Guzar rahaa hai waqt, kab galey lagaaogey?

by abdbundeli on September 23, 2010, 10:23:30 AM
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Dil-o-jigar mein rawaan huun: mujhey sataaogey?
Rahogey door nazar sey, ki, paas aaogey?

Tark kousar ki, abhi maykadey mein aayaa huun:
Raat taareek hai, shama'a naheen dikhaaogey?

Dil hai beychain: shukra hai, ki, tumney samjhaa to!
Dar pai haazir hun: aaj bhi nahin bulaaogey?

Andleebon ki sadaa sun rahaa hun dahroun sey;
Wasl kee nazm-e-khaas, kab bhalaa sunaaogey?

Tumsey haaraa hun baarahaa, ki, tum raho shaidaa;
Ab bhee haaruungaa roz, khush ho, kab haraaogey?

Na sahee eid aaj, ab to roz aayegee:
Guzar rahaa hai waqt, kab galey lagaaogey?

Hujoom-e-chaand-sitaaroun kaa hamsafar huun main:
Nizaam-e-khuld sey bhi dooriyaan banaaogey?

Aatish-e-hijra mein jaltaa hun azal sey, mahboob!
Hashra tak kyaa, 'abd', isee tarah jalaaogey!

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«Reply #1 on: September 23, 2010, 10:43:17 AM »
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Wah kya baat hai Badhiya kalam hai jee aapka ABDji...mast hai... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause


Quote from: abdbundeli on September 23, 2010, 10:23:30 AM
Dil-o-jigar mein rawaan huun: mujhey sataaogey?
Rahogey door nazar sey, ki, paas aaogey?

Tark kousar ki, abhi maykadey mein aayaa huun:
Raat taareek hai, shama'a naheen dikhaaogey?

Dil hai beychain: shukra hai, ki, tumney samjhaa to!
Dar pai haazir hun: aaj bhi nahin bulaaogey?

Andleebon ki sadaa sun rahaa hun dahroun sey;
Wasl kee nazm-e-khaas, kab bhalaa sunaaogey?

Tumsey haaraa hun baarahaa, ki, tum raho shaidaa;
Ab bhee haaruungaa roz, khush ho, kab haraaogey?

Na sahee eid aaj, ab to roz aayegee:
Guzar rahaa hai waqt, kab galey lagaaogey?

Hujoom-e-chaand-sitaaroun kaa hamsafar huun main:
Nizaam-e-khuld sey bhi dooriyaan banaaogey?

Aatish-e-hijra mein jaltaa hun azal sey, mahboob!
Hashra tak kyaa, 'abd', isee tarah jalaaogey!

                       - abd bundeli
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«Reply #2 on: September 23, 2010, 01:01:09 PM »
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Quote from: KOYAL46 on September 23, 2010, 10:43:17 AM
Wah kya baat hai Badhiya kalam hai jee aapka ABDji...mast hai... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Bahut-bahut shukriyah, KOYAL46 ji!

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«Reply #3 on: September 23, 2010, 09:33:44 PM »
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Kya baat hai ABD ......... bhut khoob byan ..
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«Reply #4 on: September 24, 2010, 10:39:07 AM »
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Quote from: neelgold on September 23, 2010, 09:33:44 PM
Kya baat hai ABD ......... bhut khoob byan ..


Bahut-bahut shukriyah, neelgold ji!

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«Reply #5 on: September 24, 2010, 10:50:49 AM »
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Wah wah Abd ji.bahut pyari gazal pesh kiya aapne.heart touching cretion.hats off.excellent icon_salut icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause love9
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«Reply #6 on: September 24, 2010, 10:51:29 AM »
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abd jii dher sari daad~
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«Reply #7 on: September 29, 2010, 05:32:53 AM »
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Quote from: madhuwesh on September 24, 2010, 10:50:49 AM
Wah wah Abd ji.bahut pyari gazal pesh kiya aapne.heart touching cretion.hats off.excellent icon_salut icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause love9

Lots of thanks, Madhu ji!

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«Reply #8 on: September 29, 2010, 05:34:25 AM »
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Quote from: AbhiTamrakar on September 24, 2010, 10:51:29 AM
abd jii dher sari daad~

Dhheir saarey dhanyawaad, Abhi ji!

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«Reply #9 on: September 29, 2010, 05:40:49 AM »
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kitna badhiya end kia hai aapne abd ji iss kalaam ka..mujhe bht achchi lagi last line ji....

ek hi line me chup kara diya jisse shikayat hai use...
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«Reply #10 on: September 29, 2010, 02:27:31 PM »
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Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on September 29, 2010, 05:40:49 AM
kitna badhiya end kia hai aapne abd ji iss kalaam ka..mujhe bht achchi lagi last line ji....

ek hi line me chup kara diya jisse shikayat hai use...

Shukriyah, *KasaK* ji! WOH aapko khoob khush rakhey!

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