Ham unhain bhee unheen-see sunaaney lagey!

by abdbundeli on April 18, 2013, 06:24:22 PM
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Jab wo fir-fir bahaaney banaaney lagey!
Ham unhain bhee unheen-see sunaaney lagey!!

Khud unhain yuunhi naaraaz kyounkar kareyn:
Ham ko wo sab fasaaney, puraaney lagey?

Hai nayaa kyaa? Wahee hain : azal sey wahee!
Dil huaa jab, tabhee aazmaaney lagey!!

Hamney deykhaa unhain, un ney par naqsh-e-paa;
Bin kahey wo bahut kuchh sunaaney lagey!

Kyaa karuun, unkee aankoun mein fir abra hain?
Kaash, fir wo fazaa muskuraaney lagey!

Jeet jaauun to kyaa, haar jaauun to kyaa?
Jeet pakkee hai unkee, hamain maat bhee!
Yeh, muhabbat kaa aisaa safar hai, ‘abd’,
Jyoun qadam har unheen key thhikaaney lagey!!

               - abd bundeli
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«Reply #1 on: April 18, 2013, 06:53:57 PM »
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Waah Waah Waaah.....Dheron Daad... Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: April 18, 2013, 07:25:15 PM »
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Quote from: Bishwajeet 'Musaahib' on April 18, 2013, 06:53:57 PM
Waah Waah Waaah.....Dheron Daad... Applause Applause Applause

Shukriyah, 'Musaahib' ji! Bahut-bahut shukriyah!
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«Reply #3 on: April 18, 2013, 09:25:13 PM »
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«Reply #4 on: April 18, 2013, 09:28:23 PM »
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bahut hi umdaa likhaa hai saaheb, meri taraf se dili daad aur ek rau qubool farmaayeN...!!
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«Reply #5 on: April 19, 2013, 02:47:06 AM »
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Jeet jaauun to kyaa, haar jaauun to kyaa?
Jeet pakkee hai unkee, hamain maat bhee!
Yeh, muhabbat kaa aisaa safar hai, ‘abd’,
Jyoun qadam har unheen key thhikaaney lagey!!

wah  wah wah ..
bahut umda Sir
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«Reply #6 on: April 19, 2013, 05:59:26 PM »
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Quote from: sksaini4 on April 18, 2013, 09:25:13 PM
Applause

Shukriyah, Saini ji!
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«Reply #7 on: April 19, 2013, 06:00:37 PM »
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Quote from: Taish on April 18, 2013, 09:28:23 PM
bahut hi umdaa likhaa hai saaheb, meri taraf se dili daad aur ek rau qubool farmaayeN...!!

Bahut-bahut shukriyah, Taish ji!
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«Reply #8 on: April 19, 2013, 06:02:01 PM »
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Quote from: mkv on April 19, 2013, 02:47:06 AM
Jeet jaauun to kyaa, haar jaauun to kyaa?
Jeet pakkee hai unkee, hamain maat bhee!
Yeh, muhabbat kaa aisaa safar hai, ‘abd’,
Jyoun qadam har unheen key thhikaaney lagey!!

wah  wah wah ..
bahut umda Sir


Bahut-bahut shukriyah, Mukesh ji!
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«Reply #9 on: April 19, 2013, 09:20:08 PM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on April 18, 2013, 06:24:22 PM

Jab wo fir-fir bahaaney banaaney lagey!
Ham unhain bhee unheen-see sunaaney lagey!!

Khud unhain yuunhi naaraaz kyounkar kareyn:
Ham ko wo sab fasaaney, puraaney lagey?

Hai nayaa kyaa? Wahee hain : azal sey wahee!
Dil huaa jab, tabhee aazmaaney lagey!!

Hamney deykhaa unhain, un ney par naqsh-e-paa;
Bin kahey wo bahut kuchh sunaaney lagey!

Kyaa karuun, unkee aankoun mein fir abra hain?
Kaash, fir wo fazaa muskuraaney lagey!

Jeet jaauun to kyaa, haar jaauun to kyaa?
Jeet pakkee hai unkee, hamain maat bhee!
Yeh, muhabbat kaa aisaa safar hai, ‘abd’,
Jyoun qadam har unheen key thhikaaney lagey!!

               - abd bundeli


Wah wah abd bundeli jee bahut acchi ghazal likha hai. last four lines subanallah. bahut bahut khoob. deron daad
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«Reply #10 on: April 20, 2013, 06:12:02 PM »
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Quote from: suman59 on April 19, 2013, 09:20:08 PM
Wah wah abd bundeli jee bahut accha ghazal likha hai. last four lines subanallah. bahut bahut khoob. deron daad

Bahut-bahut shukriyah, Suman ji!
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