HAI NAZAR JISKI PATTE -PATTE PAR ............MKV -Panna 2:Ghazals

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«Reply #15 on: February 16, 2013, 10:08:48 AM »

Quote from: mkv on February 16, 2013, 02:44:11 AM

Bewafaaee ki baat kee usne
aur judaaee ki baat kee usne

Pyaar ko bhoolkar mere usne
Bas ladaaee ki baat kee usne

Maa ko aawaaz ab naheeN deta
Bas lugaai ki baat kee usne

Shauq rakhta hai voh mithai ka
rasmalaaee ki baat kee usne

Shayri hai abhee meri kacchee
Rahnumaayee ki baat kee usne

Muflisee rasm par padee bharee
muNhdikhaaee ki baat kee usne

Meri betee vidaa nahee hogee
Ghar jamaai ki baat kee usne

Hai nazar jiski patte- patte par
Us khudaaee ki baat kee usne

Kholkar dil ‘mukesh’ hai tujhse
Jaghasaaee ki baat kee usne

I dedicate this ghazal to Hasan sir as a Birthday gift to him.

very nice mukesh ji
lajawaab karidya hai,,,mindblowing
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«Reply #16 on: February 16, 2013, 10:22:32 AM »


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«Reply #17 on: February 16, 2013, 12:24:52 PM »

Quote from: anmolarora on February 16, 2013, 03:41:29 AM

chalo ik RAU hi de dayte hai aap ko

Thanks anmol..


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«Reply #18 on: February 16, 2013, 01:17:25 PM »

MKV Jee Aadaab!

Kia baat hai janab, achcha dedication hai...
Badi purasar aur umdaa kalaam kahi hai aapne.... chhoti bher meiN
kafi asardaar ashaar rahe....

Sabhi ashaar behad umda rahe janab, is khoobsurat aur umdaa kalaam
par humari hazaaroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye...
Shaad o aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez...

Quote from: mkv on February 16, 2013, 02:44:11 AM

Maa ko aawaaz ab naheeN deta
Bas lugaai ki baat kee usne

Muflisee rasm par padee bharee
muNhdikhaaee ki baat kee usne

I dedicate this ghazal to Hasan sir as a Birthday gift to him.

Aur In ashaaroN ke kia kahne janab... aik aalaa kism ke
ashar hai yeH behad gazab hazaaroN dili daad O mubbarakbad khususan in
ashaaroN ke liye....


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Re: HAI NAZAR JISKI PATTE -PATTE PAR ............MKV

«Reply #19 on: February 16, 2013, 01:40:26 PM »

boht khub mukesh ji boht umda uphar diya hai


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«Reply #20 on: February 16, 2013, 02:01:02 PM »

boht khub mukesh ji boht umda uphar diya hai


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«Reply #21 on: February 17, 2013, 02:43:50 AM »

VERY GOOD


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«Reply #22 on: February 17, 2013, 03:50:53 AM »

bahut khoob


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«Reply #23 on: February 17, 2013, 06:10:49 AM »

Quote from: sksaini4 on February 16, 2013, 04:09:54 AM

priy mukesh isse umdaa taufaa ek ghazal go shaayar kaa ek ghazal go shaayar ke liye naheen ho saktaa ab tak kee sabse behatreen ghazal main dil kee gahraaiyon se tumhe saadhuwaad detaa hoon rau ke alaawaa aur koi bhee puruskaar aaj mere pass hotaa to tum par dilo jaan se qurbaan kar detaa hameshaa aage badhte raho mujhe lagaa hai ki aaj ye guru daksinaa hai

saccha inaam to aapka pyar aur asheerwaad hai..jo hamesha mere saath rahega..
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«Reply #25 on: February 18, 2013, 04:44:31 AM »

bahut khoob


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«Reply #26 on: February 19, 2013, 02:27:41 AM »

Quote from: Aarish on February 16, 2013, 04:18:16 AM

wah wah wah umda , lajwab, bohut khoob, mukammal ghazal kahi mukesh bhai sabhi ashaar achche haiN DAAAD qubool kareN, aur meri rtaraf se bhi hasan sir ko janamdin din hardik shubhkamnayen, khuda kare wo yuNhi hamesha hamari rehnumai karte raheN....

thanks aarish bhai


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«Reply #27 on: February 19, 2013, 03:33:21 AM »

Waah waah waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah Mukesh bhai, behad khoob, maza aa gaya padh kar, aur khaas taur pe- Baslugaai, Uss Khudaai aur MuNhdikhaai waale she'r kaafi achhe lage. DheroN daad aur mubarakbaad.


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«Reply #28 on: February 26, 2013, 11:51:39 AM »

Quote from: aqsh on February 16, 2013, 04:21:44 AM

Bahut bahut mubarak ho Mukesh ji. Bahut bahut bahut hi khoob likha hai aapne. har sher khoob rahe.Har ek sher bahut gehraai liye hue hai. Hamari dili mubarakbad ko qubool kijiyega.

Wish you a many happy returns of the day Hasan ji

Thanks a lot


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«Reply #29 on: February 27, 2013, 10:53:16 AM »

Quote from: amit_prakash_meet on February 16, 2013, 05:14:17 AM

बहुत ही खूब अन्दाज़ है आपका मुकेश जी ढेरों दाद और दिली मुबारकबाद
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thanks amit jee


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