GHAZAL HO JAAYE ............................ HASAN

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«Reply #15 on: July 18, 2012, 03:38:05 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Hasan ji....!!!
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«Reply #16 on: July 25, 2012, 09:09:55 AM »
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pankaj  ji  hausla  afzai  ke  liye  bahut  shukriya .
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«Reply #17 on: July 25, 2012, 09:13:09 AM »
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Aaj    Insaan    jo    paband - e - amal    ho   jaaye  ,
Mas'ala  kaun   hai   aisa   jo  na   hal   ho   jaaye


Muskura  de  ki  zara    Matla   ghazal   ka  likh  looN  ,
Zulf   aariz   pe   gira  de   ki   Ghazal   ho   jaaye


Lahra   Aanchal  ko   zara ,   Manzar - e - Jamuna   dekhooN ,
Le  le   Angraai    zara   ,   Taj   Mahal   ho   jaaye
 

Bain-ul-aqwaami   siyasat   bhi   hasad   ka   hai   shikaar  ,
Hansna   bhee   abb   sabab - e - jang - o - jadal   ho   jaaye


Ponch   Mazloom   ke   aansoo   ,   kisi   Muflis    ko   khila  ,
Aisa   kuchh   kar   le   'Hasan'  ,  jeena   safal   ho  jaaye







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Paband e amal = karmbadh / committed to action  ;  Mas'ala = problem  ;  Zulf -=Kesh  ; aariz = gaal / cheeks  ;  Bainul aqwaami siyasat = International politics  ; Hasad = jealousy   ; sabab = reason / excuse   ;  jang o jadal = warfare  ;Mazloom = victimised / oppressed  ; Muflis = Pauper / deprived

yeah.veriiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii naaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaice----------FHS
   RAU NAHIN DE SAKTA 8HRS SE PAHLE. INSHAALAAH KAL DOON GAA
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«Reply #18 on: July 26, 2012, 09:14:00 AM »
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DEEPAK JI , BAHUT  SHUKRIYA .
waah waah sir, bahut bahetareen ghazal rahi bhai waah
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«Reply #19 on: July 30, 2012, 11:36:30 PM »
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lajwaaaaaab Applause Applause
booohooot umdaaa

daad dena chahunga sir
Roy  ji , shukriya  aur  duaaein .
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«Reply #20 on: July 30, 2012, 11:47:01 PM »
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 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
very nice creation jee Thumbs UP
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«Reply #21 on: August 02, 2012, 08:40:23 AM »
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wah wah wah hasan bhai.... Usual Smile

masha allah bahut bahut khoob... Usual Smile

 Applause Applause
Touhid sb. Hausla afzai ke liye bahut shukriya.
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«Reply #22 on: August 04, 2012, 02:04:46 PM »
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Sir Adaab,
 
kya umda ghazal kahi hai,sir aur khusoosan in ashar ke liye to meri dili mubarakbad qubool kijiye


Muskura  de  ki  zara    Matla   ghazal   ka  likh  looN  ,
Zulf   aariz   pe   gira  de   ki   Ghazal   ho   jaaye


Lahra   Aanchal  ko   zara ,   Manzar - e - Jamuna   dekhooN ,
Le  le   Angraai    zara   ,   Taj   Mahal   ho   jaaye
Arish  sb .  Ashaar  pasand  karne  aur  hausla  afzai  ke 
liye  bahut  bahut shukriya  .  duaaein  ,  Hasan
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«Reply #23 on: September 07, 2012, 05:46:41 AM »
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waah waah sir, bahut bahetareen ghazal rahi bhai waah
deepakji , bahut  shukriya.
khush rahiye.
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«Reply #24 on: September 07, 2012, 07:39:14 AM »
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Aaj    Insaan    jo    paband - e - amal    ho   jaaye  ,
Mas'ala  kaun   hai   aisa   jo  na   hal   ho   jaaye


Muskura  de  ki  zara    Matla   ghazal   ka  likh  looN  ,
Zulf   aariz   pe   gira  de   ki   Ghazal   ho   jaaye


Lahra   Aanchal  ko   zara ,   Manzar - e - Jamuna   dekhooN ,
Le  le   Angraai    zara   ,   Taj   Mahal   ho   jaaye
 

Bain-ul-aqwaami   siyasat   bhi   hasad   ka   hai   shikaar  ,
Hansna   bhee   abb   sabab - e - jang - o - jadal   ho   jaaye


Ponch   Mazloom   ke   aansoo   ,   kisi   Muflis    ko   khila  ,
Aisa   kuchh   kar   le   'Hasan'  ,  jeena   safal   ho  jaaye







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Paband e amal = karmbadh / committed to action  ;  Mas'ala = problem  ;  Zulf -=Kesh  ; aariz = gaal / cheeks  ;  Bainul aqwaami siyasat = International politics  ; Hasad = jealousy   ; sabab = reason / excuse   ;  jang o jadal = warfare  ;Mazloom = victimised / oppressed  ; Muflis = Pauper / deprived
Bahut Khoob, Kaash Yesaa ho jataa
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«Reply #25 on: September 07, 2012, 07:55:38 AM »
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waah waah great sir
kamlesh ji , shukriya . muaafi  chahta  hoon ,
kuchh dinon se  Yoindia  Shayariadab  pe na aa
saka aur jawab dene mein der ho gai.duago,Hasan
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«Reply #26 on: November 27, 2012, 10:18:27 AM »
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Muskura  de  ki  zara    Matla   ghazal   ka  likh  looN  ,
Zulf   aariz   pe   gira  de   ki   Ghazal   ho   jaaye
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amit ji , bahut  shukrguzar  hoon ,
aur  muazrat  chaahta  hoon  ki apni
pareshanyon  ki  wajah  se  waqt  se 
jawab  na  de   saka . duago , Hasan
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«Reply #27 on: December 19, 2012, 05:43:46 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Hasan ji....!!!
HRIDAY  JI , BAHUT  SHUKRGUZAAR  HOON .
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«Reply #28 on: December 19, 2012, 05:56:35 AM »
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BOHUT KHUB HASAN JI
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«Reply #29 on: December 20, 2012, 01:58:11 AM »
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yeah.veriiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii naaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaice----------FHS
   RAU NAHIN DE SAKTA 8HRS SE PAHLE. INSHAALAAH KAL DOON GAA
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