Haal-e-dil met poucheyeh

by faisal314 on June 17, 2005, 04:29:19 AM
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Haal-e-dil met poucheyeh, Haal-e-dil met poucheyeh
zakhm na kuraydeyeh,Haal-e-dil met poucheyeh
Ab wo na raha hay apna bus itna jaan lejeyeh,
shiraret na aur koi soujeyeh, Haal-e-dil met poucheyeh.
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«Reply #1 on: June 17, 2005, 02:25:50 PM »
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Haal-E-Dil unko Sunaana Tha, Sunaya Naa Gaya
Jo Jubaan Par mujhe Laana Tha, Woh Laya na Gaya.  [N/M]

Baad Muddat ke yeh Khayaal Aaya Hai,
Dard-E-Dil Unse Chupaana Tha, Chupaaya na Gaya,

Kiase Dabate hai Ghame-E-Judai ko, Mat poucheyeh
Haal-e-dil mat poucheyeh.
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«Reply #2 on: June 17, 2005, 11:09:35 PM »
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Is it your own kelam??
Or just got from literature??/
The one i posted is mine.
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«Reply #3 on: June 18, 2005, 10:09:18 AM »
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Hi Faisal

First Two Lines are from a song so I Marked it as [N/M] i.e. Not Mine
Rest is mine own

But I know yours was orignal and Really encouraged me to right something related to it.

BTW How was my try?
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