Gul_lakk mein kitne sikkey pade bekaar miley

by livingbytheday on June 10, 2012, 03:32:54 AM
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Gul_lakk mein kitne sikkey pade bekaar miley
Besahaaro ko kahan kabhi madadgaar miley

Baarish wahi huee jahan talaab tey bahut
Sukhe shehar ko bas baadalo ke kataar miley

Na zidd, na naraajgi, bhuke pet hans ke sotey hain
Bacchey gareebo ke kitne samajhdaar miley

Ungli diya toh haathon se bhi jana pada yahan
Sastey kahan kisi ko kabhi udhaar miley

Bade sehron ke uche minnar, hayat-e-masti hain    
Ajeeb si baat magar, log saare karazdaar miley

Hum toh pehchaan nahi paaye hur roaz ki iss zaldi mein
Zindagi  tumse to hum pehle bhi kayi baar miley
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«Reply #1 on: June 10, 2012, 03:35:32 AM »
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Bhut saandaar dil ko choti huyi peshkash hain.
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«Reply #2 on: June 10, 2012, 06:47:27 AM »
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Sir bahut hi khub rachna iske liye main rau nahi dunga kyunki jo lajawab ho use kewal rau dekr santusth krna bemani hi.... Saini sir, siddqui ji, khawahish ji rachana ki trh is rs rachna ko main dhro daad aur  aapko is rachna ke liye dil se salute krta hun......
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«Reply #3 on: June 10, 2012, 07:37:03 AM »
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waah waah waah bahut maaneekhez peshkash dheron daad
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«Reply #4 on: June 10, 2012, 08:29:15 AM »
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LAJWAB SIR .... BOOOOOOHT HE KHOB LIKHA HAI

ek rau meri taraf se kabul ki jiye
or essi meaningful shayri likhte raheye..
BOHT UMDAA LIKHTE HAI AAP
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«Reply #5 on: June 10, 2012, 09:39:23 AM »
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title se ye laga jaise mazaya shayri ho--
magar janaab padne par ek shaandaar ghazal mila
bht koob janaab
azaaron daad aur mubarakbaad

khus rahen
muskurate rahen
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«Reply #6 on: June 11, 2012, 02:27:08 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapner Deepak ji....!!!
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«Reply #7 on: June 11, 2012, 03:52:43 PM »
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Quote from: Masoom Shahzada on June 10, 2012, 03:35:32 AM
Bhut saandaar dil ko choti huyi peshkash hain.

thank you for kind words
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«Reply #8 on: June 11, 2012, 03:53:31 PM »
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Quote from: soudagar on June 10, 2012, 06:47:27 AM
Sir bahut hi khub rachna iske liye main rau nahi dunga kyunki jo lajawab ho use kewal rau dekr santusth krna bemani hi.... Saini sir, siddqui ji, khawahish ji rachana ki trh is rs rachna ko main dhro daad aur  aapko is rachna ke liye dil se salute krta hun......

aapne itni izzat di, bahut bahut shukriyaa
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«Reply #9 on: June 11, 2012, 03:54:00 PM »
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Quote from: sksaini4 on June 10, 2012, 07:37:03 AM
waah waah waah bahut maaneekhez peshkash dheron daad

thank you sir
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«Reply #10 on: June 11, 2012, 03:55:25 PM »
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Quote from: roy on June 10, 2012, 08:29:15 AM
LAJWAB SIR .... BOOOOOOHT HE KHOB LIKHA HAI

ek rau meri taraf se kabul ki jiye
or essi meaningful shayri likhte raheye..
BOHT UMDAA LIKHTE HAI AAP

thank you sir, thank you
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«Reply #11 on: June 11, 2012, 03:56:53 PM »
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Quote from: sarfira on June 10, 2012, 09:39:23 AM
title se ye laga jaise mazaya shayri ho--
magar janaab padne par ek shaandaar ghazal mila
bht koob janaab
azaaron daad aur mubarakbaad

khus rahen
muskurate rahen


thank you
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«Reply #12 on: June 11, 2012, 03:57:25 PM »
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Quote from: ~Hriday~ on June 11, 2012, 02:27:08 PM
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapner Deepak ji....!!!

shukriyaa sir
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