ham tumhaare ho rahe haiN................saru...........142

by SURESH SANGWAN on December 14, 2014, 08:36:41 AM
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खुश्बूओं में खो रहे हैं
मुहब्बतो में जो रहे हैं

आज मिला है तू बमुश्क़िल
बस आँखों को धो रहे हैं

किसके हो तुम न जाने
हम तुम्हारे हो रहे हैं

है मुझमें मेरी अना मगर
मुद्दत से हम दो रहे हैं

मुझसे ना बरसो कटेंगे
काँटे ऐसे बो रहे हैं

खानेवाले मेहनत की
गहरी नींदें सो रहे हैं

क़रीब से जाना है तुझे
तेरे हम भी तो रहे हैं

रहते गुम सुम जो लोग 'सरु'
बोझ किसी का ढो रहे हैं
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«Reply #1 on: December 14, 2014, 12:46:03 PM »
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bahut sunder waah waah
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«Reply #2 on: December 14, 2014, 01:56:06 PM »
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Quote from: SURESH SANGWAN on December 14, 2014, 08:36:41 AM

खुश्बूओं में खो रहे हैं
मुहब्बतो में जो रहे हैं

आज मिला है तू बमुश्क़िल
बस आँखों को धो रहे हैं

किसके हो तुम न जाने
हम तुम्हारे हो रहे हैं

है मुझमें मेरी अना मगर
मुद्दत से हम दो रहे हैं

मुझसे ना बरसो कटेंगे
काँटे ऐसे बो रहे हैं

खानेवाले मेहनत की
गहरी नींदें सो रहे हैं

क़रीब से जाना है तुझे
तेरे हम भी तो रहे हैं

रहते गुम सुम जो लोग 'सरु'
बोझ किसी का ढो रहे हैं


nice line saru ji
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«Reply #3 on: December 14, 2014, 04:43:37 PM »
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Bahut Khub,,,,,,,Rau Qabool karein.
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«Reply #4 on: December 14, 2014, 09:19:41 PM »
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bahut khoobsurat peshkash hai, dheron daad.
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«Reply #5 on: December 15, 2014, 04:43:40 AM »
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बहुत बहुत खूब.....
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«Reply #6 on: December 15, 2014, 10:40:02 AM »
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thaaaanks a lot parinde ji.........
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 हौसला अफज़ाही के लिये  तहे दिल से बहुत 2 शुक्रिया ..........surindarn ji.
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«Reply #10 on: December 15, 2014, 12:28:10 PM »
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 bahut2 shukriya sir ji
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bahut sunder waah waah
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 हौसला अफज़ाही के लिये  तहे दिल से बहुत 2 शुक्रिया ..........ambu ji.
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 हौसला अफज़ाही के लिये  तहे दिल से बहुत 2 शुक्रिया ..........nakul g.
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 हौसला अफज़ाही के लिये  तहे दिल से बहुत 2 शुक्रिया ...........
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 हौसला अफज़ाही के लिये  तहे दिल से बहुत 2 शुक्रिया ...........
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