Ghazal toh ek bahana hua hai..................................................Aqsh.

by aqsh on May 27, 2013, 12:08:36 PM
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«Reply #15 on: May 27, 2013, 01:56:51 PM »
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wow zabardast likha hai aqsh ji ,,kya baat hain bohut dino baad padhne ko mili hai apki ghazal ..very nice


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shukriya sahal bahut bahut.
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«Reply #16 on: May 27, 2013, 01:57:54 PM »
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Din toh dhal jaata hai, par jab shaam hoti hai
Kamre ki khidki hi, mera thikana hua hai : BAHUT BAHAT KHOOB..Kamre ki khidki...wah wah wah..kya khayaal hai

Nihaarte rehti hooN main, tujhe apne chilman se
Dil jab se hai mile, bas dushman zamaana hua hai

Qaid kar looN main in lamhaat ko, apne kalam se “Aqsh”
Ke tujhe gungunaane ka, ghazal toh ek bahaana hua hai

Bahut khoobsurat ghazal Aqsh jee..
dhamaakedaar peshkash

thank you so much mukesh ji. your comments really means a lot to me.
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«Reply #17 on: May 27, 2013, 02:29:10 PM »
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Very Xpressive Aqsh ji & beautifully prose d........
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«Reply #18 on: May 27, 2013, 03:30:23 PM »
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Bohat Khub Ashq Jee!! Romantic Ghazal Rahi!!

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«Reply #19 on: May 27, 2013, 03:31:58 PM »
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Yeh unki muhabbat hai, ya phir deewangi hai
Unke qadmoN ki aahat se, saansoN meiN rawaangi hai.



Kaise na kahooN ke, dil tera deewana hua hai
Bin tere mehfil bhi jaise, veerana hua hai

Din toh dhal jaata hai, par jab shaam hoti hai
Kamre ki khidki hi, mera thikana hua hai

Woh jaate jaate tera, ek dam palatkar dekhna
In qatil adaaoN ka, mera dil bhi nishaana hua hai

Nihaarte rehti hooN main, tujhe apne chilman se
Dil jab se hai mile, bas dushman zamaana hua hai

Nasha teri aankhoN meiN, kuch aisa hai jaana
Qatre qatre ko tarasta, laboN ka paimana hua hai

Qaid kar looN main in lamhaat ko, apne kalam se “Aqsh”
Ke tujhe gungunaane ka, ghazal toh ek bahaana hua hai




Din toh dhal jaata hai, par jab shaam hoti hai
Kamre ki khidki hi, mera thikana hua hai

Woh jaate jaate tera, ek dam palatkar dekhna
In qatil adaaoN ka, mera dil bhi nishaana hua hai

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Justttttttttt Superb Aqsh ji...Bahut Bahut Khoooooob...

Khaas Taur Par yeh 2 Ashaar Mann Ko Lubha Gaye...Bahut Hi Khoobsurat..

Bas Yeh Ek Shikayat Hai Aapse Ke Regular Likha Kare..

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«Reply #20 on: May 27, 2013, 04:12:08 PM »
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Very Xpressive Aqsh ji & beautifully prose d........
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thnx a lot kaur ji
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«Reply #21 on: May 27, 2013, 04:13:55 PM »
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Bohat Khub Ashq Jee!! Romantic Ghazal Rahi!!

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thnx shireenji
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«Reply #22 on: May 27, 2013, 04:15:09 PM »
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Din toh dhal jaata hai, par jab shaam hoti hai
Kamre ki khidki hi, mera thikana hua hai

Woh jaate jaate tera, ek dam palatkar dekhna
In qatil adaaoN ka, mera dil bhi nishaana hua hai

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Justttttttttt Superb Aqsh ji...Bahut Bahut Khoooooob...

Khaas Taur Par yeh 2 Ashaar Mann Ko Lubha Gaye...Bahut Hi Khoobsurat..

Bas Yeh Ek Shikayat Hai Aapse Ke Regular Likha Kare..

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thnx khwaishji. Koshish karenge regular hone ki
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«Reply #23 on: May 27, 2013, 04:15:39 PM »
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Aqsh Jee Aadaab...!


Bade dinoN baad aapki kalam se koi kalaam nazar aayi... Usual Smile
Behad khoob kalaam kahi hai jee... Usual Smile

Sabhi ashaar khoob rahe.... Matla aur dusra sher khaas rahe...
Humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahiye... bazm ko roshan karte rahiye....
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khudaa Hafez... Usual Smile
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«Reply #24 on: May 27, 2013, 04:17:18 PM »
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Aqsh Jee Aadaab...!


Bade dinoN baad aapki kalam se koi kalaam nazar aayi... Usual Smile
Behad khoob kalaam kahi hai jee... Usual Smile

Sabhi ashaar khoob rahe.... Matla aur dusra sher khaas rahe...
Humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahiye... bazm ko roshan karte rahiye....
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khudaa Hafez... Usual Smile

housla afzai ka bahut bahut shukriya parwaazji.
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«Reply #25 on: May 27, 2013, 07:21:50 PM »
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Wah,Wah,Wah Aqsh Mam,
Behad khoobsurat ghazal kahi hai aapne.Haraik ashaar bahut hi emotional  aur meaningful hai,Meri dili mubarakbaad qabool farmaayin.
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«Reply #26 on: May 27, 2013, 07:47:06 PM »
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Wah,Wah,Wah Aqsh Mam,
Behad khoobsurat ghazal kahi hai aapne.Haraik ashaar bahut hi emotional  aur meaningful hai,Meri dili mubarakbaad qabool farmaayin.
thank you so much sudhirji..
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«Reply #27 on: May 27, 2013, 08:12:21 PM »
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Uff... bas padhte padhte hontho pe muskurahat si aa gayi...
kya kehne ish ghazal ke Aqsh ji.. Bahut Umdaa, bahut bahut bahut khoobsurat.. beshumaar daad kubool kare.. Usual Smile

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«Reply #28 on: May 27, 2013, 08:23:30 PM »
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Uff... bas padhte padhte hontho pe muskurahat si aa gayi...
kya kehne ish ghazal ke Aqsh ji.. Bahut Umdaa, bahut bahut bahut khoobsurat.. beshumaar daad kubool kare.. Usual Smile

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aapka bahut bahut shukriya touhid ji. aage bhi aise hi saath dete rahiye.
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«Reply #29 on: May 27, 2013, 09:37:12 PM »
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Waaah waaah Aqsh ji ... Khoobsurat naazuk ehsaasaat ka dilkash bayaan ... Apko dheron daad aur mubaarakbaad !!!
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