Ghazal, log jo aas paas baithay haiN

by Ameen Asim on August 19, 2011, 07:42:49 PM
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log jo aas paas baithay haiN
in meiN kuchh khud shnaas baithay haiN
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«Reply #1 on: August 19, 2011, 07:56:50 PM »
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Ameen Sahaab behad umdaa gazal
kahi hai janab daad daad daad Usual Smile

Sabhi ashaar kabil e daad hai Usual Smile

gar aap thodi si mashk kar ke yahaaN roman meiN
post kar deN to sabhi ahbaab is khubsurat aur
pur asar gazal ko padh sakeNge Usual Smile

Aur baraaye meherbaani.. yahaaN kisi bhi tarhaa ke
link na jodiye... Usual Smile

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«Reply #2 on: August 19, 2011, 09:10:34 PM »
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Janab Ameen Asim sahaab Aadaab!

Janab humari urdu behad kachchhi hai.. par phir
bhi humne aapki kalaam ko roman meiN yahaaN chaap
diya hai... jo hume bahut khub lagi.. Usual Smile

Isliye humne yeH mashk kiya .. Usual Smile Gar kahiN galtiyaaN
huyi ho to mazarrat chahte haiN Usual Smile

Ab aapse guzarish hai ke aap... aainda yahaaN roman
Urdu meiN hi apni kalaam pesh kijiye.. Usual Smile
taki sab padh sakeN ... Aur duji guzarish hai ke aapne
di huyi liNk ko modify kar ke nikaal dijiye Usual Smile


Aate rahiye... Likhate rahiye..
Khuda Hafez Usual Smile         




Log jo aas paas baithe haiN
Inme kuch khud shanaas baithe haiN

Itne gum to nahi hai duniya meiN
Log jitne udaas baithe haiN     

Aik samandar ki pyaas thi jinko
Tod kar woH gilaas baithe haiN

Kal bhi jo be libaas the kuch log
Aaj bhi be libaas baithe haiN

Humse milne khud usko aanaa hai
Kar liya hai qayaas baithe haiN

hum se mat puchiye ke hum dil meiN
Kia dabaa kar bhadaas baithe haiN

Kaise aasim woH jaan sakte haiN
Hum chupa kar jo pyaas baithe haiN     
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«Reply #3 on: August 20, 2011, 04:40:20 AM »
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Aasim saheb,aap se pehle Parwaaz saheb ka shukraguzaar hoon ki unhoon  ne aapki khoobsoorat ghazal ko roman mein pesh kiya.Main to ek waahid she'r dekhkar maayoos ho gaya thha.Ghazal pasand aayi to aapka doosra kalaam talaash kiya aur urdu rasmulkhat mein likhi eik ghazal mili.Janaab,kya khoobsurat kalaam hai.Main Parwaaz saheb ki raai se ittefaaq rakhta hoon aur guzaarish hai ki aap apna kalaam roman mein likh kar ,aur poori ghazal,post kiya karein taaki sabhi log padh sakein.Itni achhi takhleeqaat ke liye tahedil se mubarakbad.Hasan
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«Reply #4 on: August 20, 2011, 07:19:27 AM »
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Quote from: ParwaaZ on August 19, 2011, 09:10:34 PM
Janab Ameen Asim sahaab Aadaab!

Janab humari urdu behad kachchhi hai.. par phir
bhi humne aapki kalaam ko roman meiN yahaaN chaap
diya hai... jo hume bahut khub lagi.. Usual Smile

Isliye humne yeH mashk kiya .. Usual Smile Gar kahiN galtiyaaN
huyi ho to mazarrat chahte haiN Usual Smile

Ab aapse guzarish hai ke aap... aainda yahaaN roman
Urdu meiN hi apni kalaam pesh kijiye.. Usual Smile
taki sab padh sakeN ... Aur duji guzarish hai ke aapne
di huyi liNk ko modify kar ke nikaal dijiye Usual Smile


Aate rahiye... Likhate rahiye..
Khuda Hafez Usual Smile         




Log jo aas paas baithe haiN
Inme kuch khud shanaas baithe haiN

Itne gum to nahi hai duniya meiN
Log jitne udaas baithe haiN     

Aik samandar ki pyaas thi jinko
Tod kar woH gilaas baithe haiN

Kal bhi jo be libaas the kuch log
Aaj bhi be libaas baithe haiN

Humse milne khud usko aanaa hai
Kar liya hai qayaas baithe haiN

hum se mat puchiye ke hum dil meiN
Kia dabaa kar bhadaas baithe haiN

Kaise aasim woH jaan sakte haiN
Hum chupa kar jo pyaas baithe haiN     




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«Reply #5 on: August 20, 2011, 10:19:57 AM »
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Mohtaram F. H. Siddiqui sahib
maiN aap ka dili shukr guzaar hooN, ke aap ne meri hasla afzaai farmaai, ,,
maiN koshish karooN ga ke aap ke mayaar per poora utar sakooN,

aainda mukammal Ghazal post karne ki koshish karooN ga,

Wassalam
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«Reply #6 on: August 20, 2011, 04:32:05 PM »
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Quote from: ParwaaZ on August 19, 2011, 09:10:34 PM
Janab Ameen Asim sahaab Aadaab!

Janab humari urdu behad kachchhi hai.. par phir
bhi humne aapki kalaam ko roman meiN yahaaN chaap
diya hai... jo hume bahut khub lagi.. Usual Smile

Isliye humne yeH mashk kiya .. Usual Smile Gar kahiN galtiyaaN
huyi ho to mazarrat chahte haiN Usual Smile

Ab aapse guzarish hai ke aap... aainda yahaaN roman
Urdu meiN hi apni kalaam pesh kijiye.. Usual Smile
taki sab padh sakeN ... Aur duji guzarish hai ke aapne
di huyi liNk ko modify kar ke nikaal dijiye Usual Smile


Aate rahiye... Likhate rahiye..
Khuda Hafez Usual Smile          




Log jo aas paas baithe haiN
Inme kuch khud shanaas baithe haiN

Itne gum to nahi hai duniya meiN
Log jitne udaas baithe haiN    

Aik samandar ki pyaas thi jinko
Tod kar woH gilaas baithe haiN

Kal bhi jo be libaas the kuch log
Aaj bhi be libaas baithe haiN

Humse milne khud usko aanaa hai
Kar liya hai qayaas baithe haiN

hum se mat puchiye ke hum dil meiN
Kia dabaa kar bhadaas baithe haiN

Kaise aasim woH jaan sakte haiN
Hum chupa kar jo pyaas baithe haiN    



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«Reply #7 on: August 22, 2011, 10:25:20 PM »
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Quote from: Ameen Asim on August 19, 2011, 07:42:49 PM
log jo aas paas baithay haiN
in meiN kuchh khud shnaas baithay haiN



eyk sher magar ek ghazal pe bhaaree badaa shaandaar sher hai mobaarak ho
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«Reply #8 on: December 05, 2011, 06:00:23 AM »
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Quote from: ParwaaZ on August 19, 2011, 09:10:34 PM
Janab Ameen Asim sahaab Aadaab!

Janab humari urdu behad kachchhi hai.. par phir
bhi humne aapki kalaam ko roman meiN yahaaN chaap
diya hai... jo hume bahut khub lagi.. Usual Smile

Isliye humne yeH mashk kiya .. Usual Smile Gar kahiN galtiyaaN
huyi ho to mazarrat chahte haiN Usual Smile

Ab aapse guzarish hai ke aap... aainda yahaaN roman
Urdu meiN hi apni kalaam pesh kijiye.. Usual Smile
taki sab padh sakeN ... Aur duji guzarish hai ke aapne
di huyi liNk ko modify kar ke nikaal dijiye Usual Smile


Aate rahiye... Likhate rahiye..
Khuda Hafez Usual Smile         




Log jo aas paas baithe haiN
Inme kuch khud shanaas baithe haiN

Itne gum to nahi hai duniya meiN
Log jitne udaas baithe haiN     

Aik samandar ki pyaas thi jinko
Tod kar woH gilaas baithe haiN

Kal bhi jo be libaas the kuch log
Aaj bhi be libaas baithe haiN

Humse milne khud usko aanaa hai
Kar liya hai qayaas baithe haiN

hum se mat puchiye ke hum dil meiN
Kia dabaa kar bhadaas baithe haiN

Kaise aasim woH jaan sakte haiN
Hum chupa kar jo pyaas baithe haiN     


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