ghazal: Dil main rakhta hai na palkon main bithata hai

by R.M. Dixit on January 05, 2013, 11:12:45 AM
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Dil main rakhta hai na palkon pe bithaata hai mujhe
               fir bhi ek shaksh main kya-kya nazer aata hai mujhe.

               Raat ka waqt hai suraj hai mera rahnuma
               der se door se ye kaun bulaata hai mujhe.

               Merii in aankhon ko khwabon se pashemaani hai
               neend ke naam se jo haul-saa aataa hai mujhe.

               Teraa munkir nahin ey waqt mager dekhnaa hai
               bichre logon se kahan, kaise milaata hai mujhe.

               Kissaai derd main yeh baat kahan se aayii
               main bahut hanstaa hoon, jab koii sunaataa hai mujhe
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«Reply #1 on: January 05, 2013, 11:43:51 AM »
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Quote from: R.M. Dixit on January 05, 2013, 11:12:45 AM

              
Dil main rakhta hai na palkon pe bithaata hai mujhe
               fir bhi ek shaksh main kya-kya nazer aata hai mujhe.

               Raat ka waqt hai suraj hai mera rahnuma
               der se door se ye kaun bulaata hai mujhe.

               Merii in aankhon ko khwabon se pashemaani hai
               neend ke naam se jo haul-saa aataa hai mujhe.

               Teraa munkir nahin ey waqt mager dekhnaa hai
               bichre logon se kahan, kaise milaata hai mujhe.

               Kissaai derd main yeh baat kahan se aayii
               main bahut hanstaa hoon, jab koii sunaataa hai mujhe
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bahut khoob dixit ji........!
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«Reply #2 on: January 05, 2013, 11:45:23 AM »
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Quote from: R.M. Dixit on January 05, 2013, 11:12:45 AM

             
Dil main rakhta hai na palkon pe bithaata hai mujhe
               fir bhi ek shaksh main kya-kya nazer aata hai mujhe.

               Raat ka waqt hai suraj hai mera rahnuma
               der se door se ye kaun bulaata hai mujhe.

               Merii in aankhon ko khwabon se pashemaani hai
               neend ke naam se jo haul-saa aataa hai mujhe.

               Teraa munkir nahin ey waqt mager dekhnaa hai
               bichre logon se kahan, kaise milaata hai mujhe.

               Kissaai derd main yeh baat kahan se aayii
               main bahut hanstaa hoon, jab koii sunaataa hai mujhe
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Bahut Bahut Khoooob!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #3 on: January 05, 2013, 11:48:46 AM »
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Dixit Jee Aadaab!


Bade hi umdaa khayaalaat bayaaN kiye hai janab... behad achche
rahe sabhi ashaar ... Usual Smile

Is khoob kalaam par humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakabd kabul
kijiye... Usual Smile

HaaN dusre ashaar ke pahle misre par zarra gaur kijiye ke raat ka waqt
aur suraj ki rahnumai? kia aapke khayaal ko sahiN se bayaaN kar paayi?

Likhate rahiye.. aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile
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«Reply #4 on: January 05, 2013, 12:25:00 PM »
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behad khoob dixit jee
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«Reply #5 on: January 05, 2013, 01:14:46 PM »
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bahut khoob likha hai dixit ji .
bahut bahut mubarakbaad aur daad .
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bahut hi khoob dixit ji.....daad kabul karein.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #7 on: January 05, 2013, 03:44:22 PM »
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Quote from: ParwaaZ on January 05, 2013, 11:48:46 AM
Dixit Jee Aadaab!


dusre ashaar ke pahle misre par zarra gaur kijiye ke raat ka waqt
aur suraj ki rahnumai?

Parwaaz ji...beech mein bolne k liye maafi chahugi, bt mujhe bhi khuch seekhne ko mil jaaye....
mera nazariya ye keh rha hai k yahi toh gam hai k
Raat ka waqt hai aur suraj hai mera rehnuma
Raat jaati nahi aur suraj aata nahi.....
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«Reply #8 on: January 05, 2013, 03:52:28 PM »
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Dil main rakhta hai na palkon pe bithaata hai mujhe
               fir bhi ek shaksh main kya-kya nazer aata hai mujhe.

               Raat ka waqt hai suraj hai mera rahnuma
               der se door se ye kaun bulaata hai mujhe.

               Merii in aankhon ko khwabon se pashemaani hai
               neend ke naam se jo haul-saa aataa hai mujhe.

               Teraa munkir nahin ey waqt mager dekhnaa hai
               bichre logon se kahan, kaise milaata hai mujhe.

               Kissaai derd main yeh baat kahan se aayii
               main bahut hanstaa hoon, jab koii sunaataa hai mujhe


DIXIT JI  KAAFI WAQT KE BAAD AAJ  AAP KA YE KHOOB TAR KALAAM PADHNE KO MILA, AAP KO AAJ YAHA'N DEKH  KAR BAHUT HI ACHCHA LAGA ....ISS KALAAM KE LIYE BAHUT SAARI DAAD QUBOOL KARE'N  ,MERA SOCHNA HI KI AGAR RAAT KO CHAAND RAHNUMAI  KARE TO THANDAK BHI MILE AUR RAHNUMAI BHI HO JAYE.....AAP KA MOHSIN REHAN MUBARAK "TANHAA" 
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bahut khoob Dixit jee.
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«Reply #12 on: January 06, 2013, 02:53:33 AM »
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«Reply #13 on: January 06, 2013, 06:56:36 AM »
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Quote from: R.M. Dixit on January 05, 2013, 11:12:45 AM

             
Dil main rakhta hai na palkon pe bithaata hai mujhe
               fir bhi ek shaksh main kya-kya nazer aata hai mujhe.

               Raat ka waqt hai suraj hai mera rahnuma
               der se door se ye kaun bulaata hai mujhe.

               Merii in aankhon ko khwabon se pashemaani hai
               neend ke naam se jo haul-saa aataa hai mujhe.

               Teraa munkir nahin ey waqt mager dekhnaa hai
               bichre logon se kahan, kaise milaata hai mujhe.

               Kissaai derd main yeh baat kahan se aayii
               main bahut hanstaa hoon, jab koii sunaataa hai mujhe
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wah wah wah kya baat hai dixit jee umda behad umda ghazal hai , dherroon daaad qubool karen.
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