haal-e-dil,,,,,,ghazal,,,,,,jeet jainam

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logo,n ne akser dhokhe  hi  diye  hain,
khushi ke badle  aansu  hi  diye  hain,

kis kis ko  bataate  haal-e-dil  apna,
tanhai  main  zakhm khud  hi siye hain,

shab-e-firaaq  dhadkan  ruk  see gayi,
ab zahar hijar  ka  khud hi  piye hain,

din be din mari jafaaa  itni badhi ke,
alam-e-tanhai-e-qafas  main  jiye hain,

kaise dhondke laaye  sangdil  sanam ko,
uske naqsh-e-qadam sare mitt  gaye hain,

dar ba dar hua zeest jo kabhi abaad tha,
gaye jis bhi mahfil  aansu hi  piye hain,
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«Reply #1 on: December 01, 2014, 05:37:13 PM »
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wah bahut khoob
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«Reply #2 on: December 01, 2014, 06:31:42 PM »
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«Reply #3 on: December 01, 2014, 06:43:40 PM »
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waah waah bahut khoob.
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«Reply #4 on: December 02, 2014, 05:24:28 AM »
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Quote from: jeet jainam on December 01, 2014, 09:51:52 AM
logo.N Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile ne aksar   dhokhe  hi  diye  hain Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile,
khushi ke badle  aansu  hi  diye  hain Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile,

kis kis ko  bataate  haal-e-dil  apna,
tanhai  main  zakhm khud  hi siye hain,

shab-e-firaaq  dhadkan  ruk  see gayi,
ab zahar hijar  ka  khud hi  piye hain Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile,

din be din mari  icon_scratch icon_scratch :-?jafaaa  itni badhi ke,
alam-e-tanhai-e-qafas  main  jiye hain Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile,

kaise dhondke laaye  sangdil  sanam ko,
uske naqsh-e-qadam sare mitt  gaye hain,

 icon_scratch icon_scratch icon_scratch icon_scratch icon_scratch icon_scratch icon_scratch
dar ba dar Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile :)hua zeest jo kabhi abaad tha,
gaye jis bhi mahfil  aansu hi  piye hain,












Boss!!!!!!!

acha likha hai per apnee urdu ko aap sahee kare.N .aur correct spelling aur word likhe.N toh kalaam me.N lazzat aaye gee.jaise aap doosro.N ko unkee ghaltee bataa te ho


 Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile

  fizza nahin fizaa hota hai

  waffa nahin wafaa yaa vafaa hota hai
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«Reply #5 on: December 02, 2014, 06:46:21 AM »
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shukriya janaab qalb ji,urdu aati kaha hain,hame apsab jo likhte hai wahi sikhta hu,jaisa ap likhenge vase hi urdu sikhunga na,jaldi main likhi thi bus par bethey huye,modify karne ka waqt nahi mila
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wah wah kya bat hai
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Wah Jeet Saheb, wah wah

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