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HameN taqdeer ne bhi kaise kaise din dikhaae haiN
Magar sab kuch bhula har haal meN ham Muskuraae haiN
Hamara kaam hai sach se unheN aagaah karne ka
HameN parwaah naa iski agar wo khaar khaae haiN
Liye fir se nai kashti samandar cheerne niklay
NahiN parwaah maazi meN safeene gar dubaae haiN
HameN ladne ka maidaaN meN hai jazba ab bhi utna hi
Agarchay jang meN hamne musalsal maat khaae haiN
HaiN barsoN se shajar apne jo apni jaa pe bas qaayam
Diye jhakjhor toofaaN ne inheN jad tak hilaae haiN
Nadi jab khatm hoti hai samander sokh leta hai
Mila kar khud meN nadiyoN ko samander ne bahaae haiN
Safar ka falsafa poocho safar ke iss musaafir se
Mitaai khwahish-e-manzil tabhi manzil ko paae haiN
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«Reply #2 on: December 17, 2013, 05:42:55 AM » |
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Safar ka falsafa poocho safar ke iss musaafir se Mitaai khwahish-e-manzil tabhi manzil ko paae haiN  Waah bahut khoob Sir bahut bahut shukriya ghazal pe waqt aur apne beshqeemati comments dene ka. |
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sksaini4
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«Reply #3 on: December 17, 2013, 08:33:40 AM » |
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waah waah bahut khoob ek rau bhee
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«Reply #4 on: December 17, 2013, 09:27:46 AM » |
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«Reply #5 on: December 17, 2013, 09:32:35 AM » |
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Bahut khoob,iftakhar sb. Teesra aur akhri sher bahut achha laga.
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«Reply #7 on: December 17, 2013, 01:07:51 PM » |
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Good!!
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«Reply #8 on: December 17, 2013, 01:08:56 PM » |
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«Reply #9 on: December 17, 2013, 02:10:19 PM » |
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WAAH WAAH WAAH....
Kis sher ki badaai karun or kise chhod duN ...saare sher ek se badhkar ek hain....
Maza aa gaya Iftakhar Ji..Bahut bahut khoob..Umda peshkash..
Dheron Daad....
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«Reply #10 on: December 17, 2013, 02:32:39 PM » |
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RAJAN KONDAL
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«Reply #11 on: December 17, 2013, 02:45:45 PM » |
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HameN taqdeer ne bhi kaise kaise din dikhaae haiN
Magar sab kuch bhula har haal meN ham Muskuraae haiN
Hamara kaam hai sach se unheN aagaah karne ka
HameN parwaah naa iski agar wo khaar khaae haiN
Liye fir se nai kashti samandar cheerne niklay
NahiN parwaah maazi meN safeene gar dubaae haiN
HameN ladne ka maidaaN meN hai jazba ab bhi utna hi
Agarchay jang meN hamne musalsal maat khaae haiN
HaiN barsoN se shajar apne jo apni jaa pe bas qaayam
Diye jhakjhor toofaaN ne inheN jad tak hilaae haiN
Nadi jab khatm hoti hai samander sokh leta hai
Mila kar khud meN nadiyoN ko samander ne bahaae haiN
Safar ka falsafa poocho safar ke iss musaafir se
Mitaai khwahish-e-manzil tabhi manzil ko paae haiN
Bhut umda ghazal likhi hai Iftakhar ji |
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«Reply #12 on: December 17, 2013, 03:28:02 PM » |
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Hamara kaam hai sach se unheN aagaah karne ka HameN parwaah naa iski agar wo khaar khaae haiN Bahut Khub Iftikhar Sahab  Shad o Aabaad Rahiye Shihab |
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«Reply #14 on: December 17, 2013, 08:40:29 PM » |
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Hamara kaam hai sach se unheN aagaah karne ka
HameN parwaah naa iski agar wo khaar khaae haiN
Bahut badhiya Iftakhar bhai
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