Gul-ae-gulbun hon beyshumaar, sirf khaar na hon!

by abdbundeli on February 02, 2013, 09:04:04 AM
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Jo jigar-o-dil mein rawaan ho, wahee nigaah mein ho:
Talab kuchh aisee wasl-e-dilrubaa ki chaah mein ho!

Gul-ae-gulbun hon beyshumaar, sirf khaar na hon;
Khayaal unkaa tasawwur ki sairgaah mein ho!

Main uskey saath rahuungaa, wo meyrey saath rahey;
Haq-e-khuluus meyrey yaar ki salaah mein ho!

Wo meyrey pahloo-e-dil mein rahey qayaamat tak:
Baat kuchh aisee baawaqaar meyree aah mein ho!

Yuun to toofaan bhi guzarney ko guzar jaatey hain;
Kaash, koyee na sang-o-khaar teyree raah mein ho!!

Mout kar ishtidaad aaye, ‘abd’, jab chaahey;
Bas teyraa naam meyree aakhiree karaah mein ho!

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«Reply #1 on: February 02, 2013, 09:30:19 AM »
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very nice composition abd bundeli jee. hamari dili mubarakbad ko qubool kare
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«Reply #2 on: February 02, 2013, 10:12:17 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
very nice composition abd bundeli jee. hamari dili mubarakbad ko qubool kare

Shukriyah, Aqsh ji! Bahut-bahut shukriyah!
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«Reply #3 on: February 02, 2013, 10:15:42 AM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on February 02, 2013, 09:04:04 AM

Jo jigar-o-dil mein rawaan ho, wahee nigaah mein ho:
Talab kuchh aisee wasl-e-dilrubaa ki chaah mein ho!

Gul-ae-gulbun hon beyshumaar, sirf khaar na hon;
Khayaal unkaa tasawwur ki sairgaah mein ho!

Main uskey saath rahuungaa, wo meyrey saath rahey;
Haq-e-khuluus meyrey yaar ki salaah mein ho!

Wo meyrey pahloo-e-dil mein rahey qayaamat tak:
Baat kuchh aisee baawaqaar meyree aah mein ho!

Yuun to toofaan bhi guzarney ko guzar jaatey hain;
Kaash, koyee na sang-o-khaar teyree raah mein ho!!

Mout kar ishtidaad aaye, ‘abd’, jab chaahey;
Bas teyraa naam meyree aakhiree karaah mein ho!

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Lajawab ... bahut hi daad
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«Reply #4 on: February 02, 2013, 10:46:33 AM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on February 02, 2013, 09:04:04 AM

Jo jigar-o-dil mein rawaan ho, wahee nigaah mein ho:
Talab kuchh aisee wasl-e-dilrubaa ki chaah mein ho!
aisa sher na likho warna mujhe mohabbat ho jaaye gi icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
Gul-ae-gulbun hon beyshumaar, sirf khaar na hon;
Khayaal unkaa tasawwur ki sairgaah mein ho!
bahut khubsoorat khyaal hai. icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
Main uskey saath rahuungaa, wo meyrey saath rahey;
Haq-e-khuluus meyrey yaar ki salaah mein ho!
acha.waqqi apni baat pe qayam raho ge ya sirf sher tak hai ye khayaal icon_silent icon_silent icon_silent icon_silent
Wo meyrey pahloo-e-dil mein rahey qayaamat tak:
Baat kuchh aisee baawaqaar meyree aah mein ho!
kya baat hai janaab.dil chhu gayaa ye sher Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Yuun to toofaan bhi guzarney ko guzar jaatey hain;
Kaash, koyee na sang-o-khaar teyree raah mein ho!!
shukria huzoor mere liye aisi tamanna rakhne ke liye. icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
Mout kar ishtidaad aaye, ‘abd’, jab chaahey;
Bas teyraa naam meyree aakhiree karaah mein ho!

kya baat hai. khuda na kare ais naubat aaye. tum zinda raho aur khush raho aur hamein yaad karte raho icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower

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abd sahab alaaaaaaaaa tareeeeen..............!
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Quote from: suman59 on February 02, 2013, 10:15:42 AM
Lajawab ... bahut hi daad

Bahut-bahut shukriyah, Suman ji!
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«Reply #6 on: February 02, 2013, 11:35:55 AM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on February 02, 2013, 09:04:04 AM

Jo jigar-o-dil mein rawaan ho, wahee nigaah mein ho:
Talab kuchh aisee wasl-e-dilrubaa ki chaah mein ho!

Gul-ae-gulbun hon beyshumaar, sirf khaar na hon;
Khayaal unkaa tasawwur ki sairgaah mein ho!

Main uskey saath rahuungaa, wo meyrey saath rahey;
Haq-e-khuluus meyrey yaar ki salaah mein ho!

Wo meyrey pahloo-e-dil mein rahey qayaamat tak:
Baat kuchh aisee baawaqaar meyree aah mein ho!

Yuun to toofaan bhi guzarney ko guzar jaatey hain;
Kaash, koyee na sang-o-khaar teyree raah mein ho!!

Mout kar ishtidaad aaye, ‘abd’, jab chaahey;
Bas teyraa naam meyree aakhiree karaah mein ho!

                  - abd bundeli



Bahut Bahut Khooob Saheb..

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«Reply #7 on: February 02, 2013, 11:54:16 AM »
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Quote from: Sheba on February 02, 2013, 10:46:33 AM
abd sahab alaaaaaaaaa tareeeeen..............!
Sheba ji, aap itnee gahraayee tak meyree is gazal key bahr-e-tasawwuraat kee sair kareyngeen, ummeed nahin thee! Gazal ko likh kar main ney dobaarah shaayad hi padhhaa hogaa, par aapney mujhey usey dobaarah padhhney ko majbuur kar diyaa! Aap kee saaree dilaaweiz nuqtahdaanee key liye tah-e-dil sey aapkaa shukraguzaar huun! Sach bataauun, to, aapkee nuqtahdaaniyaan padhhtey waqt   meyree aankhoun ko kayee baar namee kaa ehsaas huaa thaa!

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Quote from: khwaish on February 02, 2013, 11:35:55 AM

Bahut Bahut Khooob Saheb..

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Kittu ji, bahut-bahut shukriyah! Khush rahiye!
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«Reply #9 on: February 02, 2013, 12:32:20 PM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on February 02, 2013, 09:04:04 AM

Jo jigar-o-dil mein rawaan ho, wahee nigaah mein ho:
Talab kuchh aisee wasl-e-dilrubaa ki chaah mein ho!

Gul-ae-gulbun hon beyshumaar, sirf khaar na hon;
Khayaal unkaa tasawwur ki sairgaah mein ho!

Main uskey saath rahuungaa, wo meyrey saath rahey;
Haq-e-khuluus meyrey yaar ki salaah mein ho!

Wo meyrey pahloo-e-dil mein rahey qayaamat tak:
Baat kuchh aisee baawaqaar meyree aah mein ho!

Yuun to toofaan bhi guzarney ko guzar jaatey hain;
Kaash, koyee na sang-o-khaar teyree raah mein ho!!

Mout kar ishtidaad aaye, ‘abd’, jab chaahey;
Bas teyraa naam meyree aakhiree karaah mein ho!

                  - abd bundeli


Kiyaa Baat hai Sahab, bahut khoob, bahut khoob
Dheron daad
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«Reply #10 on: February 02, 2013, 01:20:20 PM »
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Quote from: Abul Asad on February 02, 2013, 12:32:20 PM
Kiyaa Baat hai Sahab, bahut khoob, bahut khoob
Dheron daad

Bahut-bahut shukriyah, Asad ji!
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«Reply #11 on: February 02, 2013, 03:35:23 PM »
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Matle se maqte tak..
Har sher jaise...dil se nikla hai
wah wah wah wah wah
jubaan tham jaaye aur haath upar..
aaj to kamaal ke ehsaas lekar aaye aap.
bahut mubarakbaad
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«Reply #12 on: February 03, 2013, 05:02:44 AM »
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Quote from: mkv on February 02, 2013, 03:35:23 PM
Matle se maqte tak..
Har sher jaise...dil se nikla hai
wah wah wah wah wah
jubaan tham jaaye aur haath upar..
aaj to kamaal ke ehsaas lekar aaye aap.
bahut mubarakbaad

Bahut-bahut shukriyah, Mukesh ji!
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«Reply #13 on: February 03, 2013, 05:35:09 AM »
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waah waah bahut khoob
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«Reply #14 on: February 03, 2013, 06:26:36 AM »
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Quote from: sksaini4 on February 03, 2013, 05:35:09 AM
waah waah bahut khoob

Bahut-bahut shukriyah, Saini ji!
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