**Ghazal...SHIKVA**

by umraan on August 28, 2009, 12:46:21 PM
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Apna bna ke sabko,tanha rhe he koi
chal rha hai waqt se fir bhi
shikva khud se kre hai koi..

Sehla rhi hai zard patto ko hwayein
shushk si khwahishon par oons barsa rhi hai fizayein
tham tham k kat rha hai saanso ka safar
jaise aa gya ho anjaane shahr mai koi,
apna bna k..........

jaate jaate lamhe ankahe afsaano k
nishaan.n chood rhe hai,
bikhar rhi hai yaadein zra zra khwaab ho rhe hai
jaise saagar kinare ret k ghar bna rha ho koi,
apna bna k.......

dhal rha hai dil num ho rhi hai nazar
tut rha hai zubaa.n se lafzoon ka silsila
jaise surkh kalam se likh rha ho
zindgi ki kitaab koi,
apna bna k........
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Roja
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«Reply #1 on: August 28, 2009, 02:12:31 PM »
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Nice creation Umraan ji  Usual Smile
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«Reply #2 on: August 28, 2009, 02:26:02 PM »
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Achchi NAZM ki koshish hai





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subhan pathan
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«Reply #3 on: August 28, 2009, 02:35:09 PM »
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Quote from: umraan on August 28, 2009, 12:46:21 PM
Apna bna ke sabko,tanha rhe hi koi
chal rha hai waqt se fir bhi
shikva khud se kre hai koi..

Sehla rhi hai zard patto ko hwayein
shushk si khwahishon par oons barsa rhi hai fizayein
tham tham k kat rha hai saanso ka safar
jaise aa gya ho anjaane shahr mai koi,
apna bna k..........

jaate jaate lamhe ankahe afsaano k
nishaan.n chood rhe hai,
bikhar rhi hai yaadein zra zra khwaab ho rhe hai
jaise saagar kinare ret k ghar bna rha ho koi,
apna bna k.......

dhal rha hai dil num ho rhi hai nazar
tut rha hai zubaa.n se lafzoon ka silsila
jaise surkh kalam se likh rha ho
zindgi ki kitaab koi,
apna bna k........
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«Reply #4 on: August 30, 2009, 02:13:21 PM »
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Bahut Accche Umraan Ji.. Lajawab Alfaazon se Saji Gazal Pesh Ki hai aapne.. Mujhe Waqai Behad Pasand aaye..!! Bahut Bahut Khooooob.. Applause Applause


**~** Mann **~**
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«Reply #5 on: August 30, 2009, 02:55:27 PM »
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Umraanji daad kabul farmaiye.is sunder gzal k liye... Applause Applause Applause

Uthana prashan chinhe apni harkato par Shikva ho gaya
Khud he khud se karta hu jo sawal,kya ye gunah ho gya
Likh raha hu apne he lahu se main daastaan apni ey-dost
Padhi he nahi kisi ne kahani meri,aur mai badnaam ho gaya

Quote from: umraan on August 28, 2009, 12:46:21 PM
Apna bna ke sabko,tanha rhe he koi
chal rha hai waqt se fir bhi
shikva khud se kre hai koi..

Sehla rhi hai zard patto ko hwayein
shushk si khwahishon par oons barsa rhi hai fizayein
tham tham k kat rha hai saanso ka safar
jaise aa gya ho anjaane shahr mai koi,
apna bna k..........

jaate jaate lamhe ankahe afsaano k
nishaan.n chood rhe hai,
bikhar rhi hai yaadein zra zra khwaab ho rhe hai
jaise saagar kinare ret k ghar bna rha ho koi,
apna bna k.......

dhal rha hai dil num ho rhi hai nazar
tut rha hai zubaa.n se lafzoon ka silsila
jaise surkh kalam se likh rha ho
zindgi ki kitaab koi,
apna bna k........
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«Reply #6 on: August 31, 2009, 12:49:13 PM »
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Quote from: Mann on August 30, 2009, 02:13:21 PM
Bahut Accche Umraan Ji.. Lajawab Alfaazon se Saji Gazal Pesh Ki hai aapne.. Mujhe Waqai Behad Pasand aaye..!! Bahut Bahut Khooooob.. Applause Applause



bahut bahut  shukriya.......mann ji..

**~** Mann **~**
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«Reply #7 on: August 31, 2009, 12:50:54 PM »
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Quote from: smardia on August 30, 2009, 02:55:27 PM
Umraanji daad kabul farmaiye.is sunder gzal k liye... Applause Applause Applause

Uthana prashan chinhe apni harkato par Shikva ho gaya
Khud he khud se karta hu jo sawal,kya ye gunah ho gya
Likh raha hu apne he lahu se main daastaan apni ey-dost
Padhi he nahi kisi ne kahani meri,aur mai badnaam ho gaya


alfaaz to apne bhi khub bayaan kiye hai....
bahut bahut shukriya hosla afzai ka...
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«Reply #8 on: September 03, 2009, 08:27:41 AM »
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Wah wah bahut khoob Umraan ji,Smardia ji,wonderful gazal. Thumbs UP Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #9 on: September 03, 2009, 08:41:53 AM »
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Quote from: umraan on August 28, 2009, 12:46:21 PM
Apna bna ke sabko,tanha rhe he koi
chal rha hai waqt se fir bhi
shikva khud se kre hai koi..
Umraan Saheba waqai kamal kar diya aapne. Bahut khoob, wah wah.

Sehla rhi hai zard patto ko hwayein
shushk si khwahishon par oons barsa rhi hai fizayein
tham tham k kat rha hai saanso ka safar
jaise aa gya ho anjaane shahr mai koi,
apna bna k..........

jaate jaate lamhe ankahe afsaano k
nishaan.n chood rhe hai,
bikhar rhi hai yaadein zra zra khwaab ho rhe hai
jaise saagar kinare ret k ghar bna rha ho koi,
apna bna k.......

dhal rha hai dil num ho rhi hai nazar
tut rha hai zubaa.n se lafzoon ka silsila
jaise surkh kalam se likh rha ho
zindgi ki kitaab koi,
apna bna k........
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«Reply #10 on: September 03, 2009, 11:20:01 AM »
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Bohot Khoob Umraan Ji..... Applause Applause

Lekin Ghazal section main kyun ?
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«Reply #11 on: September 03, 2009, 03:45:02 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya aap sab ka...
 par Calmira ji aapka swal samjh nhi aaya?
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«Reply #12 on: September 03, 2009, 03:54:45 PM »
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Quote from: umraan on September 03, 2009, 03:45:02 PM

 par Calmira ji aapka swal samjh nhi aaya?

Umraan Ji, aapne apni poetry ka title Ghazal diya hai, par aapki ye poem Ghazal nahin hai aur isiliye Ghazal section main munasib nahin hai !
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«Reply #13 on: September 03, 2009, 05:52:05 PM »
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Talatjee aap ka "SHIKVA" DURUST HAI....
Par jyadater log Gazal--najm-poem-kavita...in sab mai fark samajh he nahi paate hain....in sab ko ek-dusare ka prayayvaachi shabd he samajhte hain...
Ye knowledge bhi kisi ek section mai de jaye tou theek hoga...

Quote from: Celmira on September 03, 2009, 03:54:45 PM
Umraan Ji, aapne apni poetry ka title Ghazal diya hai, par aapki ye poem Ghazal nahin hai aur isiliye Ghazal section main munasib nahin hai !
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