Ghazal : Humsafer chahiye mujhe hajoom nahin

by R.M. Dixit on May 01, 2011, 11:41:03 AM
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             Zindgi se yahi mila hai mujhe
             tu bari der se mila hai mujhe,

             Tu muhabbat se koi chaal to chal
             Haar jane ka honsla hai mujhe.

             Dil dharkta nahin tapakta hai
             Kal jo khwahish thi aabla hai mujhe.

             Hum safer chahiye mujhe hajoom nahin
             Ek musafir bhi kafila hai mujhe.

             Kohkan ( Ferhaad) ho ki kaais ho ki mahiwal
             Sub main mujhe  ek shaks he mila hai.
            
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«Reply #1 on: May 01, 2011, 11:48:07 AM »
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            Zindgi se yahi mila hai mujhe
             tu bari der se mila hai mujhe,

             Tu muhabbat se koi chaal to chal
             Haar jane ka honsla hai mujhe.

             Dil dharkta nahin tapakta hai
             Kal jo khwahish thi aabla hai mujhe.

             Hum safer chahiye mujhe hajoom nahin
             Ek musafir bhi kafila hai mujhe.

             Kohkan ( Ferhaad) ho ki kaais ho ki mahiwal
             Sub main mujhe  ek shaks he mila hai.
             


bahut achche.

aakhri sher ke misre ko correct kar lein...sab mein ek hi shaks mila hai mujhe to saare ek se ho jaye ge
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«Reply #2 on: May 01, 2011, 11:50:08 AM »
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bahut achche.

aakhri sher ke misre ko correct kar lein...sab mein ek hi shaks mila hai mujhe to saare ek se ho jaye ge

aur matla mein zindagi se yahi gila hai mujhe
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«Reply #3 on: May 01, 2011, 11:52:27 AM »
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Waah..waah..ab..mogambo..khush..ho..gaya..Raqeeb Lucknowi
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«Reply #4 on: May 01, 2011, 05:48:37 PM »
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AAdaab Janab!

Kia khoob AshaaroN se saji gazal pesh ki hai aapne daad
hazir hai..... Haan jo galtiyaaN batai gayi hai janab bechain Sahaab
ki taraf se us par gaur kijiyeNga ...

Baki aapki gazal wakai behad khoob hai dil se daad hazir hai..

Aate rahiye...
Khush O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez Usual Smile         

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