ghar magar kaanch ka banaate hai

by livingbytheday on July 04, 2014, 01:51:18 AM
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Dard mein bhi muskuraate hai
hawaon mein diya jalaate hai

iske aagey nahi kadamo ke nishaan
manzil tak jaane koun jaate hai

In parindo ko udaan dekar dekho
kitne hai jo lout paatey hai

dil mein pathar hai saare logo ke
ghar magar kaanch ka banaate hai

yun hi nahi marta yaqeen logo ka
log insaaniyat ko bech khaate hai

koun maanega meri baahon mein
jawaan khawabo  ko wo lutaate hai

bas yahi reh gaya baaki “deepak”
khotey sikko ko ajmaatey hai
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«Reply #1 on: July 04, 2014, 02:32:05 AM »
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«Reply #2 on: July 04, 2014, 03:39:28 AM »
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Deepak jee Aadaab... !

Bahut khoob janab bahut umdaa ... kafi khoob khayaaloN ko kalam baNd kiya hai aapne ...
Sabhi sher khoob rahe .... par hume quoted sher behad khoob lage...
humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye ...VJ

Likhte rahiye ... bazm meiN aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye ....

Khuda Hafez ...


Quote from: livingbytheday on July 04, 2014, 01:51:18 AM


dil mein pathar hai saare logo ke
ghar magar kaanch ka banaate hai

yun hi nahi marta yaqeen logo ka
log insaaniyat ko bech khaate hai

bas yahi reh gaya baaki “deepak”
khotey sikko ko ajmaatey hai
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«Reply #3 on: July 04, 2014, 04:17:32 AM »
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Quote from: livingbytheday on July 04, 2014, 01:51:18 AM
Dard mein bhi muskuraate hai
hawaon mein diya jalaate hai

iske aagey nahi kadamo ke nishaan
manzil tak jaane koun jaate hai

In parindo ko udaan dekar dekho
kitne hai jo lout paatey hai

dil mein pathar hai saare logo ke
ghar magar kaanch ka banaate hai

yun hi nahi marta yaqeen logo ka
log insaaniyat ko bech khaate hai

koun maanega meri baahon mein
jawaan khawabo  ko wo lutaate hai

bas yahi reh gaya baaki “deepak”
khotey sikko ko ajmaatey hai

Kyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa Bat hai,,,,,,,
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«Reply #4 on: July 04, 2014, 04:40:23 AM »
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Dard mein bhi muskuraate hai
hawaon mein diya jalaate hai

iske aagey nahi kadamo ke nishaan
manzil tak jaane koun jaate hai

In parindo ko udaan dekar dekho
kitne hai jo lout paatey hai

dil mein pathar hai saare logo ke
ghar magar kaanch ka banaate hai

yun hi nahi marta yaqeen logo ka
log insaaniyat ko bech khaate hai

koun maanega meri baahon mein
jawaan khawabo  ko wo lutaate hai

bas yahi reh gaya baaki “deepak”
khotey sikko ko ajmaatey hai

Bhai Deepak jee bahut khoob eik Rau ke saath.
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«Reply #5 on: July 04, 2014, 11:38:59 AM »
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Quote from: jeet jainam on July 04, 2014, 02:32:05 AM
Applause Applause Applause Applause

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Quote from: ParwaaZ on July 04, 2014, 03:39:28 AM
Deepak jee Aadaab... !

Bahut khoob janab bahut umdaa ... kafi khoob khayaaloN ko kalam baNd kiya hai aapne ...
Sabhi sher khoob rahe .... par hume quoted sher behad khoob lage...
humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye ...VJ

Likhte rahiye ... bazm meiN aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye ....

Khuda Hafez ...




Parwaaz ji thank you so much
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«Reply #7 on: July 04, 2014, 12:40:15 PM »
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«Reply #8 on: July 04, 2014, 12:58:39 PM »
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ek rau ke saath dheron daad deepak ji
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«Reply #9 on: July 04, 2014, 02:49:43 PM »
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वाह....वाह......

dil mein pathar hai saare logo ke
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Quote from: Advo.RavinderaRavi on July 04, 2014, 04:17:32 AM
Kyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa Bat hai,,,,,,,

thank you so much for kind words, bahut bahut shukriyaa
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Quote from: surindarn on July 04, 2014, 04:40:23 AM
Dard mein bhi muskuraate hai
hawaon mein diya jalaate hai

iske aagey nahi kadamo ke nishaan
manzil tak jaane koun jaate hai

In parindo ko udaan dekar dekho
kitne hai jo lout paatey hai

dil mein pathar hai saare logo ke
ghar magar kaanch ka banaate hai

yun hi nahi marta yaqeen logo ka
log insaaniyat ko bech khaate hai

koun maanega meri baahon mein
jawaan khawabo  ko wo lutaate hai

bas yahi reh gaya baaki “deepak”
khotey sikko ko ajmaatey hai

Bhai Deepak jee bahut khoob eik Rau ke saath.
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bahut bahut shukriyaa for kind words, aur rau dene ke liye, aapne is koshish ko saraaha mere liye itna hi bahut hai
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Quote from: mann.mann on July 04, 2014, 12:40:15 PM
Applause Applause Applause Applause bahut umada deepekji.... Applause

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«Reply #13 on: July 05, 2014, 03:50:41 PM »
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dil mein pathar hai saare logo ke
ghar magar kaanch ka banaate hai

Wah,Wah,Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah Bahut umdaa.
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Quote from: sksaini4 on July 04, 2014, 12:58:39 PM
ek rau ke saath dheron daad deepak ji

shukriyaa sir ji,
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