Ghazal : Humsafer chahiye mujhe hajoom nahin

by R.M. Dixit on May 01, 2011, 11:41:03 AM

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   Zindgi se yahi mila hai mujhe
   tu bari der se mila hai mujhe,

   Tu muhabbat se koi chaal to chal
   Haar jane ka honsla hai mujhe.

   Dil dharkta nahin tapakta hai
   Kal jo khwahish thi aabla hai mujhe.

   Hum safer chahiye mujhe hajoom nahin
   Ek musafir bhi kafila hai mujhe.

   Kohkan ( Ferhaad) ho ki kaais ho ki mahiwal
   Sub main mujhe ek shaks he mila hai.


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Re: Ghazal : Humsafer chahiye mujhe hajoom nahin

«Reply #1 on: May 01, 2011, 11:48:07 AM »

Quote from: R.M. Dixit on May 01, 2011, 11:41:03 AM

Zindgi se yahi mila hai mujhe
tu bari der se mila hai mujhe,

Tu muhabbat se koi chaal to chal
Haar jane ka honsla hai mujhe.

Dil dharkta nahin tapakta hai
Kal jo khwahish thi aabla hai mujhe.

Hum safer chahiye mujhe hajoom nahin
Ek musafir bhi kafila hai mujhe.

Kohkan ( Ferhaad) ho ki kaais ho ki mahiwal
Sub main mujhe ek shaks he mila hai.

bahut achche.

aakhri sher ke misre ko correct kar lein...sab mein ek hi shaks mila hai mujhe to saare ek se ho jaye ge


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Re: Ghazal : Humsafer chahiye mujhe hajoom nahin

«Reply #2 on: May 01, 2011, 11:50:08 AM »

Quote from: adil bechain on May 01, 2011, 11:48:07 AM

bahut achche.

aakhri sher ke misre ko correct kar lein...sab mein ek hi shaks mila hai mujhe to saare ek se ho jaye ge

aur matla mein zindagi se yahi gila hai mujhe


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Re: Ghazal : Humsafer chahiye mujhe hajoom nahin

«Reply #3 on: May 01, 2011, 11:52:27 AM »

Waah..waah..ab..mogambo..khush..ho..gaya..Raqeeb Lucknowi


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Re: Ghazal : Humsafer chahiye mujhe hajoom nahin

«Reply #4 on: May 01, 2011, 05:48:37 PM »

AAdaab Janab!

Kia khoob AshaaroN se saji gazal pesh ki hai aapne daad
hazir hai..... Haan jo galtiyaaN batai gayi hai janab bechain Sahaab
ki taraf se us par gaur kijiyeNga ...

Baki aapki gazal wakai behad khoob hai dil se daad hazir hai..

Aate rahiye...
Khush O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez