Ghazal: aks hai.n ham aaiina dikhlaaye.n kyaa

by divyam on March 15, 2009, 11:31:44 AM
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«Reply #15 on: March 26, 2009, 10:51:17 AM »
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Quote from: k.shael on March 25, 2009, 08:02:50 AM
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Mayank Ji pehli baar aapko padna ka mouka mila hai,
Aur sach kehti ho ki aaj iss yoindia pe aana ek tarah
se safal ho gaya, maine aaj tak aisi koi ghajal nahi padi.

It's so beautiful.

Har line me ek aisi baat hai jo dil to kya rooh ko bhi cheerti
hai, koi word nahi hai mere pass ise sarahne ke liye.

Aapke samne ek word likhna bhi nadani hoga.

Gustakhi maaf ho.

Shally.

shally saahiba,

namaste:

Ghazal ki pasandeegi ke liye tah-e-dil se shukriyah! aur aap ne jin lafzo.n se Ghazal ki taarif ki hai, us ne mujhe puuri tarah se la-jawaab kar diya aur mujhe ye sochne par majbuur kar diya ki kyaa Ghazal waqaii itni achchhi hai ki is Dhang se us ki taareef ki jaaye! par jawaab milaa 'nahii.n, yeh faqat aap ka husn-e-nazar hai jo Ghazal aap ko is Dhang se bhaayii hai, aur aapne mujhe is laaeq samjhaa... mujhe mere Ghazal likhne ke andaaz se aap ke  hausila afzaii karne ka andaaz zeyaadah achchha laga..yaqeenan aap ki hausila afzaii meri Ghazal par bhaari hai Usual Smile 'soch raha huu,n kyaa kahuu.n aur kyaa na kahuu.n! par dekhiye majbuuri-e-insaan ki mai.n aap ko ek maamuli se shukriyah ke alaawaawa kuch kah bheee nahii.n sakta......

shukriyah! inaayat! karam! mehrbaani!

aap se phir mulaaqaat hogii, apna khayaal rakhiye...

-Mayank
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«Reply #16 on: March 26, 2009, 10:57:52 AM »
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Quote from: Celmira on March 24, 2009, 08:31:52 PM
Again a beauty....It's really nice the way you have compiled the poem in english, keeping the meaning of each sher same...Wonderful work Mayank Ji  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

thank u madam!
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«Reply #17 on: April 01, 2009, 11:22:39 AM »
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You are welcome Ji
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