Ghazal Rahegi Zanda - Zaif

by Zaif on October 29, 2013, 11:53:30 AM
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Gulshan-gulshan phool khile hain, bhanwron ko maaloom nahi.. ??
Kaisi baatein karte ho ye itne bhi maasoom nahi..

Qadmo me maana baandh di, bediyaan zameeno'n ne,
Pahunch se meri door magar, koi bhi nuzoom* nahi..
(*taara)

Kal tak mela lagta tha bachpan mein ummeedon ka,
Ab to ye haal ke aansu ka bhi hujoom* nahi..

Ham bhi thaan chale hain, raahein khud nikaalenge,
Taqdeer ko gaali dein, hum itne bhi mahroom* nahi..
(*unfortunate)

Ummeed na chhote meri jaa! Hum milenge ek din,
Dil ko samjhaati rehna, isko abhi uloom* nahi..
(*knowledge)

Kaun kambhakt kehta hai daur-e-ghazal khatm hua?
Ghazal rahegi zinda, 'Zaif' abhi marhoom* nahi..
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«Reply #1 on: October 29, 2013, 12:19:32 PM »
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waah waah bahut khoob
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«Reply #2 on: October 29, 2013, 01:28:25 PM »
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nice jee  Applause
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«Reply #3 on: October 29, 2013, 01:35:21 PM »
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Waaaaaaaah... behtareen peshkash zaif ji... dheron dheron daaaaaaaad...
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«Reply #4 on: October 29, 2013, 02:02:13 PM »
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bahut bahut khoob Zaif sahab.... Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: October 29, 2013, 03:11:22 PM »
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icon_flower bahut achi kavta likhi hai apne zaif icon_flower
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«Reply #6 on: October 29, 2013, 04:09:29 PM »
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bahot khooob  Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #7 on: October 29, 2013, 04:38:54 PM »
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Gulshan-gulshan phool khile hain, bhanwron ko maaloom nahi.. ??
Kaisi baatein karte ho ye itne bhi maasoom nahi

waaahhhhhhhhhhhhh

Kal tak mela lagta tha bachpan mein ummeedon ka,
Ab to ye haal ke aansu ka bhi hujoom* nahi.

Ham bhi thaan chale hain, raahein khud nikaalenge,
Taqdeer ko gaali dein, hum itne bhi mahroom* nahi

bahot accha hai...

likhte rahiye..

sidra
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«Reply #8 on: October 29, 2013, 07:23:30 PM »
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bahut badhiya....
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«Reply #9 on: October 29, 2013, 08:50:36 PM »
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Bahut khoob.
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«Reply #10 on: October 29, 2013, 08:59:50 PM »
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Zaif Sahaab Aadaab...!


Mashaa Allaah janab kia kahne behad khoob aur behad gehre khayaaloN ko kalam baNd kiya hai aapne...
Har sher behad khoob aur laa jawaab raha janab... kafi umdaa shayri ka muzahera kiya hai aapne... gazab ke khayaalaat aur khoobsurat bayaani ne khoob kalaam raNg baqshe haiN...

Is khoobsurat aur umdaa kalaam par humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahiye... bazm meiN aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez...


Gulshan-gulshan phool khile hain, bhanwron ko maaloom nahi.. ??
Kaisi baatein karte ho ye itne bhi maasoom nahi..

behad khoob matla hua hai jee daad...

Qadmo me maana baandh di, bediyaan zameeno'n ne,
Pahunch se meri door magar, koi bhi nuzoom* nahi..
(*taara)

WaaH waaH janab kia kahne behad khoobsurat aur umdaa sher hai ... bus laajawaab khayaal bayaaN kiya hai daad daad daad..

Kal tak mela lagta tha bachpan mein ummeedon ka,
Ab to ye haal ke aansu ka bhi hujoom* nahi..

Bahut khoob janab daad... waqai sahiN farmaya aapne ...

Ham bhi thaan chale hain, raahein khud nikaalenge,
Taqdeer ko gaali dein, hum itne bhi mahroom* nahi..
(*unfortunate)

Kia kahne jee waaH behad khoob daad daad daad..

Ummeed na chhote meri jaa! Hum milenge ek din,
Dil ko samjhaati rehna, isko abhi uloom* nahi..
(*knowledge)

Kia kahne jee kia kahne waaH behad khoob daad daad daad

Kaun kambhakt kehta hai daur-e-ghazal khatm hua?
Ghazal rahegi zinda, 'Zaif' abhi marhoom* nahi..
(*dead)


Bahut khoob janab, bade khoob maqte se nawaaza hai daad...

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«Reply #11 on: October 29, 2013, 11:38:41 PM »
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Ap sabhi mitron ka dil se shukriya.
Aur parwaaz ji apne to meri ragon ko sharare bhar diye. Bahut shukriya apko. Nawazish.. happy9
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«Reply #12 on: October 30, 2013, 02:13:17 AM »
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Kaun kambhakt kehta hai daur-e-ghazal khatm hua?
Ghazal rahegi zinda, 'Zaif' abhi marhoom* nahi..
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Bahut khoob Zaif jee
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«Reply #13 on: April 01, 2014, 09:45:38 AM »
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Shikriya chiragh sahb !
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