Hai andheyraa, shama'a hee jalaa jaaiye!

by abdbundeli on September 04, 2012, 01:18:57 PM
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Door sey hi, kharhey yuun na muskaaiye!
Maajaraa-e-jigar hai: idhar aaiye!!

Din guzartaa hai yuun, raat aatee hai yuun:
Husn sey apney, yeh ghar sajaa jaaiye!!

Kyoun jalaatee hain shahnaaiyaan raat mein?
Hai andheyraa, shama'a hee jalaa jaaiye!

Raabtaa bhee zarooree hai islaah ko!
Kam-sey-kam aaj tashreef to laaiye!!

Main jahaan huun, waheen maykadah hai, 'abd',
Arq-e-shabnam hai yeh, nosh farmaaiye!

               - abd bundeli
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«Reply #1 on: September 04, 2012, 02:35:20 PM »
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«Reply #2 on: September 04, 2012, 03:54:49 PM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on September 04, 2012, 01:18:57 PM
Door sey hi, kharhey yuun na muskaaiye!
Maajaraa-e-jigar hai: idhar aaiye!!

Din guzartaa hai yuun, raat aatee hai yuun:
Husn sey apney, yeh ghar sajaa jaaiye!!

Kyoun jalaatee hain shahnaaiyaan raat mein?
Hai andheyraa, shama'a hee jalaa jaaiye!

Raabtaa bhee zarooree hai islaah ko!
Kam-sey-kam aaj tashreef to laaiye!!

Main jahaan huun, waheen maykadah hai, 'abd',
Arq-e-shabnam hai yeh, nosh farmaaiye! Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard

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gud----ABD
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«Reply #3 on: September 04, 2012, 05:46:31 PM »
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waah ...bohat khoob....
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«Reply #4 on: September 04, 2012, 06:08:03 PM »
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ABD Jee Aadaab!


Bahut khoob janab... kia roomani mizaaz meiN kalaam kahi
hai waaH behad khoob... Usual Smile

Sabhi ashaar khoob rahe... Matla aur maqta khushusan hume
behad khoob laga... Usual Smile

Humari dheroN daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye..

Likhate rahiye.. aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rhaiye...
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile                   
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«Reply #5 on: September 04, 2012, 06:13:18 PM »
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Bahut khoob ABD sir
ye andaaz bhi khoob raha..
shaandaar ghazal.. Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: September 05, 2012, 12:35:55 AM »
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very nice ghazal abd bundeli jee
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«Reply #7 on: September 05, 2012, 02:39:16 AM »
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«Reply #8 on: September 05, 2012, 05:26:44 AM »
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Quote from: sksaini4 on September 04, 2012, 02:35:20 PM
bahut khoob

Shukriyah, Saini ji!
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«Reply #9 on: September 05, 2012, 05:27:59 AM »
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Quote from: khamosh_aawaaz on September 04, 2012, 03:54:49 PM
gud----ABD

Thanks, Khamosh!
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«Reply #10 on: September 05, 2012, 05:28:48 AM »
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Quote from: laaiba on September 04, 2012, 05:46:31 PM
waah ...bohat khoob....

Shukriyah, 'laaiba' ji!
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«Reply #11 on: September 05, 2012, 05:31:11 AM »
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Quote from: ParwaaZ on September 04, 2012, 06:08:03 PM
ABD Jee Aadaab!


Bahut khoob janab... kia roomani mizaaz meiN kalaam kahi
hai waaH behad khoob... Usual Smile

Sabhi ashaar khoob rahe... Matla aur maqta khushusan hume
behad khoob laga... Usual Smile

Humari dheroN daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye..

Likhate rahiye.. aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rhaiye...
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile                   


Namaskaar! Shukriyah, 'ParwaaZ' ji! Bahut-bahut shukriyah!
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Quote from: mkv on September 04, 2012, 06:13:18 PM
Bahut khoob ABD sir
ye andaaz bhi khoob raha..
shaandaar ghazal.. Applause Applause

Shukriyah, Mukesh ji! Bahut-bahut shukriyah!
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«Reply #13 on: September 05, 2012, 05:49:37 AM »
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Quote from: suman59 on September 05, 2012, 12:35:55 AM
very nice ghazal abd bundeli jee

Shukriyah, Suman ji! Bahut-bahut shukriyah!
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Quote from: nandbahu on September 05, 2012, 02:39:16 AM
bahut khoob

Bahut-bahut shukriyah, 'nandbahu' ji !
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