gujarna tha bahana mera,,,,ghazal,,,,jeet jainam

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tere didaar ki umeed main gali se teri,
 akhari baar gujarna tha bahana mera,

apni aankhe jhapki nahi intezaar main uske,
kahi gujer na jaye woh kareeb se sajna mera,

mera gher baar ujad gya ek tere karam se,
har ek dhoker ne badla hai thikana mera,

na mohhobat ka wajood mita hai na dard ka
ab gulam e saqi e dard maikhane lejana mera,

khuab rakhna basake verna aansu behne lagenge,
isliye khuwaab koi na aankho se bhoolana mera,

bada mushil har baat hakikat rakhna,asaan tha
tume khush rakhne ke liye veham ko churana mera

phoolo ko  raaho main bicha, ker rakhna sanam,
aaj teri gali se jo nikalna hai zanaaza mera,

                     jj saini
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«Reply #1 on: June 01, 2014, 12:28:52 PM »
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bahut achha likha h jeet....
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shukriya kavya and exm ke liye good luck
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Waah waah bahut hi khoob. .. Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: June 01, 2014, 03:08:16 PM »
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wah waah bahut khoooooooooob jeet ji
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«Reply #5 on: June 01, 2014, 07:58:28 PM »
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wah wah Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: June 01, 2014, 08:21:42 PM »
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«Reply #7 on: June 01, 2014, 08:22:25 PM »
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«Reply #9 on: June 02, 2014, 05:55:27 AM »
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Bahut Umdah Jeet Sahib. Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Surindar.N Applause Applause Applause
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shukriya surinder sir ji
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वाह....वाह...बहुत खूब....

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