Hai Behtar Yahi Ab Ke

by aaina on June 15, 2010, 10:54:05 PM

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khayaaloN se apne baghawat karo
kabhi hamse yun bhi muhabbat karo

panahoN mai apni chupa kar hame
zamaane se saare raqaabat karo

kabhi apne kandhe pe zulfe giraa
karo qatl aur ik inayaat karo

hamaari nigaho me jo hai chupi
agar hai shararat ,wazahat karo

saRe raah yuN tokna hai ghalat
akele bitha kar nasihat karo

hai behtar yehi ab to aslam miyaaN
ke ab khatm shikwe shikayat karo

aslam


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Re: Hai Behtar Yahi Ab Ke

«Reply #1 on: June 15, 2010, 11:43:50 PM »

aslam bhai bahot hiiiiii umda kalaam hai,i am realy speechless ,aghaz se anjaam tak ek soroor ho ba ho ..mein ne kai baar pardh dala aapki yeh nayaab ghazal..wah wah aur wah


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Re: Hai Behtar Yahi Ab Ke

«Reply #2 on: June 16, 2010, 03:22:42 AM »

Quote from: aaina on June 15, 2010, 10:54:05 PM

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Re: Hai Behtar Yahi Ab Ke

«Reply #3 on: June 16, 2010, 03:28:16 AM »

Kamaal ki ghazal hai aapki ye Aslam bhai. Har lihaz se mukammal aur lutfandoz. Har she'r lajawab. Hazaro daad hazir hain.


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Re: Hai Behtar Yahi Ab Ke

«Reply #4 on: June 16, 2010, 06:43:33 AM »

wah wah zaberdust waqaee khubsoorat ghazal likhi ap nay Aslam Mian
dad wasool karain


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Re: Hai Behtar Yahi Ab Ke

«Reply #5 on: June 16, 2010, 09:32:50 AM »

wah aslam bhai kya qoob ghazal kahi hai , hazaro dad ,

yun sare rah tokna hai galath ,
akele bitha kar nasihat karo ,,

wah wah kya riwayati sher sher hai bhai ,,dil chuta hai ,,

allah apko hamesha khush rakhe

duwa go

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Re: Hai Behtar Yahi Ab Ke

«Reply #6 on: June 16, 2010, 09:42:53 AM »

Waah waah Waah..

bahut Bahut Khoob Aslam Bhai..Bahut Ache


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Re: Hai Behtar Yahi Ab Ke

«Reply #7 on: June 16, 2010, 10:08:52 AM »

Wah Aslam Saheb! Wah kya kalaam hai, bhai maza aa gaya paRhkar. Aik murassa, mukammal peshkash hai. HazaaroN daad qubul kijiye.

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Re: Hai Behtar Yahi Ab Ke

«Reply #8 on: June 17, 2010, 07:02:19 AM »

naaaaice one aslam sb... Applause


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Re: Hai Behtar Yahi Ab Ke

«Reply #9 on: June 17, 2010, 07:10:29 AM »

Aslam bhai bahot umda ghazal kahi hai aapne. Har sher mukammal aur murassa hai. Hazaron daad hazir hain.


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Re: Hai Behtar Yahi Ab Ke

«Reply #10 on: June 23, 2010, 04:06:58 PM »

Quote from: nazar ghouri on June 15, 2010, 11:43:50 PM

aslam bhai bahot hiiiiii umda kalaam hai,i am realy speechless ,aghaz se anjaam tak ek soroor ho ba ho ..mein ne kai baar pardh dala aapki yeh nayaab ghazal..wah wah aur wah

Bhut bhut shurkya Nazar sahab yuN hi apni mohabbatoN se nawaazte rahiye

aslam