ghazal from rakesh nimal

by pranshshar on November 24, 2012, 07:16:06 AM
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 साँस लेना भी हुआ मोहाल तेरे   शहर मे,
  हो गयी है अब हवा बदहाल तेरे शहर मे।

  कद जमीं  छूने  लगा अब आदमी का ग़म नहीं
  ऊंचे भवनों का मगर है जाल तेरे शहर मे .

 चूहे बिल्ली  दौड़ मे शामिल सभी हैं  इस कदर,
 एक रुक जाये यहाँ है मजाल तेरे शहर मे .

  इस कदर रुपया उगलते देखकर  हमने कहा,
  हो गए लाकर सभी   टकसाल  तेरे  शहर मे।
 
   पूजते हैं देवियों  को मारते हैं बेटियां,
   आदमी की खूब मोटी खाल तेरे शहर मे।

  देखकर चुपचाप सहते मैं चला आया यहाँ ,
  अब सवालों को बनाकर ढाल तेरे शहर मे।

  आँख का पानी नदारद हो गया अब आँख से,
  हाँ मगर हैं खूब सूरत ताल तेरे शहर मे।
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«Reply #1 on: November 24, 2012, 08:23:50 AM »
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bahut khooburat ghazal hai , khas taur se "poojte hain deviyan...."wala sher.Mubarakbaad.
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«Reply #2 on: November 24, 2012, 09:15:49 AM »
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bahut hee khoob soorat ghazal rakesh ji badhaai ho
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«Reply #3 on: November 24, 2012, 10:10:21 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
bahut hee khoob
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«Reply #4 on: November 24, 2012, 01:52:55 PM »
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Rakesh ji ki bahut achhi ghazal hai ye.  Parh kar bahot achha laga.Pranshshar ji aapka bahut shukriya. Dheron daad.
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«Reply #5 on: November 24, 2012, 02:56:40 PM »
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bahut umda Rakesh jee
kya kahne sabhee ashaar behad khoobsurat hai
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«Reply #6 on: November 25, 2012, 10:44:15 AM »
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bahut khoob
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