki is ghazal per aaj idhar aana hua to aapka comments parha ...pahle misre me agarche lafz tum baandha gaya hai to doosre misre me lafz tumhari ka mahal hai na ke teri ka ....ab ghaleban aap samjh gaye hunge
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