halaat ae chaman,,,ghazal,,jeet jainam saini

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halaat ae chaman main tabaahi hone lagee,
sabaa kee  fizaao,n se judaai hone lagee,

aadam hee aadam ko marne lagaa hai jabse,
chaar soo be-rahami se ladaai hone lagee,

yah kaisaa bhed-bhaao failaa samaaz main,
apno,n kee apno,n sey ruswaai hone lagee,

apni ghod main apno,n kee laash dekh kar,
dil main  aaghosh ae tanhaai  hone lagee,

zaalim huaa aadam itna be-raham huaa kee,
bachiyo,n ki mout sang vidaai hone lagee,

jab bhee sach bolna chahaa jeet ne sabko,
zamaane main yuh  jagg hasaai hone lagee,
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«Reply #1 on: July 08, 2015, 05:01:06 AM »
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«Reply #2 on: July 08, 2015, 05:01:41 AM »
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halaat ae chaman main tabaahi hone lagee,
sabaa kee  fizaao,n se judaai hone lagee,

aadam hee aadam ko marne lagaa hai jabse,
chaar soo be-rahami se ladaai hone lagee,

yah kaisaa bhed-bhaao failaa samaaz main,
apno,n kee apno,n sey ruswaai hone lagee,

apni ghod main apno,n kee laash dekh kar,
dil main  aaghosh ae tanhaai  hone lagee,

zaalim huaa aadam itna be-raham huaa kee,
bachiyo,n ki mout sang vidaai hone lagee,

jab bhee sach bolna chahaa jeet ne sabko,
zamaane main yuh  jagg hasaai hone lagee,



Wow..... nice thoughts ..... keep it up .... all the best .... Raqeeb Lucknowi
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SHUKRIYA SAINI SIR JI
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halaat ae chaman main tabaahi hone lagee,
sabaa kee  fizaao,n se judaai hone lagee,

aadam hee aadam ko marne lagaa hai jabse,
chaar soo be-rahami se ladaai hone lagee,

yah kaisaa bhed-bhaao failaa samaaz main,
apno,n kee apno,n sey ruswaai hone lagee,

apni ghod main apno,n kee laash dekh kar,
dil main  aaghosh ae tanhaai  hone lagee,

zaalim huaa aadam itna be-raham huaa kee,
bachiyo,n ki mout sang vidaai hone lagee,

jab bhee sach bolna chahaa jeet ne sabko,
zamaane main yuh  jagg hasaai hone lagee,




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