Ham ney maangaa nahin hai kuchh bhi, kabhee bhi, un sey!

by abdbundeli on August 02, 2009, 12:30:01 AM
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Dil mein aataa hai jo, haan, ham wahee kah deytey hain!
Phir, usee bahr-e-khyaal-e-shaad mein bah leytey hain!!

Tum kabhi roo-b-roo hotey ho jigar key, dil key;
Ham to, us hijr-e-jahannam mein bhi rah leytey hain!!

Ham ney aagosh mein unkey, tamaam khwaab jiye;
Ab khushee sey waheen dushwaariyaan sah leytey hain!!

Ham ko koyi bhi shikaayat kabhi na thee unsey!
Jo bhi hotaa hai ataa, nosh hai, wah leytey hain!!

Gam nahin, go ki, jakhm–e-paa hain sang-o-khaaroun key;
Saath hain unkey, raahrou hain, tarah leytey hain!!

Zeyhn mein un key, jagah ki nahin kamee koyee!
Go ki ham, sirf do gazoun ki jagah leytey hain!!

Yuun to hotee hai qalam ungliyoun-angoothey mein;
Dour-e-dahshat ho to, haan, ham bhi silah leytey hain!!

Ham ney maangaa nahin hai kuchh bhi, kabhee bhi, un sey;
Log kahteyn hi hain, "Woh deytey hain! Yah leytey hain!"

Hamsafeenaayi, 'abd', un kee karishmaayi hai!
Doob kar, unkey saath ham bhi satah leytey hain!!

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«Reply #1 on: August 02, 2009, 01:58:21 AM »
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Wah Wah Abd Ji... Bahut he achha likha hai! Bahut Bahut Khoob! Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: August 02, 2009, 05:44:22 AM »
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Quote from: Deepati on August 02, 2009, 01:58:21 AM
Wah Wah Abd Ji... Bahut he achha likha hai! Bahut Bahut Khoob! Applause Applause
Thanks Deepati!
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«Reply #3 on: August 02, 2009, 07:52:49 AM »
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Waah Waah ABD ji.. bahoot hi Khubsoorat Ghazal pesh ki hai aapne.. Bahoot khoob!
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«Reply #4 on: August 02, 2009, 08:10:54 AM »
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Quote from: Sophi on August 02, 2009, 07:52:49 AM
Waah Waah ABD ji.. bahoot hi Khubsoorat Ghazal pesh ki hai aapne.. Bahoot khoob!
Thanks a lot, Sophi Ji!
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«Reply #5 on: August 03, 2009, 09:20:49 AM »
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KYA BAAT HAI  ABD JI......

KABHI RAHETE HAI DIL AUR JIGAR KE PAAS MERE,
KABHI UN SEY JUDAA HOKAR BHI HAM JEE LEYTE HAIN.

BAHUT HASEEN LAMHEY BHITEY HAI UNKE SAATH,
AB GUM BHI DETE HAI, TOH HAM SAHEY LETEY HAIN.

HUMKO UNSEY KOI BHI SHIKAAYAT NAHIN HAIN,
WOH JO HAME DETE HAI, KHUSH  HOKAR LE LETEY HAIN.

DUKH NAHIN HAIN,KI UN HONE ZAKHMON SE BAR DI HAI ZINDAGI MERI,
KHUSHI IS BAAT KI HAI,KI  AB BHI HUM UNKE SAATH JEETEY HAIN.

UNKE DIL MEIN JAGAH KI KAMI NAHIN HAIN,
HUM TOH RATTI-BHAR DIL KI JAGAH UNKI LETEY HAIN.

HAM NE MAANGAA NAHIN HAI KUCHH BHI,KABHEE BHI UN SEY,
JAANTE HAI LOG,WOH DETE HAI,YAH LETEY HAIN.

NAAV CHALANA UNKI KARISHMAAI HAIN,
DOOB KAR UNKE SAATH HAM BHI MAJAA LEYTEY HAIN.
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«Reply #6 on: August 03, 2009, 11:25:12 AM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on August 02, 2009, 12:30:01 AM

Dil mein aataa hai jo, haan, ham wahee kah deytey hain!
Phir, usee bahr-e-khyaal-e-shaad mein bah leytey hain!!

Tum kabhi roo-b-roo hotey ho jigar key, dil key;
Ham to, us hijr-e-jahannam mein bhi rah leytey hain!!

Ham ney aagosh mein unkey, tamaam khwaab jiye;
Ab khushee sey waheen dushwaariyaan sah leytey hain!!

Ham ko koyi bhi shikaayat kabhi na thee unsey!
Jo bhi hotaa hai ataa, nosh hai, wah leytey hain!!

Gam nahin, go ki, jakhm–e-paa hain sang-o-khaaroun key;
Saath hain unkey, raahrou hain, tarah leytey hain!!

Zeyhn mein un key, jagah ki nahin kamee koyee!
Go ki ham, sirf do gazoun ki jagah leytey hain!!

Yuun to hotee hai qalam ungliyoun-angoothey mein;
Dour-e-dahshat ho to, haan, ham bhi silah leytey hain!!

Ham ney maangaa nahin hai kuchh bhi, kabhee bhi, un sey;
Log kahteyn hi hain, "Woh deytey hain! Yah leytey hain!"

Hamsafeenaayi, 'abd', un kee karishmaayi hai!
Doob kar, unkey saath ham bhi satah leytey hain!!

                                         - abd bundeli


Bohot achchi ghazal hai Babu Ji
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«Reply #7 on: August 03, 2009, 11:25:35 AM »
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Quote from: cara on August 03, 2009, 09:20:49 AM
KYA BAAT HAI  ABD JI......

KABHI RAHETE HAI DIL AUR JIGAR KE PAAS MERE,
KABHI UN SEY JUDAA HOKAR BHI HAM JEE LEYTE HAIN.

BAHUT HASEEN LAMHEY BHITEY HAI UNKE SAATH,
AB GUM BHI DETE HAI, TOH HAM SAHEY LETEY HAIN.

HUMKO UNSEY KOI BHI SHIKAAYAT NAHIN HAIN,
WOH JO HAME DETE HAI, KHUSH  HOKAR LE LETEY HAIN.

DUKH NAHIN HAIN,KI UN HONE ZAKHMON SE BAR DI HAI ZINDAGI MERI,
KHUSHI IS BAAT KI HAI,KI  AB BHI HUM UNKE SAATH JEETEY HAIN.

UNKE DIL MEIN JAGAH KI KAMI NAHIN HAIN,
HUM TOH  RATI-BAR DIL KI JAGAH,UNKI LETEY HAIN.

HAM NE MAANGAA NAHIN HAI KUCHH BHI,KABHEE BHI UN SEY,
JAANTE HAI LOG,JO DETEY HAIN,CHUP-CHAP LE LETEY HAIN.

DARD DEKAR BHI APNA BANAANA,UNKA KARISHMA HAIN,
HUM TOH DOOBKAR BHI ,UNKE SAATH RAHE LETEY HAIN,

Nice one Cara
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«Reply #8 on: August 03, 2009, 11:45:44 AM »
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Quote from: cara on August 03, 2009, 09:20:49 AM
KYA BAAT HAI  ABD JI......

Thanks for the appreciation, cara ji!
Please read your poem accompanying your reply, carefully; particularly the last but two 'sheirs'! I think it needs immediate amendment!

Quote from: Celmira on August 03, 2009, 11:25:12 AM
Bohot achchi ghazal hai Babu Ji
Shukriyah bitia Celmira!
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«Reply #9 on: August 03, 2009, 12:39:20 PM »
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ABD JI....DEKHIYE AB KAISA HAI ,AGAR ABHI BHI GALTI HO TOH MAAFI CHAHATA HUN.
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«Reply #10 on: August 03, 2009, 01:55:10 PM »
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Quote from: cara on August 03, 2009, 12:39:20 PM
ABD JI....DEKHIYE AB KAISA HAI ,AGAR ABHI BHI GALTI HO TOH MAAFI CHAHATA HUN.
cara ji! Koyi baat nahin!
Aap shaayad Southern India key hain jahaan Hindi/Urdu kam boli jaatee hai!
Meiney 'us sheir' ko thodaa 'change' kar diyaa hai, wa 'coma' hataa diyaa hai:

UNKE DIL MEIN JAGAH KI KAMI NAHIN HAI,
HUM TO RATTI-BHAR DIL KI JAGAH UNKI LETEY HAIN.

Shaayad aap kaa yahee matlab thaa!
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«Reply #11 on: August 03, 2009, 02:04:50 PM »
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cara ji! Koyi baat nahin!
Aap shaayad Southern India key hain jahaan Hindi/Urdu kam boli jaatee hai!
Meiney 'us sheir' ko thodaa 'change' kar diyaa hai, wa 'coma' hataa diyaa hai:

UNKE DIL MEIN JAGAH KI KAMI NAHIN HAI,
HUM TO RATTI-BHAR DIL KI JAGAH UNKI LETEY HAIN.

Shaayad aap kaa yahee matlab thaa!
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YES SIR JI......YEH HI MATLAB HAI MERA.
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«Reply #12 on: August 03, 2009, 02:20:20 PM »
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Quote from: cara on August 03, 2009, 02:04:50 PM
YES SIR JI......YEH HI MATLAB HAI MERA.
Thats okay! You're welcome!
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«Reply #13 on: August 03, 2009, 02:39:34 PM »
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bahut achche abd bhai aapne cpmpetition main post kii hai kii nahin jaldi se wahan post kariye aur phir jab aap jeetenge toh treat dijiyega........ek sher pesh kar raha hoon

mujhe dil k zakhm ka haal khoob maloom tha
par oonhe aaya pasand mere lahoo ko behta dekhna
kureda zakhm jab apna oonhe manjar dikhane ko
toh kehte hai jara sambhal k ,chot lag na jaaye dekhna
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«Reply #14 on: August 03, 2009, 04:03:07 PM »
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Quote from: -Saahil- on August 03, 2009, 02:39:34 PM
bahut achche abd bhai aapne cpmpetition main post kii hai kii nahin jaldi se wahan post kariye aur phir jab aap jeetenge toh treat dijiyega........ek sher pesh kar raha hoon


mujhe dil k zakhm ka haal khoob maloom tha
par oonhe aaya pasand mere lahoo ko behta dekhna
kureda zakhm jab apna oonhe manjar dikhane ko
toh kehte hai jara sambhal k ,chot lag na jaaye dekhna

Thanks Saahil ji! Ab competition kaa zamaanah aap logon kaa hai! Khoob hissaa leejiye: aur jeetiye bhee! My best wishes are with you!

Un ko zakhmoun sey nahin, kaam hai haqeeqat sey;
Khoon mein rang pyaar kaa nazar mein aayaa thaa!
Un ney deykhee hai faqat zindahdilee aashiq kee;
Khoon aashiq ney isee waasitey bahaayaa thaa!!

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