Ghazal toh ek bahana hua hai..................................................Aqsh.

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Yeh unki muhabbat hai, ya phir deewangi hai
Unke qadmoN ki aahat se, saansoN meiN rawaangi hai.


Kaise na kahooN ke, dil tera deewana hua hai
Bin tere mehfil bhi jaise, veerana hua hai

Din toh dhal jaata hai, par jab shaam hoti hai
Kamre ki khidki hi, mera thikana hua hai

Woh jaate jaate tera, ek dam palatkar dekhna
In qatil adaaoN ka, mera dil bhi nishaana hua hai

Nihaarte rehti hooN main, tujhe apne chilman se
Dil jab se hai mile, bas dushman zamaana hua hai

Nasha teri aankhoN meiN, kuch aisa hai jaana
Qatre qatre ko tarasta, laboN ka paimana hua hai

Qaid kar looN main in lamhaat ko, apne kalam se “Aqsh”
Ke tujhe gungunaane ka, ghazal toh ek bahaana hua hai
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«Reply #1 on: May 27, 2013, 12:42:36 PM »
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Who jaate jaate tera, ek dam palatkar dekhna
In qatil adaaoN ka, mera dil bhi nishaana hua hai

Nasha teri aankhoN meiN, kuch aisa hai jaana
Qatre qatre ko tarasta, laboN ka paimana hua hai

Qaid kar looN main in lamhaat ko, apne kalam se “Aqsh”
Ke tujhe gungunaane ka, ghazal toh ek bahaana hua hai




waah aqsh jee waah..bahut khoob ehsaas rahe..dheron daad..happy9
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«Reply #2 on: May 27, 2013, 12:49:46 PM »
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bahut behatreen peshkash hai meree dili daad qubool keejiye aur sab band darwaaze kholiye main to msg ksr ke daad denaa chahtaa thaa par bahut dino se tumne pm block kar diye pataa naheen kyon
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«Reply #3 on: May 27, 2013, 12:54:39 PM »
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Quote from: aqsh on May 27, 2013, 12:08:36 PM
Yeh unki muhabbat hai, ya phir deewangi hai
Unke qadmoN ki aahat se, saansoN meiN rawaangi hai.


Kaise na kahooN ke, dil tera deewana hua hai
Bin tere mehfil bhi jaise, veerana hua hai

Din toh dhal jaata hai, par jab shaam hoti hai
Kamre ki khidki hi, mera thikana hua hai

Who jaate jaate tera, ek dam palatkar dekhna
In qatil adaaoN ka, mera dil bhi nishaana hua hai

Nihaarte rehti hooN main, tujhe apne chilman se
Dil jab se hai mile, bas dushman zamaana hua hai

Nasha teri aankhoN meiN, kuch aisa hai jaana
Qatre qatre ko tarasta, laboN ka paimana hua hai

Qaid kar looN main in lamhaat ko, apne kalam se “Aqsh”
Ke tujhe gungunaane ka, ghazal toh ek bahaana hua hai



aqsh ji khayaal ke taur pe kahun to doosra sher dil ke kaafi qareeb raha... Par technicalities me kamiyaaN haiN... pehla mere khayaal se mehfil ka gender female hoga, aur doosra, veeraana aur deewana -22x honge jabki thikaana, nishana, bahana aur zamana, 12x rahenge, x maine flexiblity ke liye likha hai, to ek baar ghazal pe fir se gaur kar leN...!! Chahunga, ki hasan saaheb aur saini saaheb jaise aalaa shoraa gar mujhe sudhaar deN, agar main kahin galat keh gaya huN to...

Is kosish ke liye meri taraf se daad, umeed karta hun aap aage v apna mashq jaari rakhengi...
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«Reply #4 on: May 27, 2013, 12:55:09 PM »
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nice aqsh . bahut mubarakbad.
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«Reply #5 on: May 27, 2013, 12:58:28 PM »
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Waah,waah!
kya baat hai,i think aap un likhne waale logon me hai jo ek baar kalam uthaate hain
aur kalaam poora likh dete hain.
ye quality bahut kum logon me hoti hai.
Great work,nice feelings!
dheron daad!
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«Reply #6 on: May 27, 2013, 01:01:37 PM »
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Quote from: aqsh on May 27, 2013, 12:08:36 PM
Yeh unki muhabbat hai, ya phir deewangi hai
Unke qadmoN ki aahat se, saansoN meiN rawaangi hai.


Kaise na kahooN ke, dil tera deewana hua hai
Bin tere mehfil bhi jaise, veerana hua hai

Din toh dhal jaata hai, par jab shaam hoti hai
Kamre ki khidki hi, mera thikana hua hai

Who jaate jaate tera, ek dam palatkar dekhna
In qatil adaaoN ka, mera dil bhi nishaana hua hai

Nihaarte rehti hooN main, tujhe apne chilman se
Dil jab se hai mile, bas dushman zamaana hua hai

Nasha teri aankhoN meiN, kuch aisa hai jaana
Qatre qatre ko tarasta, laboN ka paimana hua hai

Qaid kar looN main in lamhaat ko, apne kalam se “Aqsh”
Ke tujhe gungunaane ka, ghazal toh ek bahaana hua hai



Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley bhut khub aqsh ji..
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«Reply #7 on: May 27, 2013, 01:07:58 PM »
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Quote from: aqsh on May 27, 2013, 12:08:36 PM
Yeh unki muhabbat hai, ya phir deewangi hai
Unke qadmoN ki aahat se, saansoN meiN rawaangi hai.


Kaise na kahooN ke, dil tera deewana hua hai
Bin tere mehfil bhi jaise, veerana hua hai

Din toh dhal jaata hai, par jab shaam hoti hai
Kamre ki khidki hi, mera thikana hua hai

Who jaate jaate tera, ek dam palatkar dekhna
In qatil adaaoN ka, mera dil bhi nishaana hua hai

Nihaarte rehti hooN main, tujhe apne chilman se
Dil jab se hai mile, bas dushman zamaana hua hai

Nasha teri aankhoN meiN, kuch aisa hai jaana
Qatre qatre ko tarasta, laboN ka paimana hua hai

Qaid kar looN main in lamhaat ko, apne kalam se “Aqsh”
Ke tujhe gungunaane ka, ghazal toh ek bahaana hua hai


wow zabardast likha hai aqsh ji ,,kya baat hain bohut dino baad padhne ko mili hai apki ghazal ..very nice


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«Reply #8 on: May 27, 2013, 01:14:22 PM »
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Din toh dhal jaata hai, par jab shaam hoti hai
Kamre ki khidki hi, mera thikana hua hai : BAHUT BAHAT KHOOB..Kamre ki khidki...wah wah wah..kya khayaal hai

Nihaarte rehti hooN main, tujhe apne chilman se
Dil jab se hai mile, bas dushman zamaana hua hai

Qaid kar looN main in lamhaat ko, apne kalam se “Aqsh”
Ke tujhe gungunaane ka, ghazal toh ek bahaana hua hai

Bahut khoobsurat ghazal Aqsh jee..
dhamaakedaar peshkash
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«Reply #9 on: May 27, 2013, 01:26:58 PM »
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Quote from: nashwani on May 27, 2013, 12:42:36 PM
waah aqsh jee waah..bahut khoob ehsaas rahe..dheron daad..happy9
bahut bahut shukriya nashwani ji.
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«Reply #10 on: May 27, 2013, 01:40:46 PM »
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thnx saini sir.
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shukriya bahut bahut taish ji. aage khayaal rakhoongi...
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Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on May 27, 2013, 12:55:09 PM
nice aqsh . bahut mubarakbad.
shukriya aapka bahut bahut hasan ji.
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«Reply #13 on: May 27, 2013, 01:54:08 PM »
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Quote from: @Kaash on May 27, 2013, 12:58:28 PM
Waah,waah!
kya baat hai,i think aap un likhne waale logon me hai jo ek baar kalam uthaate hain
aur kalaam poora likh dete hain.
ye quality bahut kum logon me hoti hai.
Great work,nice feelings!
dheron daad!
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housla afzai ka bahut bahut shukriya kaash ji.
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«Reply #14 on: May 27, 2013, 01:54:54 PM »
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Quote from: RAJAN KONDAL on May 27, 2013, 01:01:37 PM

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thnx rajan ji..
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