Goonjateen hain tamaam shab, hazaar aawaazeyn!

by abdbundeli on May 14, 2010, 11:53:00 AM
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Dil hai aashiq kaa, zaraa pyaar sey rakhnaa hogaa!
Waasitah, yaar, apney yaar sey rakhnaa hogaa!!

Goonjateen hain tamaam shab, hazaar aawaazeyn:
Silsilah, zeest ko, us paar sey rakhnaa hogaa!

Deedah-e-shoukh, utarney ko dil mein, hain mushtaaq:
Ab to pardah naye ijhaar sey rakhnaa hogaa!

Hijra taahashra rahey, tab bhi noor-e-saaqee ko,
Raabitah rind-e-noubahaar sey rakhnaa hogaa!

Baad-e-kousar hai wahaan, dukhtar-e-angoor nahin!
Jaam ko wasl lab-e-khwaar sey rakhnaa hogaa!!

Jo ta'alluk gul-o-bulbul mein hai zamaaney sey;
Chaarahgar ko wahee beemaar sey rakhnaa hogaa!

Laakh ham chaah leyn, 'na jaayengey wahaan par', fir bhi,
Nigah ko baandh rah-e-yaar sey rakhnaa hogaa!

Kyaa karoon aaj? 'Abd', dard hai: kahaan jaauun?
Kuchh sarokaar, gamgusaar sey, rakhnaa hogaa!

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«Reply #1 on: May 14, 2010, 12:50:39 PM »
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abd bundeli sahab!!

hum hayraan hain.. k is qadar khoobsurat ghazal kahi aap ne.. yakeenan aap ki afkaar-o-andaaz-e-bayaan kisi Tusidas ya khusro say kam nahi... ghazal goee main kamaal ho ga aap ko..

is zameen main takreeban har shaayar he aabyari karta hay... lakin is qadar pukhta souch k saath is beher main rawani, har shayar k bus ki baat nahi... 

buhat he khoobsurat ghazal hay...
khush rahiyay
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«Reply #2 on: May 14, 2010, 02:10:07 PM »
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subhan allah..... waah..!! kya khoob likha hai abd bundeli ji.... bahut khoob.... Usual Smile Usual Smile Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #3 on: May 15, 2010, 06:03:24 AM »
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abd bundeli sahab!!

hum hayraan hain.. k is qadar khoobsurat ghazal kahi aap ne.. yakeenan aap ki afkaar-o-andaaz-e-bayaan kisi Tusidas ya khusro say kam nahi... ghazal goee main kamaal ho ga aap ko..

is zameen main takreeban har shaayar he aabyari karta hay... lakin is qadar pukhta souch k saath is beher main rawani, har shayar k bus ki baat nahi... 

buhat he khoobsurat ghazal hay...
khush rahiyay


Bahut-bahut shukriyah 'vb' ji, is beyshqeemat zarrah nawaazee key liye! Mujhey yah jaankar baaqiyi khushee huyee, ki, aap ko meyraa kalaam pasand aa rahaa hai!
Khush rahiye! Aabaad rahiye!!
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«Reply #4 on: May 15, 2010, 06:05:33 AM »
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subhan allah..... waah..!! kya khoob likha hai abd bundeli ji.... bahut khoob.... Usual Smile Usual Smile Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bahut-bahut shukriyah, Mohammad Touhid ji!

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«Reply #5 on: May 15, 2010, 06:39:56 AM »
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Bahut Bahut Khooob Abd Ji..

Bahut Hi khoobsurat Jazbaat!!!

Bahut Ache Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #6 on: May 15, 2010, 01:08:09 PM »
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Bahut Bahut Khooob Abd Ji..

Bahut Hi khoobsurat Jazbaat!!!

Bahut Ache Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


Thanks a lot, khwaish ji!

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«Reply #7 on: May 15, 2010, 02:48:33 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
BAHUT ACHCHE !
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«Reply #8 on: May 16, 2010, 11:48:35 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
BAHUT ACHCHE !

Shukriyah, mamta bajpai ji!

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