Ghazal:maiN baat dil se kahta huuN yah baat merii maaniYe!

by divyam on February 24, 2009, 03:20:42 PM
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Pyaare dostoN,

ek Ghazal pesh-e-khidmat hai, paRhiye aur izhaar-e-khayaal zaroor farmaayeN:(yeh Ghazal do ek saal puraani hai, tab me.n takhallus me.n apna naam hi istemaal kiya karta tha.. Usual Smile )

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maiN baat dil se kahta huuN yah baat merii maaniYe!
mil jaaYe gaa sab kuch waheeN dar par Khudaa ke jaaniYe!

yeh zindagee kee raah pyaare! muKhtaSar hee jaaniYe!
hai lamHah lamHah qeematee kuch mol to pehchaaniYe!

gar HauSile ooNche hoN to baadal bhee Khud chhaT jaaYeN ge
kaT jaayeNgii duShwaariyaaN jo kaam dil meiN Thaaniye!

jab un ke paas aataa hooN maiN woh door mujh se jaate haiN
hai un ke dil meN baat kyaa yeh raaz kaise jaaniYe?

chehre ke peechhe haiN chhupe chehre bohat, ShakleN hazaar
duShman kee kyaa pehchaan hai aur dost kis ko jaaniYe?

TooTaa hu'aa. looTaa hu'aa, sahmaa hu'aa, bikhraa hu'aa
ham aap ko dil de chuke haiN, maaniYe nah maaniYe!

Maqta Haazir hai:

kucHh lafz haiN TooTe :Mayank:, eHsaas kucHh bikhre huwe
yaaroN se maiN kehtaa huuN :mujh ko jaaniye, pehchaaniYe:!


-Mayank
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«Reply #1 on: February 24, 2009, 03:27:29 PM »
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 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Bohot Hi Khoobsurat Ghazal Hai Divyam 'Mayank' Ji Bohot Khoob !!
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«Reply #2 on: September 11, 2009, 06:59:28 AM »
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MAYANK  dost bahut hi khoobsurat ghazal hai daad dil se kabool farmaaye
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«Reply #3 on: September 12, 2009, 03:08:46 AM »
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Bahut khoob Mayan ki...  Applause
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«Reply #4 on: September 12, 2009, 04:06:27 AM »
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Pyaare dostoN,

ek Ghazal pesh-e-khidmat hai, paRhiye aur izhaar-e-khayaal zaroor farmaayeN:(yeh Ghazal do ek saal puraani hai, tab me.n takhallus me.n apna naam hi istemaal kiya karta tha.. Usual Smile )

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maiN baat dil se kahta huuN yah baat merii maaniYe!
mil jaaYe gaa sab kuch waheeN dar par Khudaa ke jaaniYe!

yeh zindagee kee raah pyaare! muKhtaSar hee jaaniYe!
hai lamHah lamHah qeematee kuch mol to pehchaaniYe!

gar HauSile ooNche hoN to baadal bhee Khud chhaT jaaYeN ge
kaT jaayeNgii duShwaariyaaN jo kaam dil meiN Thaaniye!

jab un ke paas aataa hooN maiN woh door mujh se jaate haiN
hai un ke dil meN baat kyaa yeh raaz kaise jaaniYe?

chehre ke peechhe haiN chhupe chehre bohat, ShakleN hazaar
duShman kee kyaa pehchaan hai aur dost kis ko jaaniYe?

TooTaa hu'aa. looTaa hu'aa, sahmaa hu'aa, bikhraa hu'aa
ham aap ko dil de chuke haiN, maaniYe nah maaniYe!

Maqta Haazir hai:

kucHh lafz haiN TooTe :Mayank:, eHsaas kucHh bikhre huwe
yaaroN se maiN kehtaa huuN :mujh ko jaaniye, pehchaaniYe:!


-Mayank



bhut hi khoobsurat eshsaasat, daad hazir hai mayank sahab qubool karen
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