"Haal kisko raqam karte ho"

by aaina on September 20, 2009, 09:52:59 AM

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aaina

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Binaa tere ye Eid , Eid kya hogi
khushi mein jaise koi baddua hogi

Mana to lunga dil tera rakhne ko
magr khuda ki qasam ye saza hogi

Kehte hai.n ki qubool hoti hai zaroor
Sachchay dil se jo mangi gyi dua hogi

Tum abhi kisi aahat pe chok utthe ho
bhataki phirti hui wo meri sada hogi

Abbhi abhi ke kisi ne jaise mujko chuaa
tumhaari yaad mai lipti hui saba hogi

haal kisko raqam karte ho aslam sahab
wo dil ki har ek dhakan se aashna hogi

raqam karna=likhna(tehreer)


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madhuwesh

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Re: "Haal kisko raqam karte ho"

«Reply #1 on: September 20, 2009, 10:07:58 AM »

Wah really touching n beautiful gazal Aslam ji.bahut acha likha aapne,excellent icon_thumleft


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Roja

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Re: "Haal kisko raqam karte ho"

«Reply #2 on: September 20, 2009, 12:34:17 PM »

Bahut khoob Aslam ji


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deepika_divya

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Re: "Haal kisko raqam karte ho"

«Reply #3 on: September 20, 2009, 03:12:39 PM »

Waah waah Aslam ji.. Bahoot bahoot Khoob !.. bahoot hi khubsoorat Ghazal likhi hai. Bahoot Khoob!


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Talat

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Re: "Haal kisko raqam karte ho"

«Reply #4 on: September 20, 2009, 08:50:40 PM »

Aslam Ji, bohot khoobsurat ghazal hai..... Very nicely written Clapping Smiley

Humari to yahi dua hai ki aap ki duaain qubool hon aur aapki har Eid, har khushi mukammal ho jaaye, ameen !


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shayara

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Re: "Haal kisko raqam karte ho"

«Reply #5 on: September 22, 2009, 05:02:35 PM »

Bohot Khoob Aaina ji


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Re: "Haal kisko raqam karte ho"

«Reply #6 on: October 04, 2009, 02:38:01 PM »

bahut Bahut Khoob Aslam Ji..

Bahut Khoobsurat Ghazal Pesh Ki hai Aapne..


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riyaz106

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Re: "Haal kisko raqam karte ho"

«Reply #7 on: May 11, 2010, 10:08:32 AM »

Wah wah Aslam Sb. kya khoob likha hai aapne. Adhuri eid ka dard bahot khoob bayaan kiya aapne.


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aaina

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Re: "Haal kisko raqam karte ho"

«Reply #8 on: May 12, 2010, 06:00:01 AM »

Riyaz sahab kaafi puraani post uper lai aaye...thnxxx
Mashuwesh, Roja, Sophi, Talat, Shayara jii, Khwaish, Riyaz sahab, Shihab aap sbhi ka bhut bhut shukriya.

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