"Ghazal tujhko kehne"

by aaina on September 12, 2009, 04:03:05 AM
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spicyanki1
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«Reply #15 on: September 13, 2009, 11:28:06 AM »
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bahot khoob - zindabad - aslam sahab.

Sagar, mahasagar tu apne ghar ka hoga - or hua kar
hami.N kosi se hai anuraag, tere taraf kyu dekhe.N
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #16 on: September 13, 2009, 11:32:31 AM »
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Hum mohabbat mai jeene ka asar kyu.n daikhe.n
Tujhko bata ey qatil e nazar kyu.n daikhe.n

Hum to chalte hain, ke chalna hamra kaam
Hum musafir hain meel ka pattar kyu.n daikhe.n

Jo doobna hai to teri aankho mai doobenge
Hasrat bahri nazro.n se samandar kyu.n daikhe.n

Ye jaante hain ke tara aakhri khat tha wo
 Nigahen daikhen raasta tera, magr kyu.n daike.n

Jo ja rhe hain tujh se door to jaane dey
Qadam bad na payenge, palatkar kyu.n daike.n

Ghazal tujhko kehene ke tareeqe hain bhut
Radeef qafiya ya phir behr kyu.n daikhe.n

I m not finding word to appreciate but wana say its simply awesome fantastic... Beautiful Ghazal...
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brokenbyluv
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«Reply #17 on: September 13, 2009, 12:12:21 PM »
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bahut acha likha hai aaina ji..Clapping SmileyClapping Smiley

Mhbt tou har fiza mein behti hai,
hum mhbt ka safar kyun dekhe,
yahan tou sans lene ki fursat nhi..
hum mhbt mein jine ka asar kyun dekhe......
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Talat
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«Reply #18 on: September 13, 2009, 12:34:52 PM »
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Hum mohabbat mai jeene ka asar kyu.n daikhe.n
Tujhko bata ey qatil e nazar kyu.n daikhe.n

Hum to chalte hain, ke chalna hamra kaam
Hum musafir hain meel ka pattar kyu.n daikhe.n

Jo doobna hai to teri aankho mai doobenge
Hasrat bahri nazro.n se samandar kyu.n daikhe.n

Ye jaante hain ke tara aakhri khat tha wo
 Nigahen daikhen raasta tera, magr kyu.n daike.n

Jo ja rhe hain tujh se door to jaane dey
Qadam bad na payenge, palatkar kyu.n daike.n

Ghazal tujhko kehene ke tareeqe hain bhut
Radeef qafiya ya phir behr kyu.n daikhe.n


Aslam Ji
, humare paas to lafz bhi nahin aapki ghazal ki shaan main likhen. Har lafz is ke aage pheeka sa hai. Bohot gehri bohot hi behtareen. Allah kare aap isi tarah apna qalam ka jadu chalate rahen, ameen.
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aaina
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«Reply #19 on: September 13, 2009, 09:21:40 PM »
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bahot khoob - zindabad - aslam sahab.

Sagar, mahasagar tu apne ghar ka hoga - or hua kar
hami.N kosi se hai anuraag, tere taraf kyu dekhe.N




kya baat hai spicyyanki1 sahab bhut khoob maza aaya pad kar, bhut bhut shukriya aapki is hosla afzaaii ka.
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aaina
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«Reply #20 on: September 13, 2009, 09:23:13 PM »
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I m not finding word to appreciate but wana say its simply awesome fantastic... Beautiful Ghazal...



thnxxxxx so much Sophi for ur beautifull words thnxxxxxxxx
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aaina
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«Reply #21 on: September 13, 2009, 09:24:10 PM »
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bahut acha likha hai aaina ji..Clapping SmileyClapping Smiley

Mhbt tou har fiza mein behti hai,
hum mhbt ka safar kyun dekhe,
yahan tou sans lene ki fursat nhi..
hum mhbt mein jine ka asar kyun dekhe......




bhut khoob BBL nd thnxxx so much.........................
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aaina
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«Reply #22 on: September 13, 2009, 09:28:26 PM »
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Aslam Ji
, humare paas to lafz bhi nahin aapki ghazal ki shaan main likhen. Har lafz is ke aage pheeka sa hai. Bohot gehri bohot hi behtareen. Allah kare aap isi tarah apna qalam ka jadu chalate rahen, ameen.



Aapki mohabbat hai Talat jo aap aisa keh rhi hain tahe dil se aapka mamnoo hu.n aapke pass to mahshallah se zakheera hai alfaazo.n ka lafz aapki khidmat mai sar e kham khade rhete hain ki kab unhe istemaal karen aap, ye to hum jaise logo.n ke liyn mushkil hai ki talaash karna padte hain khoye howay lafz, bhut bhut shukriya aapka jin alfaaz.on se aapne nawaaza hai, God bless U
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brokenbyluv
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«Reply #23 on: September 13, 2009, 09:30:52 PM »
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u r alwayz welcome aaina ji..bahut acha likhte hai aap...Applause Applause
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