Ghazal me nami si rehti hai.N.....( Ghayel )

by Sajid_Ghayel on April 07, 2011, 09:43:49 PM
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Waqt ki ab kami si rehti hai.N
Aarzuye thami si rehti hai.N

Door jo ho gaye hai nazro se
Nazrein unpar jami si rehti hai.N

Dafn karte hai khud me yeh khud ko
Bhookh jinki dabi si rehti hai.N

Dil ke kale bohat jo hote hai.N
Surat unki bhali si rehti hai.N

Teri aakho si lagti hai Ghayel
Har Ghazal me nami si rehti hai.N

Sajid Ghayel
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«Reply #1 on: April 08, 2011, 04:38:54 AM »
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excellent creation sajid ji.....maza aagaya padhke aur kai din baad fir kuch likh bhi paye..thnx to u ji....
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Lamhon ki har pal kami se rehti hain
Kyun zindagi inti masruuf si rehti hain

Dard o gum bhi nahin mehsus hote ab to
Khushi to jaise dilse koso durr hi rehti hain........

to b continued ,,,,,
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«Reply #2 on: April 08, 2011, 08:57:33 AM »
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bahut khub sajidji.. bahut umda....

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«Reply #3 on: April 08, 2011, 01:08:36 PM »
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bht hi umda peshkesh sajid saheb...
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«Reply #4 on: April 08, 2011, 04:06:41 PM »
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good poem.....Sajidji...... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Poem teri bhali-bhali si lagti hai...
Taaliyon mai magar kami si lagti hai.....

sach hai logo k paas waqt ki kami si lagti hai
Na jaane Kyu zindagi ab bhaagti-bhaagti si lagti hai.......
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«Reply #5 on: April 09, 2011, 05:27:08 AM »
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«Reply #6 on: April 09, 2011, 08:05:48 PM »
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excellent creation sajid ji.....maza aagaya padhke aur kai din baad fir kuch likh bhi paye..thnx to u ji....
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Lamhon ki har pal kami se rehti hain
Kyun zindagi inti masruuf si rehti hain

Dard o gum bhi nahin mehsus hote ab to
Khushi to jaise dilse koso durr hi rehti hain........

to b continued ,,,,,
http://www.yoindia.com/shayariadab/miscellaneous-shayri/ruuh-me-basi-rehti-hain-t63084.0.html;new#new

Arey maine to hamesha kaha hai ke tum meri Instant shayri Queen ho......I am just fan of ur enthusiam....Usual Smile
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«Reply #7 on: April 17, 2011, 07:23:42 AM »
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Waqt ki ab kami si rehti hai.N
Aarzuye thami si rehti hai.N

Door jo ho gaye hai nazro se
Nazrein unpar jami si rehti hai.N

Dafn karte hai khud me yeh khud ko
Bhookh jinki dabi si rehti hai.N

Dil ke kale bohat jo hote hai.N
Surat unki bhali si rehti hai.N

Teri aakho si lagti hai Ghayel
Har Ghazal me nami si rehti hai.N

Sajid Ghayel


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Yeh aankhein hi sab kuch keh deti hai..
Kuch aur kehne ki zarurat kya hai....!!
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«Reply #8 on: April 17, 2011, 02:19:12 PM »
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wah wah ghayal ji
aapne to sachmuch ghayal hi kar diya.
bahut achha likha hai.
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«Reply #9 on: April 19, 2011, 08:00:09 AM »
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Koshish achchhi hai Sajid Saheb, ye aur bhi achchhi ho sakti hai, is pe ghaur kijiye. Is koshish k liye daad qubul kijiye.

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Waqt ki ab kami si rehti hai.N
Aarzuye thami si rehti hai.N

Door jo ho gaye hai nazro se
Nazrein unpar jami si rehti hai.N

Dafn karte hai khud me yeh khud ko
Bhookh jinki dabi si rehti hai.N

Dil ke kale bohat jo hote hai.N
Surat unki bhali si rehti hai.N

Teri aakho si lagti hai Ghayel
Har Ghazal me nami si rehti hai.N

Sajid Ghayel

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«Reply #10 on: April 20, 2011, 12:56:39 PM »
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Bahut khoob Dost Applause Applause
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«Reply #11 on: April 27, 2011, 12:13:29 AM »
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bahut khub sajidji.. bahut umda....

 Applause Applause Applause

Badi meharbani........Usual Smile
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