Haaya, fir sailaab ney beyghar kiye hain anginat! (हाय , फिर सैलाब ने बेघर किये हैं अनगिनत!):Ghazals

abdbundeli

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Mein azal sey jaantaa hoon, apney chaarahsaaz ko!
Kyoun na pahichaanungaa fir, uskee aham aawaaz ko?

Dooriyaan hain beech mein itneen, ki, jaisey hon judaa;
Fir bhee, itnee qaraabat hai: kyaa kahoon is raaz ko?

Shaam jaatee, raat aatee roz: tum kab aaougey?
Zindagee thhahree huyee hai fir usee aagaaz ko!

Aasmaan mein khojatey phiratey parindey yuun kisey?
Is tarah, kyaa wo tarah deytey hain teerandaaz ko?

Go, safeeney mein, bahar ko paar kar leytey hain log;
Deykhiyegaa aaj hotey garq, magar, jahaaz ko!

Kahaan, leykar saath mujhko, chal diye ho arsh mein?
Aur kab tak, rakhogey jaaree isee parwaaz ko?

Haaya, fir sailaab ney beyghar kiye hain anginat:
Kosiyegaa kab talak yuun hee habeeb nawaaz ko?

Har shafaq mein muskuraataa paa rahaa hun mein, 'abd';
Harkat-e-dil mein nihaan paataa hun uskey saaz ko!!

- abd bundeli

मैं अज़ल से जानता हूँ , अपने चारासाज़ को !
क्योँ न पहिचानूँगा फिर , उसकी अहम आवाज़ को ?

दूरियां हैं बीच में इतनीं , कि , जैसे हों जुदा ;
फिर भी , इतनी क़राबत है : क्या कहूं इस राज़ को ?

शाम जाती , रात आती रोज़ : तुम कब आओगे ?
ज़िंदगी ठहरी हुयी है फिर उसी आगाज़ को !

आस्मां में खोजते फिरते परिंदे यूं किसे ?
इस तरह , क्या वो तरह देते हैं तीरंदाज़ को ?

गो , सफीने में , बहर को पार कर लेते हैं लोग ;
देखिएगा आज होते गर्क , मगर , जहाज़ को !

कहाँ , लेकर साथ मुझको , चल दिए हो अर्श में ?
और कब तक , रखोगे जारी इसी परवाज़ को ?

हाय , फिर सैलाब ने बेघर किये हैं अनगिनत :
कोसियेगा कब तलक यूं ही हबीब नवाज़ को ?

हर शफक में मुस्कुराता पा रहा हूँ मैं , 'अबद ';
हरकते दिल में निहां पाटा हूँ उसके साज़ को !!

- अबद बुन्देली


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ParwaaZ

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Re: Haaya, fir sailaab ney beyghar kiye hain anginat! (हाय , फिर सैलाब ने बेघर किये हैं अनगिनत

«Reply #1 on: September 10, 2010, 05:06:41 PM »

Quote from: abdbundeli on September 10, 2010, 03:40:57 PM

Mein azal sey jaantaa hoon, apney chaarahsaaz ko!
Kyoun na pahichaanungaa fir, uskee aham aawaaz ko?

Matla behad achcha hai daad Janab..

Dooriyaan hain beech mein itneen, ki, jaisey hon judaa;
Fir bhee, itnee qaraabat hai: kyaa kahoon is raaz ko?

Yehi to ishk hai jee.... Aur kia kaheN

Shaam jaatee, raat aatee roz: tum kab aaougey?
Zindagee thhahree huyee hai fir usee aagaaz ko!

Sher achcha laga daad... Agar Shayari ke itebaar se dekhen to aapne secound micre meiN "USEE" istemaal kiya hai to sher meiN kis aagaaz se aap muraad hai iski wazahat nahi huyi....

Aasmaan mein khojatey phiratey parindey yuun kisey?
Is tarah, kyaa wo tarah deytey hain teerandaaz ko?

Sher ka khayaal achcha hai... pash'manzar khoob banta hai iska... Par yahaaN dusre misre meiN aayeN donoN "TaraH" se sher khul nahi paya... Mazarrat chahate hai...

Go, safeeney mein, bahar ko paar kar leytey hain log;
Deykhiyegaa aaj hotey garq, magar, jahaaz ko!

Is sher ki wazahat chaheNge... Rabt sahiN nahi lag rahi hai hume yahaaN :S

Kahaan, leykar saath mujhko, chal diye ho arsh mein?
Aur kab tak, rakhogey jaaree isee parwaaz ko?

Kia baat hai daad ..... behad umdaa:)

Haaya, fir sailaab ney beyghar kiye hain anginat:
Kosiyegaa kab talak yuun hee habeeb nawaaz ko?

Bahut umdaa janab Daad.... behad khoob dshr hai..

Har shafaq mein muskuraataa paa rahaa hun mein, 'abd';
Harkat-e-dil mein nihaan paataa hun uskey saaz ko!!

Maqta bahut umdaa raha janab Daad

- अबद बुन्देली

Abd Bundeli Sahab ..... Mazarrat chahte hai... Hum aapki is kalaam ke kuchh sher samjh nahi paye... Shayad humari kam akhali hai....

Is umdaa kaawish per daad kabool kijiye....
Likhate rahiye.....
Khush O Aabaad rahiye.....
Khuda hafez.......


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abdbundeli

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Re: Haaya, fir sailaab ney beyghar kiye hain anginat! (हाय , फिर सैलाब ने बेघर किये हैं अनगिनत

«Reply #2 on: September 11, 2010, 03:26:47 AM »

Quote from: ParwaaZ on September 10, 2010, 05:06:41 PM

Abd Sahab Aadaab!

Kaise hai Janab..... ummid hai bakhairiyat hai....
Aapki aur Aik nayi gazal itne jaldi padhne mil gayiN dekh kar khushi ho rahi hai hume....

Chaliye aapki kalaam per hi aate hai...

Abd Bundeli Sahab ..... Mazarrat chahte hai... Hum aapki is kalaam ke kuchh sher samjh nahi paye... Shayad humari kam akhali hai....

Is umdaa kaawish per daad kabool kijiye....
Likhate rahiye.....
Khush O Aabaad rahiye.....
Khuda hafez.......

ParwaaZ ji, lots of thanks! Aap kee baaton kee gahraayee dilee sukoon deytee hai! Gazal key har sher kaa unwaan pooree tarah alag bhee ho saktaa hai, aur ziyaadahtar aisaa hi hotaa bhi hai! Agar sabhee asha'ar kaa unwaan aik hee ho to fir usey 'qata'ah' yaa 'qitaa' naam diyaa jaataa hai!

Sher mein pahlee 'tarah' kaa ma'aanee hai 'prakaar' (Hindi), jab ki, doosaree 'tarah' kaa ma'aanee hai 'taalnaa / taal deynaa' yaa 'jhagdey ko badhhney na deynaa'.

'Go, safeeney mein, bahar ko paar kar leytey hain log;
Deykhiyegaa aaj hotey garq, magar, jahaaz ko!'

Yahaan 'safeeney' sey 'chhotee naaw' wa 'jahaaz' sey 'bahut badee naaw' kee taraf isaarah kiyaa gayaa hai! Yaani, log to 'chhotee naaw' sey bhi 'samudra' paar kar leytey hain; par aaj 'jahaaz' bhee doob rahey hain! Sailaab ney Pakistan key 20% hissey ko qareeb aik maheeney sey gahrey paanee mein dubaaye rakhaa hai! Bharat mein bhi oonchey pathhaar par basey 'LEH' ko, pahaad bhi 'sailaab' sey naheen bachaa paaye!
EID MUBARAK HO!
- abd bundeli


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