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haal-e-dil,,,,,,ghazal,,,,,,jeet jainam

by jeet jainam on December 01, 2014, 09:51:52 AM

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logo,n ne akser dhokhe hi diye hain,
khushi ke badle aansu hi diye hain,

kis kis ko bataate haal-e-dil apna,
tanhai main zakhm khud hi siye hain,

shab-e-firaaq dhadkan ruk see gayi,
ab zahar hijar ka khud hi piye hain,

din be din mari jafaaa itni badhi ke,
alam-e-tanhai-e-qafas main jiye hain,

kaise dhondke laaye sangdil sanam ko,
uske naqsh-e-qadam sare mitt gaye hain,

dar ba dar hua zeest jo kabhi abaad tha,
gaye jis bhi mahfil aansu hi piye hain,


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Re: haal-e-dil,,,,,,ghazal,,,,,,jeet jainam

«Reply #1 on: December 01, 2014, 05:37:13 PM »

wah bahut khoob


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Re: haal-e-dil,,,,,,ghazal,,,,,,jeet jainam

«Reply #2 on: December 01, 2014, 06:31:42 PM »

Shukriya kumar ji


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Re: haal-e-dil,,,,,,ghazal,,,,,,jeet jainam

«Reply #3 on: December 01, 2014, 06:43:40 PM »

waah waah bahut khoob.


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Re: haal-e-dil,,,,,,ghazal,,,,,,jeet jainam

«Reply #4 on: December 02, 2014, 05:24:28 AM »

Quote from: jeet jainam on December 01, 2014, 09:51:52 AM

logo.N ne aksar dhokhe hi diye hain ,
khushi ke badle aansu hi diye hain ,

kis kis ko bataate haal-e-dil apna,
tanhai main zakhm khud hi siye hain,

shab-e-firaaq dhadkan ruk see gayi,
ab zahar hijar ka khud hi piye hain ,

din be din mari :-?jafaaa itni badhi ke,
alam-e-tanhai-e-qafas main jiye hain ,

kaise dhondke laaye sangdil sanam ko,
uske naqsh-e-qadam sare mitt gaye hain,

dar ba dar :)hua zeest jo kabhi abaad tha,
gaye jis bhi mahfil aansu hi piye hain,

Boss!!!!!!!

acha likha hai per apnee urdu ko aap sahee kare.N .aur correct spelling aur word likhe.N toh kalaam me.N lazzat aaye gee.jaise aap doosro.N ko unkee ghaltee bataa te ho

Usual Smile

fizza nahin fizaa hota hai

waffa nahin wafaa yaa vafaa hota hai


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Re: haal-e-dil,,,,,,ghazal,,,,,,jeet jainam

«Reply #5 on: December 02, 2014, 06:46:21 AM »

shukriya janaab qalb ji,urdu aati kaha hain,hame apsab jo likhte hai wahi sikhta hu,jaisa ap likhenge vase hi urdu sikhunga na,jaldi main likhi thi bus par bethey huye,modify karne ka waqt nahi mila