Gungunaataa sitaar, rotaa hai!

by abdbundeli on August 23, 2009, 12:58:23 PM
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«Reply #15 on: August 23, 2009, 04:26:48 PM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on August 23, 2009, 03:58:14 PM
Ay Roja! Apnee zindagee sey koyi kaisey katraayegaa?

Raat baaqee hai abhee, guftagoo baqee hai abhee!
Dil key paimaaney mein bas too hi too baqee hai abhee!
Khum ko paimaanah jazb kaisey kareygaa zaldee?
Andleebee wo bayaan khushguloo baaqee hai abhee!!

                                  - abd bundeli

hahaha really maza aagaya....  Usual Smile
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«Reply #16 on: August 23, 2009, 04:49:53 PM »
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Quote from: Pooja on August 23, 2009, 04:03:07 PM
Abd ji, Roja and Cara ji.. Good work!!

Sitaro main ab wo baat kaha
najaro main ab wo baat kaha
sakoon se kiya karte the kabhi batein
Ab humari baato main wo baat kaha

Badal waqat, mile gum to najare bhi doob gaye
sitaro ki chamk hui kam, isharo wo baat kaha
dekhte hai bebasi se wo mujhko ab girta hua
khamosh sath ki bandish main, ab wo baat kaha!!!

Very nice di

Hum bhi shayik(Premi) hai teri awaaz ke
Najo-gamja (naz aur nakre) se bhare andaz ke

Bech de be-mol hi ki dil si shau
Tum nano gahak dile jajbaaz ke

Ek peheli hai ajal se zindagi
Paye kisne nakshe iske raj ke

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«Reply #17 on: August 23, 2009, 05:11:08 PM »
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Quote from: Roja on August 23, 2009, 04:26:48 PM
hahaha really maza aagaya....  Usual Smile

Thanks! But, now the dinner is getting too late! No? Now, better come down here, we'll chat at the table!!

Un sey kuchh sunaney, sunaaney mein mazah aataa hai;
Par unhain, neend churaaney mein mazah aataa hai!
Khud to so jaatey hain chukey sey garm bistar mein,
Jin ko khwaaboun-sey bahaanoun mein mazah aataa hai!!

                                   - abd bundeli
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«Reply #18 on: August 23, 2009, 05:22:53 PM »
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Thanks! But, now the dinner is getting too late! No? Now, better come down here, we'll chat at the table!!

Un sey kuchh sunaney, sunaaney mein mazah aataa hai;
Par unhain, neend churaaney mein mazah aataa hai!
Khud to so jaatey hain chukey sey garm bistar mein,
Jin ko khwaaboun-sey bahaanoun mein mazah aataa hai!!

                                   - abd bundeli


haaaaahaa.... aapka b jawab nahi Uncle ji..

Arman jo so chuke they unhe fir jaga diya
Teri gazal ne raakh ko shola bana diya

Beete dino ki yaad ne tufaan uta liya
Jo dard so gaya tha usse fir jaga diya

Kya ajab masihayi ki pursoj(dukh-bara)geet ne
Ehsaas-e-zindagi ko neend se jaga diya

"Kya mai hu" ka jawab kahi bhi mila na tha
Ye raj mohabbat ne "Roja" ko bata diya..
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«Reply #19 on: August 24, 2009, 02:18:57 AM »
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Quote from: Roja on August 23, 2009, 05:22:53 PM

haaaaahaa.... aapka b jawab nahi Uncle ji..


Arman jo so chuke they unhe fir jaga diya
Teri gazal ne raakh ko shola bana diya

Beete dino ki yaad ne tufaan uta liya
Jo dard so gaya tha usse fir jaga diya

Kya ajab masihayi ki pursoj(dukh-bara)geet ne
Ehsaas-e-zindagi ko neend se jaga diya

"Kya mai hu" ka jawab kahi bhi mila na tha
Ye raj mohabbat ne "Roja" ko bata diya..

Khaasi dilchasp ho Roja!

Rah-e-zeest baaqee hai kaafee abhi bhee;
Sitaarey abhee arsh mein noujawaan hain!
Abhee baadloun mein bharhaktey hain sholey;
Abhee nam laboun mein mohabbat rawaan hai!!

                          - abd bundeli
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«Reply #20 on: August 24, 2009, 04:32:24 PM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on August 23, 2009, 12:58:23 PM
Gungunaataa sitaar, rotaa hai!
Nam uyoonoun mein khaar hotaa hai!

Baad-e-jannat see mahak urhtee hai,
Jab bhi pahloo mein pyaar hotaa hai!!

Qarzdaaree azal sey hai jaaree:
Roz, ab bhee, udhaar hotaa hai!

Eik lamhey mein paa chukaa huun sab;
Fir bhi kyoun intizaar hotaa hai?

Dar pai jaataa hun haaziree deyney:
Bas yahee baar-baar hotaa hai!

Yaar andar hai; dar khuleygaa kab?
Roo-b-roo band-dwaar hotaa hai!!

Silwateyn karwatoun sey banteen hain:
Jab, 'abd' beyqaraar hotaa hai!

                  - abd bundeli


Bohot achchi ghazal Babu Ji
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«Reply #21 on: August 24, 2009, 04:33:21 PM »
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Bohot Khoob Roja, Cara and Pooja
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«Reply #22 on: August 25, 2009, 02:33:39 AM »
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Wah wah Abd ji,bahut khoob,beautiful gazal. Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Thumbs UP
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«Reply #23 on: August 25, 2009, 02:55:23 AM »
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Quote from: Celmira on August 24, 2009, 04:33:21 PM
Bohot Khoob Roja, Cara and Pooja

Thanks Talat  Usual Smile
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«Reply #24 on: August 25, 2009, 02:58:32 AM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on August 24, 2009, 02:18:57 AM
Khaasi dilchasp ho Roja!

Rah-e-zeest baaqee hai kaafee abhi bhee;
Sitaarey abhee arsh mein noujawaan hain!
Abhee baadloun mein bharhaktey hain sholey;
Abhee nam laboun mein mohabbat rawaan hai!!

                          - abd bundeli

Aap b kam nahi hai Uncle ji.. tongue3

Dekh ke nazar aap churate rahiye
Dil yu hi tadpate rahiye

Dil ki herqat rukh na jaye
Kuch umeed bandhe rahiye

Bazm ki raunak khatam na kijiye
Yu hi sher farmate rahiye..

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«Reply #25 on: August 25, 2009, 06:58:48 AM »
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Quote from: Celmira on August 24, 2009, 04:32:24 PM
Bohot achchi ghazal Babu Ji
Thanks Celmira!
            - abd bundeli
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«Reply #26 on: August 25, 2009, 07:00:41 AM »
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Wah wah Abd ji,bahut khoob,beautiful gazal. Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Thumbs UP
Thanks Madhu!
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«Reply #27 on: August 25, 2009, 07:08:54 AM »
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Wah wah bahut khoob Roja ji,mindblowig lines. icon_thumleft Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #28 on: August 25, 2009, 07:19:44 AM »
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Quote from: Roja on August 25, 2009, 02:58:32 AM
Aap b kam nahi hai Uncle ji.. tongue3


Dekh ke nazar aap churate rahiye
Dil yu hi tadpate rahiye

Dil ki herqat rukh na jaye
Kuch umeed bandhate rahiye

Bazm ki raunak khatam na kijiye
Yu hi sher farmate rahiye..

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Thanks Roja!

 Mein to adnaa hun mahaz eik; khaas to tum ho!
 Gam to yah hai, ki, aaj tak bhi nazar sey gum ho!!
 
Rounaq-e-bazm to tum khud ho; fasaaney na kaho!
Husn kee koundh, nigaahoun mein nahin, dil mein hai!
Roo-b-roo go ki abhee bhee naheen huye hain, 'abd',
Kam to yah bhi nahin hai, mahjabin mahfil mein hai!!


                                    - abd bundeli
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«Reply #29 on: September 10, 2009, 03:08:57 AM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on August 25, 2009, 07:19:44 AM
Thanks Roja!

 Mein to adnaa hun mahaz eik; khaas to tum ho!
 Gam to yah hai, ki, aaj tak bhi nazar sey gum ho!!
 
Rounaq-e-bazm to tum khud ho; fasaaney na kaho!
Husn kee koundh, nigaahoun mein nahin, dil mein hai!
Roo-b-roo go ki abhee bhee naheen huye hain, 'abd',
Kam to yah bhi nahin hai, mahjabin mahfil mein hai!!


                                    - abd bundeli

Ahaaa.... Applause

Ye meri Jaan-e-Mohabbat, ye meri Rooh-e-hayat
Jalta narak hai yahan hijr ki maari her raat

Teri awaaz mein hai nagmasara( gaayanrat) sojhe=gazal
Jiski moseeki (sangeet) jagaa deti hai soye jajbaat..

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