Gungunaataa sitaar, rotaa hai!

by abdbundeli on August 23, 2009, 12:58:23 PM
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Gungunaataa sitaar, rotaa hai!
Nam uyoonoun mein khaar hotaa hai!

Baad-e-jannat see mahak urhtee hai,
Jab bhi pahloo mein pyaar hotaa hai!!

Qarzdaaree azal sey hai jaaree:
Roz, ab bhee, udhaar hotaa hai!

Eik lamhey mein paa chukaa huun sab;
Fir bhi kyoun intizaar hotaa hai?

Dar pai jaataa hun haaziree deyney:
Bas yahee baar-baar hotaa hai!

Yaar andar hai; dar khuleygaa kab?
Roo-b-roo band-dwaar hotaa hai!!

Silwateyn karwatoun sey banteen hain:
Jab, 'abd' beyqaraar hotaa hai!

                  - abd bundeli
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«Reply #1 on: August 23, 2009, 01:34:53 PM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on August 23, 2009, 12:58:23 PM
Gungunaataa sitaar, rotaa hai!
Nam uyoonoun mein khaar hotaa hai!

Baad-e-jannat see mahak urhtee hai,
Jab bhi pahloo mein pyaar hotaa hai!!

Qarzdaaree azal sey hai jaaree:
Roz, ab bhee, udhaar hotaa hai!

Eik lamhey mein paa chukaa huun sab;
Fir bhi kyoun intizaar hotaa hai?

Dar pai jaataa hun haaziree deyney:
Bas yahee baar-baar hotaa hai!

Yaar andar hai; dar khuleygaa kab?
Roo-b-roo band-dwaar hotaa hai!!

Silwateyn karwatoun sey banteen hain:
Jab, 'abd' beyqaraar hotaa hai!

                  - abd bundeli


Wah Uncle ji ... Bahut khoob  Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: August 23, 2009, 01:37:38 PM »
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Bahar beet gayi unki justaju karte
Kabhi jo samne aate toh gufdagu karte

Tamam hasrate jal k raakh ho gayi dil mein
Tamanna thi ki vo raakh unke rubaru karte

Vo ek baar agar hum pe meherbaan hote
Hum unka shauhra(Prasiddhi) sare zamane mein karte

Agar "Roja" ki mohabbat ka imtihan lete
Nikaal ke seene se dil unke rubaru karte..
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«Reply #3 on: August 23, 2009, 02:09:21 PM »
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Quote from: Roja on August 23, 2009, 01:34:53 PM
Wah Uncle ji ... Bahut khoob  Applause Applause

Thanks Roja!
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«Reply #4 on: August 23, 2009, 02:23:54 PM »
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Quote from: Roja on August 23, 2009, 01:37:38 PM

Bahar beet gayi unki justaju karte
Kabhi jo samne aate toh gufdagu karte

Tamam hasraten jal raakh ho gayin dil mein
Thi tamanna ki raakh unke rubaru karte

Vo ek baar agar hum pe meherbaan hote
Hum unka shauhra(Prasiddhi) sare zamane mein karte

Agar "Roja" ki mohabbat ka imtihan lete
Nikaal seene se dil unke rubaru karte..



Dilaaweyz hai Roja! Meyree shayari to dil-o-dimaag sey nikaltee hai, par teyree shayari to tah-e-dil sey nikaltee-see lagtee hai!

Kaash woh bhi wahaan pahunch paataa!
Kaash baahoun mein dilnasheen hotaa!
Kaash aatee na umra kee uljhan;
Garq seeney mein woh haseen hotaa!!

                    - abd bundeli
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«Reply #5 on: August 23, 2009, 02:25:59 PM »
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Dilaaweyz hai Roja! Meyree shayari to dil-o-dimaag sey nikaltee hai, par teyree shayari to tah-e-dil nikaltee-see lagtee hai!

Kaash woh bhi wahaan pahunch paataa!
Kaash baahoun mein dilnasheen hotaa!
Kaash aatee na umra kee uljhan;
Garq seeney mein woh haseen hotaa!!

                    - abd bundeli

Bahut bahut shukriya Uncle ji... Lagta hai aap hi mera likha samajte hai  Giggle
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«Reply #6 on: August 23, 2009, 02:28:20 PM »
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Her taraj jalwa sanam ka rubaru hai
Hai sabha mein masti, daag-e-gul mein bhu hai

Maskne-mehboob hai seena-e-ishq
Saaf aaina mein her dam rubaru hai  Usual Smile
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«Reply #7 on: August 23, 2009, 02:49:53 PM »
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Quote from: Roja on August 23, 2009, 02:25:59 PM
Bahut bahut shukriya Uncle ji... Lagta hai aap hi mera likha samajte hai  Giggle
Quote from: Roja on August 23, 2009, 02:28:20 PM

Her taraj jalwa sanam ka rubaru hai
Hai sabha mein masti, daag-e-gul mein bhu hai

Maskne-mehboob hai seena-e-ishq
Saaf aaina mein her dam rubaru hai  Usual Smile


Zarra nawaazee hai Roja! Bahut khoob!

Kyaa patah tumney kyaa kahaa thaa, ki, ham kyaa samjhey!
Kaash woh bhi to bayaanaat-e-dilrubaa samjhey!
Zindagee key binaa bhi zindagee jeetaa hun mein;
Woh jo samjhey, to, mujhey kafan-e-musabbaa samjhey!!

                                  - abd bundeli
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«Reply #8 on: August 23, 2009, 02:56:14 PM »
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Kyaa patah tumney kyaa kahaa thaa, ki, ham kyaa samjhey!
Kaash woh bhi to bayaanaat-e-dilrubaa samjhey!
Zindagee key binaa bhi zindagee jeetaa huun mein;
Woh jo samjhey, to, mujhey kafan-e-musabbaa samjhey!!

                                     - abd bundeli


Kadam-bhosi(Jaal) ke liye bhi kamyabi samne
Dafatan (Eka-ek)tevar badalkar mujhse vo katra gaya..  Usual Smile
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«Reply #9 on: August 23, 2009, 03:09:39 PM »
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KYA BAAT HAI ABD JI.....

GUNGUNAATA SITAAR ROTAA HAI....
JAB SAATH MEIN YAAR NAHIN HOTA HAI.

USKE AANE KI KHUSHBU TOH AA JAATI HAI,
PAR WOH HAATH NAHIN AATI HAI,
TAB DIL BECHAIN HOTA HAI.
GUNGUNAATA SITAAR ROTAA HAI.......

ROZ YUNHI USKA INTEEZAR HOTA HAI,
KABHI JAAG TA HAI,
KABHI SOTAA HAI,
DIN BAR KARWATEYN BADAL TA HOTA HAI.
GUNGUNAATA SITAAR ROTAA HAI......

EK DOOSRE KO DEKH PAAYE,
ITNA TOH PAAS DONO KA HOTA HAI.
MAGAR TAN SE TAN NA TAKRAEY,
YEH AFSOS HOTA HAI.
GUNGUNAATA SITAAR ROTAA HAI......
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«Reply #10 on: August 23, 2009, 03:22:27 PM »
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Quote from: cara on August 23, 2009, 03:09:39 PM
KYA BAAT HAI ABD JI.....

GUNGUNAATA SITAAR ROTAA HAI....
JAB SAATH MEIN YAAR NAHIN HOTA HAI.

USKE AANE KI KHUSHBU TOH AA JAATI HAI,
PAR WOH HAATH NAHIN AATI HAI,
TAB DIL BECHAIN HOTA HAI.
GUNGUNAATA SITAAR ROTAA HAI.......

ROZ YUNHI USKA INTEEZAR HOTA HAI,
KABHI JAAG TA HAI,
KABHI SOTAA HAI,
DIN BAR KARWATEYN BADAL TA HOTA HAI.
GUNGUNAATA SITAAR ROTAA HAI......

EK DOOSRE KO DEKH PAAYE,
ITNA TOH PAAS DONO KA HOTA HAI.
MAGAR TAN SE TAN NA TAKRAEY,
YEH AFSOS HOTA HAI.
GUNGUNAATA SITAAR ROTAA HAI......

Bahut khoob cara ji  Applause


Ho na ho didaar humko sajake
Hum toh aashiq hai fakt awaaz ke

Vo nashb-e-farsh ko dekhenge kyu?
Vo jo shaayik hai bhuland pervaaz ke


nashb-e-farsh = dharti ki nichayi
Shayik = chahat
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«Reply #11 on: August 23, 2009, 03:58:14 PM »
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Quote from: Roja on August 23, 2009, 02:56:14 PM

Kadam-bhosi(Jaal) ke liye bhi kamyabi samne
Dafatan (Eka-ek)tevar badalkar mujhse vo katra gaya..  Usual Smile

Ay Roja! Apnee zindagee sey koyi kaisey katraayegaa?

Raat baaqee hai abhee, guftagoo baqee hai abhee!
Dil key paimaaney mein bas too hi too baqee hai abhee!
Khum ko paimaanah jazb kaisey kareygaa zaldee?
Andleebee wo bayaan khushguloo baaqee hai abhee!!

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«Reply #12 on: August 23, 2009, 04:03:07 PM »
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Abd ji, Roja and Cara ji.. Good work!!

Sitaro main ab wo baat kaha
najaro main ab wo baat kaha
sakoon se kiya karte the kabhi batein
Ab humari baato main wo baat kaha

Badal waqat, mile gum to najare bhi doob gaye
sitaro ki chamk hui kam, isharo wo baat kaha
dekhte hai bebasi se wo mujhko ab girta hua
khamosh sath ki bandish main, ab wo baat kaha!!!
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«Reply #13 on: August 23, 2009, 04:13:00 PM »
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Quote from: cara on August 23, 2009, 03:09:39 PM
KYA BAAT HAI ABD JI.....

GUNGUNAATA SITAAR ROTAA HAI....
JAB SAATH MEIN YAAR NAHIN HOTA HAI.

USKE AANE KI KHUSHBU TOH AA JAATI HAI,
PAR WOH HAATH NAHIN AATI HAI,
TAB DIL BECHAIN HOTA HAI.
GUNGUNAATA SITAAR ROTAA HAI.......

ROZ YUNHI USKA INTEEZAR HOTA HAI,
KABHI JAAG TA HAI,
KABHI SOTAA HAI,
DIN BAR KARWATEYN BADAL TA HOTA HAI.
GUNGUNAATA SITAAR ROTAA HAI......

EK DOOSRE KO DEKH PAAYE,
ITNA TOH PAAS DONO KA HOTA HAI.
MAGAR TAN SE TAN NA TAKRAEY,
YEH AFSOS HOTA HAI.
GUNGUNAATA SITAAR ROTAA HAI......

Thanks cara!


Bahut kuchh seekhnaa baaqee hai abhee saaqee sey!
Chand paimaaney utarney do halk mein pahley;
Ba'ad uskey tumhain maykhaaney pahunchnaa hogaa;
Abhee to ibtidaa hai yeh, koyi kuchh bhi kah ley!!

                           - abd bundeli
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«Reply #14 on: August 23, 2009, 04:24:49 PM »
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Quote from: Pooja on August 23, 2009, 04:03:07 PM
Abd ji, Roja and Cara ji.. Good work!!

Sitaro main ab wo baat kaha
najaro main ab wo baat kaha
sakoon se kiya karte the kabhi batein
Ab humari baato main wo baat kaha

Badal waqat, mile gum to najare bhi doob gaye
sitaro ki chamk hui kam, isharo wo baat kaha
dekhte hai bebasi se wo mujhko ab girta hua
khamosh sath ki bandish main, ab wo baat kaha!!!


Bahut khoob Pooja ji! Thanks!

Abra to abra hai, gar aab na dey, dey chhayaa!
Ham usey kam hi samajhtey hain, jo ham ney paayaa!
Dil sey dil, jigar-o-zeyhn jigar-o-zeyhn sey, na mileyn;
To samajhiye, ki, hamain us ney bahut tarsaayaa!!

                            - abd bundeli
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