Ghazal (NM)

by vb on June 08, 2010, 06:59:37 PM
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«Reply #1 on: June 08, 2010, 09:00:19 PM »
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...Bahut khoob! Intense and kaafi gehree agar...gaur say parhi jaye tu...
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«Reply #2 on: June 09, 2010, 01:35:52 AM »
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   Bahut achha likha hai aapne Vb ji,apne ehsaaso ko khoobsurti se lafzo me  dhala hai. Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: June 09, 2010, 09:43:07 AM »
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Anonymous jee! buhat shukriya k parha aap ne ghaur say n nice comments chhoray...
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«Reply #4 on: June 09, 2010, 09:48:12 AM »
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tamanna.pt jee! buhat shukriya aap ki hosla afzai ka or sunder comments ka..
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«Reply #5 on: June 09, 2010, 12:39:45 PM »
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TERE WAJOOD SE HAASIL....... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: June 09, 2010, 01:35:52 PM »
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...Thanks!!!

hamein bhi chand satrein yaad aayeen, share karnay kee chotti si koshish kartay hain...

"Kuch tu hoga unki is khamoshi ka sabab
 sehraaon mein shouq say kyun bheegtay jaatay

 kehtay hain, naghma woh jo tootay dil ka
 warna geet woh zaroor apni preet k gaatay

 raha hoga na bharosa insaanon pe unko
 ranjishein le ke kyun dar pe hafeez ke jaatay

 sailaab hoga unki nigaahon mein ab tak
 kis ghumaan mein wapis wo ateet se aatay"

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«Reply #7 on: June 09, 2010, 02:49:38 PM »
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Sheba Jee! buhat shukriya k taaliyon ki goonj yahan chhor gaeen aap..
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«Reply #8 on: June 09, 2010, 02:55:47 PM »
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Anonymous jee!
aap ki anonymous comments hum tak puhunchti rehtee hain.. jis par thankful hain hum....buhat achha kiya aap ne ye ghazal share kar k... hamen buhat achha laga isay parh kar.. plz share kartay raha kejay..
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«Reply #9 on: June 09, 2010, 03:46:35 PM »
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Quote from: vb on June 08, 2010, 06:59:37 PM

hay tamana, na havaon main reekhtay jaatay
teray labon say ye naghmay paseejtay jaatay

jahaan main aansoovon ka motiyon sa mole nahi
wagarna dard hain jitnay, khareedtay jaatay

tere hayaat ki gham-geeniyon say haar gay
ajab na tha k haseen lab bhe jeetetay jaatay

teray wajood say haasil hain dard-o-nakhun bhe
ye zakhm dard dain jitna, kureedetay jaatay

hay dard ka teray koochay say taaluk kuch tu
tere gali say na vb yoon cheekhtay jaatay





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kisi k pyaar main likhay huvay geeton k gulaab
aaj baazaar main laaya hoon, khareeday ga koi?
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wah vb saheb bahoth qoob . eak umda ghazal pe hazaro dad qubool karen , allah apko khush rakhe ,,


duwa go


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«Reply #10 on: June 09, 2010, 04:27:14 PM »
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kya baat hai bhut hi khoob, bhut hi khoob nibhaya hai aapne apne qaafiye ko mushkil zameen bhut khoob, saare hi ashaar achay rahe magr khaas kar ye bhut hi acha laga

jahaaN mai aasoovon ka motiyoN sa mol nahi
wagrana dard haiN jitne, khreedtey jaate

daad hai ek achi paishkash par qubool keejiye


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«Reply #11 on: June 09, 2010, 05:22:14 PM »
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qadeer_junaid jee !
buhat shukriya aap ka.. k parha aap ne.. n kuch hosla afzaaee kar gay aap..
thanx again for time n nice comments..
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«Reply #12 on: June 09, 2010, 05:27:14 PM »
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aaina jee!
buhat shukriya aap ka k parha aap ne.. n khoobsurat comments chhoray.. hosla afzai ka shukriya...

bus aisa samajh lejay.. k is sher main he tu hamaari, ghazal ki jaan hay..

koi hamaray aansoovon ka mole, motiyon jaisa jaanay.. tu apnay dukh hamen day naa...
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