Ham aaj bhi uljhey hain, safeid-o-siyaah mein!

by abdbundeli on March 20, 2012, 08:44:51 AM
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Miltey hain roz ajnabee insaan raah mein!
Ham aaj bhi uljhey hain, safeid-o-siyaah mein!!

Beydam nahin huaa hun, abhi dour-e-hosh huun:
Kuchh to talaash keejiye meyree karaah mein!

Naadaan tifl, zalzaloun mein, ho rahey halaak:
Jaayegaa koun, rahmat-e-rab kee panaah mein?

Kab tak rawaan na hogaa hasin qaafilah-e-zeest?
Kab tak qayaam hogaa isee sairgaah mein?

Jaaree hai parindon ki jawon tak rawaangee:
Lagtaa hai, zar hi zar hai har taraf sabaah mein!

Zaahir hai, meyrey dost, tumhain kyoun sataaungaa?
Kahtey hain log, 'Khuld ki taaqat hai aah mein!'

Jab tum pilaa rahey ho shab-o-roz dam badam;
Main kyoun khatuungaa sharbat-e-kousar ki chaah mein!

Ab kyaa naqaab, kyaa hijaab, 'naa-nukar' bhi kyaa?
Koyee nahin hai apney siwaa khwaabgaah mein?

Kartee hai ataa zouq-e-baqaa roz saaqiyah!
Shaamil hun muddaton sey haqeeqee gunaah mein!!

Taareekiyaan ayaan hain, kareyngey naqaab kyaa?
Ab aa gayaa hai husn-e-sanam ittizaah mein!

Zad mein meyrey uyoon key rah kar to deykhiye;
Ta'areef-e-tabassum hai nihaan waah-waah mein?

Milnaa hai 'wo', supurd-e-khaak rah hazaar saal?
Naaseyha, alam-e-dahar hai teyree salaah mein!

Dahroun sey dafn huun, qayaam-e-khulub huun, yahaan!
Dour-e-khizaan hai ba'ad-e-hashra is nikaah mein?

Seenon mein rawaan hain ta'aanukon ki dharhkaneyn:
Aaye na, kaash, ab khumaar iftiraah mein!

Hotaa hai wahee door, jo qareeb-e-jigar ho!
Achchhaa hai, 'abd', gair hain meyree nigaah mein!!

                   - abd bundeli
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«Reply #1 on: March 20, 2012, 08:51:32 AM »
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abd bhai jwaab naheen hai aapkee is ghazal kaa zindaabaad zindaabaad.bahut bahut mubarak ho
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«Reply #2 on: March 20, 2012, 08:51:41 AM »
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Very VERy nice creation Abd ji  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #3 on: March 20, 2012, 09:23:17 AM »
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Bahut khoob,Janaab.Kya khoob kalaam ata kiya hai.Tahe dil se mashkoor hoon.
Quote from: abdbundeli on March 20, 2012, 08:44:51 AM

Naadaan tifl, zalzaloun mein, ho rahey halaak:
Jaayegaa koun, rahmat-e-rab kee panaah mein?

Ab kyaa naqaab, kyaa hijaab, 'naa-nukar' bhi kyaa?
Koyee nahin hai apney siwaa khwaabgaah mein?

Milnaa hai 'wo', supurd-e-khaak rah hazaar saal?
Naaseyha, alam-e-dahar hai teyree salaah mein!

Hotaa hai wahee door, jo qareeb-e-jigar ho!
Achchhaa hai, 'abd', gair hain meyree nigaah mein!!

                  
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«Reply #4 on: March 20, 2012, 10:02:58 AM »
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Quote from: sksaini4 on March 20, 2012, 08:51:32 AM
abd bhai jwaab naheen hai aapkee is ghazal kaa zindaabaad zindaabaad.bahut bahut mubarak ho
Saini ji, aap jaisey ilm-mand kee 'daad' sey housalah afzaayee hotee hai! Bahut-bahut shukriyah!
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«Reply #5 on: March 20, 2012, 10:05:54 AM »
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Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on March 20, 2012, 09:23:17 AM
Bahut khoob,Janaab.Kya khoob kalaam ata kiya hai.Tahe dil se mashkoor hoon.

Bahut-bahut shukriyah, SIDDIQUI ji! Aapkee duaa hai!
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«Reply #6 on: March 20, 2012, 10:09:39 AM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on March 20, 2012, 08:44:51 AM

Miltey hain roz ajnabee insaan raah mein!
Ham aaj bhi uljhey hain, safeid-o-siyaah mein!!

Beydam nahin huaa hun, abhi dour-e-hosh huun:
Kuchh to talaash keejiye meyree karaah mein!

Naadaan tifl, zalzaloun mein, ho rahey halaak:
Jaayegaa koun, rahmat-e-rab kee panaah mein?

Kab tak rawaan na hogaa hasin qaafilah-e-zeest?
Kab tak qayaam hogaa isee sairgaah mein?

Jaaree hai parindon ki jawon tak rawaangee:
Lagtaa hai, zar hi zar hai har taraf sabaah mein!

Zaahir hai, meyrey dost, tumhain kyoun sataaungaa?
Kahtey hain log, 'Khuld ki taaqat hai aah mein!'

Jab tum pilaa rahey ho shab-o-roz dam badam;
Main kyoun khatuungaa sharbat-e-kousar ki chaah mein!

Ab kyaa naqaab, kyaa hijaab, 'naa-nukar' bhi kyaa?
Koyee nahin hai apney siwaa khwaabgaah mein?

Kartee hai ataa zouq-e-baqaa roz saaqiyah!
Shaamil hun muddaton sey haqeeqee gunaah mein!!

Taareekiyaan ayaan hain, kareyngey naqaab kyaa?
Ab aa gayaa hai husn-e-sanam ittizaah mein!

Zad mein meyrey uyoon key rah kar to deykhiye;
Ta'areef-e-tabassum hai nihaan waah-waah mein?

Milnaa hai 'wo', supurd-e-khaak rah hazaar saal?
Naaseyha, alam-e-dahar hai teyree salaah mein!

Dahroun sey dafn huun, qayaam-e-khulub huun, yahaan!
Dour-e-khizaan hai ba'ad-e-hashra is nikaah mein?

Seenon mein rawaan hain ta'aanukon ki dharhkaneyn:
Aaye na, kaash, ab khumaar iftiraah mein!

Hotaa hai wahee door, jo qareeb-e-jigar ho!
Achchhaa hai, 'abd', gair hain meyree nigaah mein!!

                   - abd bundeli


Saheb, Apaki Iss Ghazal Par daad Dena Main, Khud Ki Khush-Kismati Samjhunga...Har A'shaar par Sirf Waah Waah Waah..Karta Gaya..

Lajawaab!!!!!!! Bahut Bahut Aur Bahut Khoooooob!!!!

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Hats off to you! Hats off to you!  Hats off to you!
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«Reply #7 on: March 20, 2012, 10:15:53 AM »
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excellent. very nice
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«Reply #8 on: March 20, 2012, 10:22:45 AM »
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Quote from: pankajwfs on March 20, 2012, 08:51:41 AM
Very VERy nice creation Abd ji  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

BAHUT-BAHUT SHUKRIYAH, 'pankaj' JI!
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«Reply #9 on: March 20, 2012, 12:51:11 PM »
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Quote from: khwaish on March 20, 2012, 10:09:39 AM

Saheb, Apaki Iss Ghazal Par daad Dena Main, Khud Ki Khush-Kismati Samjhunga...Har A'shaar par Sirf Waah Waah Waah..Karta Gaya..

Lajawaab!!!!!!! Bahut Bahut Aur Bahut Khoooooob!!!!

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Hats off to you! Hats off to you!  Hats off to you!

Kittu ji, aapkey pyaa-o-dulaar ko paakar dil 'baag-baag' ho jaataa hai! Shukriyah!
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«Reply #10 on: March 20, 2012, 12:52:53 PM »
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Quote from: heena ke rang on March 20, 2012, 10:15:53 AM
excellent. very nice

Thanks, Heena ji!
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«Reply #11 on: March 20, 2012, 07:17:48 PM »
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Abd sirji--
aisi ghalen parhne ko bht kam milti hain--
ek ek aashar khud me hi ghazal hain--
sarfira ke paas shabd nhi taareef krne ko aur daad dene ko--
itni lambi ghazal dekhne me h parho to dil krta hai kaash aur kuch lines hote--

hats off--

bas reqst hai ki apni ghazlen parhne ka mauka dete rahen

khus rahen
muskurate rahen
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«Reply #12 on: March 21, 2012, 06:04:04 AM »
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Quote from: sarfira on March 20, 2012, 07:17:48 PM
Abd sirji--
aisi ghalen parhne ko bht kam milti hain--
ek ek aashar khud me hi ghazal hain--
sarfira ke paas shabd nhi taareef krne ko aur daad dene ko--
itni lambi ghazal dekhne me h parho to dil krta hai kaash aur kuch lines hote--

hats off--

bas reqst hai ki apni ghazlen parhne ka mauka dete rahen

khus rahen
muskurate rahen
Usual Smile

Bahut-bahut shukriyah, 'sarfira' ji! Aapkey pyaar-o-dulaar sey meyree gazal 'dhanya' ho gayee hai!
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