Ghazal: aks hai.n ham aaiina dikhlaaye.n kyaa

by divyam on March 15, 2009, 11:31:44 AM
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haal-e-soz-e-dil tumhe batlaaye.n kyaa
ashk kaa paimaanaa phir chalkaaye.n kyaa

may I show you the state of my heart pain
may I spill the cup of my tears once again

naar-e-ulfat! ai sanam bhaDkaaye.n kyaa
ham tumhaare aur qareeb aa jaaye.n kyaa

the fire of love,my dear, may I blow
may I come closer to you, a bit more

dil me.n dhaDhkan ban ke ham bas jaaye.n ge
jism do hai.n jaan ek ho jaaye.n kyaa?

As a heart beat, in your heart I will reside
To become a single life, let the two souls unite

kyu.n nahii.n kartee hamaaraa aitbaar?
"aks hai.n ham aaiinaa dikhlaaye.n kyaa"

Why am I never worthy of your trust
Let me show you a mirror,I am your reflect

ishq dozakh bhii hai, jannat bhii hai ishq
dekhiye qismat me.n apnii paaye.n kyaa

love is hell and love is also heavenly
lets see what I get from my destiny

ham zamee.n kii Khaak tum nuur-e-falak
to kshitiz par ,chal ke ham mil jaaye.n kyaa

I am the dust of earth,and in the sky you shine as light,
Shall we walk upto the horizons ,and there we unite

zindagii ke pech-o-kham me.n pha.ns gaye
kyaa kare.n! ab roye.n kyaa! muskaaye.n kyaa!

lost I am in the twists and turns of life in deep
confused I am,should I smile or should I weep

ab kahaa.n :Ghaafil: woh shauq-e-shaairee!
aap hee farmaaiye, farmaaye.n kyaa?

for poetry,.. Ghaafil now hardly have any interest
what should I say..,why don't you suggest

-Mayank
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«Reply #1 on: March 15, 2009, 03:57:19 PM »
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Mayank ji... Kafi salon ke baad aapka kalam padne ko mila...

Bahut accha likha hai... Applause Daad hazir hai ji
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«Reply #2 on: March 15, 2009, 04:25:03 PM »
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Quote from: Ghaafil on March 15, 2009, 11:31:44 AM

haal-e-soz-e-dil tumhe batlaaye.n kyaa
ashk kaa paimaanaa phir chalkaaye.n kyaa

naar-e-ulfat! ai sanam bhaDkaaye.n kyaa
ham tumhaare aur qareeb aa jaaye.n kyaa

dil me.n dhaDhkan ban ke ham bas jaaye.n ge
jism do hai.n jaan ek ho jaaye.n kyaa?

kyu.n nahii.n kartee hamaaraa aitbaar?
"aks hai.n ham aaiinaa dikhlaaye.n kyaa"

ishq dozakh bhii hai, jannat bhii hai ishq
dekhiye qismat me.n apnii paaye.n kyaa

ham zamee.n kii Khaak tum nuur-e-falak
to kshitiz par ,chal ke ham mil jaaye.n kyaa

zindagii ke pech-o-kham me.n pha.ns gaye
kyaa kare.n! ab roye.n kyaa! muskaaye.n kyaa!

ab kahaa.n :Ghaafil: woh shauq-e-shaairee!
aap hee farmaaiye, farmaaye.n kyaa?

-Mayank
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Bahut khoob! Waah bhai Mayank!
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«Reply #3 on: March 15, 2009, 06:42:36 PM »
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Subhan_allah Ghafil saheb yeh ghazal nahi hain balki ek khoobsurat motiya ka har hain, kasam khuda ki itni mukammal ghazal padhna aur us par dad dena bohat khushnasibi ki baat hai. Khuda aapko bohat khushiya de......
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«Reply #4 on: March 15, 2009, 06:47:23 PM »
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Quote from: Ghaafil on March 15, 2009, 11:31:44 AM

haal-e-soz-e-dil tumhe batlaaye.n kyaa
ashk kaa paimaanaa phir chalkaaye.n kyaa

naar-e-ulfat! ai sanam bhaDkaaye.n kyaa
ham tumhaare aur qareeb aa jaaye.n kyaa

dil me.n dhaDhkan ban ke ham bas jaaye.n ge
jism do hai.n jaan ek ho jaaye.n kyaa?

kyu.n nahii.n kartee hamaaraa aitbaar?
"aks hai.n ham aaiinaa dikhlaaye.n kyaa"

ishq dozakh bhii hai, jannat bhii hai ishq
dekhiye qismat me.n apnii paaye.n kyaa

ham zamee.n kii Khaak tum nuur-e-falak
to kshitiz par ,chal ke ham mil jaaye.n kyaa

zindagii ke pech-o-kham me.n pha.ns gaye
kyaa kare.n! ab roye.n kyaa! muskaaye.n kyaa!

ab kahaa.n :Ghaafil: woh shauq-e-shaairee!
aap hee farmaaiye, farmaaye.n kyaa?

-Mayank

haal-e-soz-e-dil: dil ke dard ka haal
ashk ka paimaana: (eyes here)
naar-e-ulfat: ishq ki aag
dozakh: hell
jannat:heaven
kshitiz: horizon
falak: aasamaa.n
pech-o-kham: Twist and turns[/b]

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Bohot hi Khoob Mayank Ji, bohot din baad aapka likha hua padhne main aaya....!!

Aur is sher main to jaise poori ghazal ki khoobsurti sama gayi hai:

ham zamee.n kii Khaak tum nuur-e-falak
to kshitiz par ,chal ke ham mil jaaye.n kyaa

Bohot bohot shukriya is khoobsurat tohfe ke liye  Usual Smile
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«Reply #5 on: March 17, 2009, 02:37:36 AM »
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Quote from: Roja on March 15, 2009, 03:57:19 PM
Mayank ji... Kafi salon ke baad aapka kalam padne ko mila...

Bahut accha likha hai... Applause Daad hazir hai ji

kahii.n kaafi saalo.n ke baad paDha isiliye to achchah nahii.n lagaa  Winking JK

waise, Ghazal pasand aaii, jaan kar khushi huii.......

aap ki daad qubool hai.....

apna khayaal rakkho

Mayank
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«Reply #6 on: March 17, 2009, 02:39:28 AM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on March 15, 2009, 04:25:03 PM
Bahut khoob! Waah bhai Mayank!
                    - abd bundeli

thank u sir, u reply means a lot for me.

thank u very much

-Mayank
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«Reply #7 on: March 17, 2009, 02:41:25 AM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on March 15, 2009, 06:42:36 PM
Subhan_allah Ghafil saheb yeh ghazal nahi hain balki ek khoobsurat motiya ka har hain, kasam khuda ki itni mukammal ghazal padhna aur us par dad dena bohat khushnasibi ki baat hai. Khuda aapko bohat khushiya de......

saaheb,

husn-e-nazar hai aap ki ho aap ne Ghazal ko is andaaz se saraaha hai, aap ka reply paDh kar bead khushi huii...... Ghazal aap ko pasand aii, samjhiye mehnat bar aaii Usual Smile

yuu.n hi aage bhi paDhte rahiye..

Mayank
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«Reply #8 on: March 17, 2009, 02:45:33 AM »
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Quote from: Celmira on March 15, 2009, 06:47:23 PM
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Bohot hi Khoob Mayank Ji, bohot din baad aapka likha hua padhne main aaya....!!

Aur is sher main to jaise poori ghazal ki khoobsurti sama gayi hai:

ham zamee.n kii Khaak tum nuur-e-falak
to kshitiz par ,chal ke ham mil jaaye.n kyaa

Bohot bohot shukriya is khoobsurat tohfe ke liye  Usual Smile



hello Dr,

Ghazal aap ko pasand aaii, jaan kar behad-behad khushii huii.Usual Smile aap ki hun-e-nazar hai jo Ghazal aap ko is qadar bhaii hai,

tah-e-dil se shukriya, hausila afzaaii ke liye...... aur khaas taur se ;khiitiz' waale sher ki pasandeegi ke liye... abhi Ghazal english translation ke saath post hai, ab ek baar phir se dekhiye, kuchh farq paDa hai ya nahii.n Usual Smile

take care

Mayank
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«Reply #9 on: March 17, 2009, 02:50:14 AM »
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Quote from: Ghaafil on March 17, 2009, 02:37:36 AM
kahii.n kaafi saalo.n ke baad paDha isiliye to achchah nahii.n lagaa  Winking JK

waise, Ghazal pasand aaii, jaan kar khushi huii.......

aap ki daad qubool hai.....

apna khayaal rakkho

Mayank

Hahaaa.. aisa kuch nahi Mayank ji. Sach mein aapko yahan dekhkar bahut bahut khushi huyi. Do write more...Pls Usual Smile
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«Reply #10 on: March 24, 2009, 08:31:52 PM »
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Quote from: Ghaafil on March 15, 2009, 11:31:44 AM


may I show you the state of my heart pain
may I spill the cup of my tears once again


the fire of love,my dear, may I blow
may I come closer to you, a bit more


As a heart beat, in your heart I will reside
To become a single life, let the two souls unite

Why am I never worthy of your trust
Let me show you a mirror,I am your reflect


love is hell and love is also heavenly
lets see what I get from my destiny

I am the dust of earth,and in the sky you shine as light,
Shall we walk upto the horizons ,and there we unite


lost I am in the twists and turns of life in deep
confused I am,should I smile or should I weep

for poetry,.. Ghaafil now hardly have any interest
what should I say..,why don't you suggest

-Mayank

Again a beauty....It's really nice the way you have compiled the poem in english, keeping the meaning of each sher same...Wonderful work Mayank Ji  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #11 on: March 25, 2009, 06:59:43 AM »
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Quote from: Ghaafil on March 15, 2009, 11:31:44 AM


haal-e-soz-e-dil tumhe batlaaye.n kyaa
ashk kaa paimaanaa phir chalkaaye.n kyaa

may I show you the state of my heart pain
may I spill the cup of my tears once again

naar-e-ulfat! ai sanam bhaDkaaye.n kyaa
ham tumhaare aur qareeb aa jaaye.n kyaa

the fire of love,my dear, may I blow
may I come closer to you, a bit more

dil me.n dhaDhkan ban ke ham bas jaaye.n ge
jism do hai.n jaan ek ho jaaye.n kyaa?

As a heart beat, in your heart I will reside
To become a single life, let the two souls unite

kyu.n nahii.n kartee hamaaraa aitbaar?
"aks hai.n ham aaiinaa dikhlaaye.n kyaa"

Why am I never worthy of your trust
Let me show you a mirror,I am your reflect

ishq dozakh bhii hai, jannat bhii hai ishq
dekhiye qismat me.n apnii paaye.n kyaa

love is hell and love is also heavenly
lets see what I get from my destiny

ham zamee.n kii Khaak tum nuur-e-falak
to kshitiz par ,chal ke ham mil jaaye.n kyaa

I am the dust of earth,and in the sky you shine as light,
Shall we walk upto the horizons ,and there we unite

zindagii ke pech-o-kham me.n pha.ns gaye
kyaa kare.n! ab roye.n kyaa! muskaaye.n kyaa!

lost I am in the twists and turns of life in deep
confused I am,should I smile or should I weep

ab kahaa.n :Ghaafil: woh shauq-e-shaairee!
aap hee farmaaiye, farmaaye.n kyaa?

for poetry,.. Ghaafil now hardly have any interest
what should I say..,why don't you suggest

-Mayank



bhut khoob Ghaafil sahab.....kia kehne hain...bhut hi umda ghazal se nawaza hai aapne, har shair ki apni ek alag wazah hai,

naar e ulfat ai sanam bhadkaen kyaa
hum tumhare aur qareeb aa jaye.n kyaa

kia baat hai sahab kia khoob ilteja hai...bhala kon dehekte huwaiy ehsasaat ko aur bhadakne ki ijazat nhi daiga,

kiy.n nhi karte hamara eytebaar?
"aks hain hum aaina dikhlai.n kyaa"

kia baat hai.......aur aapke maqte ka to jawab hi nhi...ummeed hai ki aap apne kalaam se jald hi nawazainge, acha kalaam padne ko milega aur sath hi sath hum jaise log.n ko bhut kuch seekhne ko bhi milega,
Allah hafiz
dua go
Aslam 

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«Reply #12 on: March 25, 2009, 08:02:50 AM »
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Mayank Ji pehli baar aapko padna ka mouka mila hai,
Aur sach kehti ho ki aaj iss yoindia pe aana ek tarah
se safal ho gaya, maine aaj tak aisi koi ghajal nahi padi.

It's so beautiful.

Har line me ek aisi baat hai jo dil to kya rooh ko bhi cheerti
hai, koi word nahi hai mere pass ise sarahne ke liye.

Aapke samne ek word likhna bhi nadani hoga.

Gustakhi maaf ho.

Shally.
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«Reply #13 on: March 25, 2009, 02:49:16 PM »
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Quote from: Ghaafil on March 17, 2009, 02:39:28 AM
thank u sir, u reply means a lot for me.

thank u very much

-Mayank

You're welcome Mayank bhai! Go ahead: horizons & the sky are the limits!
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«Reply #14 on: March 26, 2009, 10:49:54 AM »
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Quote from: aaina on March 25, 2009, 06:59:43 AM
bhut khoob Ghaafil sahab.....kia kehne hain...bhut hi umda ghazal se nawaza hai aapne, har shair ki apni ek alag wazah hai,

naar e ulfat ai sanam bhadkaen kyaa
hum tumhare aur qareeb aa jaye.n kyaa

kia baat hai sahab kia khoob ilteja hai...bhala kon dehekte huwaiy ehsasaat ko aur bhadakne ki ijazat nhi daiga,

kiy.n nhi karte hamara eytebaar?
"aks hain hum aaina dikhlai.n kyaa"

kia baat hai.......aur aapke maqte ka to jawab hi nhi...ummeed hai ki aap apne kalaam se jald hi nawazainge, acha kalaam padne ko milega aur sath hi sath hum jaise log.n ko bhut kuch seekhne ko bhi milega,
Allah hafiz
dua go
Aslam 




aslam saahab,

aadaab arz hai!

mai.n Ghazal ki pasandeegi aur khaaksar ki hausila afzaaii ke liye aap ka tah-e-dil se shukriyaah. aap ne jis andaaz se Ghazal par apni raa'ey dii hai, woh behad pasand aaya hai..waqaii lagta hai ki kisii shayar ne apni ehsaas bayaa.n kiye hai.n Usual Smile puuri Ghazal se aap ke chune huye shero mujhe bhi behad pasand hai... aap ne ek maamuli Ghazal ko saraaha dekh kar khushii huii...

ummeed hai aap ko bhii jald paDhne ka mauqa milegaa aur seekhne sikhaane ka yeh silsilaah chalta rahega...

apna khyaal rakhiye!

-Mayank
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