Hamaaraa muskuraanaa bhi unhain achchhaa naheen lagtaa!!

by abdbundeli on February 24, 2009, 10:57:59 AM
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Zaraa-saa muskuraanaa bhi unhain achchhaa naheen lagtaa!
Hamaaraa paas aanaa bhi unhain achchhaa naheen lagtaa!!

Yahaan ham wasl ko beychain they, khwaaboun ki duniyaan mein!
Kareyn kyaa, yeh fasaanah hi unhain achchhaa naheen lagtaa?

Hamaaree raat kat jaatee hai yuun hi jaagtey-rotey;
Hamain sapney dikhaanaa bhi unhain achchhaa naheen lagtaa!!

Hamain lagtaa hai, royengey akeyley hi, kaheen chhup kar;
Galey milkar, rulaanaa bhi unhain achchhaa naheen lagtaa!!

Na jaaney ham mein aisee baat kyaa hai, chhitakatey hain woh?
Uthhaa, nazareyn milaanaa bhi unhain achchhaa naheen lagtaa!!

Kisey maaloom thaa, yeh dil-lagee zaalim hai khaaroun-see;
Diloun key gul khilaanaa bhi unhain achchhaa naheen lagtaa!!

Bahut mushtaaq they, gaatey suneyngey aaj ham jinko:
Hamaaraa gungunaanaa bhi unhain achchhaa naheen lagtaa!!

Bahut maayuus hain; par, giley-shikwey kareyn, to kaisey?
Hamain ghar par bulaanaa bhi unhain achchhaa naheen lagtaa!!

Hamaarey paas aanaa bhi unhain achchhaa naheen lagtaa!
Hamaaraa muskuraanaa bhi unhain achchhaa naheen lagtaa!!
 
Kaheen mahshar na aa pahunchey, ki, bas, ham yuun hi mar jaayen?
‘Abd’ sey dil lagaanaa hi unhain achchhaa naheen lagtaa!!
               
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«Reply #1 on: February 24, 2009, 11:18:15 AM »
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Bohot Khoobsurat Ghazal hai ye aap ki, Abd Ji  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #2 on: February 24, 2009, 11:31:36 AM »
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Quote from: Celmira on February 24, 2009, 11:18:15 AM
Bohot Khoobsurat Ghazal hai ye aap ki, Abd Ji  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


Bahut-bahut shukriyah, Celmira ji!
                 - abd bundeli
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«Reply #3 on: February 24, 2009, 12:47:36 PM »
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Bohat khoob Abd ji...
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«Reply #4 on: February 24, 2009, 01:18:08 PM »
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Quote from: honeyrose on February 24, 2009, 12:47:36 PM
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Bohat khoob Abd ji...
Thanks you a lot, honeyrose ji!
                  - abd bundeli
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«Reply #5 on: February 24, 2009, 02:33:15 PM »
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Subhan_allah bhai sher se pehle dad dene ko majboor kar diya aapne Maza aa gaya  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


Kabhi poocha jo hota unse aur woh kehte ABD
Ek GHAYEL ke siwa koi deewana achcha nahi lagta

-SG-
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«Reply #6 on: February 24, 2009, 03:03:37 PM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on February 24, 2009, 02:33:15 PM
Subhan_allah bhai sher se pehle dad dene ko majboor kar diya aapne Maza aa gaya  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


Kabhi poocha jo hota unse aur woh kehte ABD
Ek GHAYEL ke siwa koi deewana achcha nahi lagta

-SG-
Shukrikyah bhai Sajid!

Mujhey lagtaa hai, kuchh to hai, banaataa hai jo deewaanah!
Na jaaney kyoun, kabhi lagtaa hai, khud ban jaauun nazaraanah!
Bahut khoyaa hai, leykin ab naheen khouungaa, jo bhi hai;
Mujhey saaqee sey hai nisbat, bharaa hai meyraa paimaanah!!

                                - abd bundeli
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«Reply #7 on: November 01, 2009, 01:36:38 PM »
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Bahut maayuus hain; par, giley-shikwey kareyn, to kaisey?
Hamain ghar par bulaanaa bhi unhain achchhaa naheen lagtaa!!

Hamaarey paas aanaa bhi unhain achchhaa naheen lagtaa!
Hamaaraa muskuraanaa bhi unhain achchhaa naheen lagtaa!!

Bahut khoob.... Last do lines toh really touched my heart... wonderful  Applause
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«Reply #8 on: November 01, 2009, 02:14:59 PM »
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Ishq se dar mat ishq toh-meherban ho jayega
Sehta jaa zulm-o-sitam, tu safal ho jayega

Ek muddat se wafa ki raah per hai
Aur bade aage hamara imtihan ho jayega

Dil hai khud swayambu kab sunta hai apni baat ko
Hum kare is-raar, to vo badgumi ho jayega

Hum to uske ho gaye lekin daga vo de gaya
Kya khaber thi le ke dil vo be-emaan ho jayega

Ye mere mehboob, meri zindagi hai tere haat
Tera kya bigdega jo tu meherbaan ho jayega?

Ho bura koyi to usse bhi karo accha sulooq
Nek tabiyat ek din ko beguma.n ho jayega

Dil sitam seh sakta hai lekin, yeh darr hai "Roja"
Waqt aayega bechara bejuban ho jayega..
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«Reply #9 on: November 07, 2009, 10:01:12 AM »
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Quote from: Roja on November 01, 2009, 01:36:38 PM
Bahut khoob.... Last do lines toh really touched my heart... wonderful  Applause
Quote from: Roja on November 01, 2009, 02:14:59 PM

Ishq se dar mat ishq toh-meherban ho jayega
Sehta jaa zulm-o-sitam, tu safal ho jayega

Ek muddat se wafa ki raah per hai
Aur bade aage hamara imtihan ho jayega

Dil hai khud swayambu kab sunta hai apni baat ko
Hum kare is-raar, to vo badgumi ho jayega

Hum to uske ho gaye lekin daga vo de gaya
Kya khaber thi le ke dil vo be-emaan ho jayega

Ye mere mehboob, meri zindagi hai tere haat
Tera kya bigdega jo tu meherbaan ho jayega?

Ho bura koyi to usse bhi karo accha sulooq
Nek tabiyat ek din ko beguma.n ho jayega

Dil sitam seh sakta hai lekin, yeh darr hai "Roja"
Waqt aayega bechara bejuban ho jayega..



Thanks Roja!

Dil kee gar dil mein rahey,
Koun kahey, kyaa hoya?
Shabnam beychaaree, 'abd',
Rahee azal sey roya!

              - abd bundeli
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«Reply #10 on: November 07, 2009, 10:07:57 AM »
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Wah Wah !!! Behtreen Ghazal Abd Ji, Aur Waqai Aap Har Mouke, Kisse, Baat Ko Bade Behtreen Dhang Se Lafzo Me Utarte Hai..Har Sher Lajawab Laga..Aur Sher Padke Shayri Ka Ek Aalag Hi Mukam NAzar Aaya..Wah Wah!!!! Clapping Smiley  Clapping Smiley  Clapping Smiley

Aur Bahut Hi Khoob Reply Diya Aapne Bhi Roza Didi, Bahut Hi Aacha Laga Dil Ko... Clapping Smiley  Clapping Smiley

Shally.
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«Reply #11 on: November 07, 2009, 04:05:31 PM »
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Quote from: k.shael on November 07, 2009, 10:07:57 AM
Wah Wah !!! Behtreen Ghazal Abd Ji, Aur Waqai Aap Har Mouke, Kisse, Baat Ko Bade Behtreen Dhang Se Lafzo Me Utarte Hai..Har Sher Lajawab Laga..Aur Sher Padke Shayri Ka Ek Aalag Hi Mukam NAzar Aaya..Wah Wah!!!! Clapping Smiley  Clapping Smiley  Clapping Smiley

Aur Bahut Hi Khoob Reply Diya Aapne Bhi Roza Didi, Bahut Hi Aacha Laga Dil Ko... Clapping Smiley  Clapping Smiley

Shally.

Thanks a lot, Shally ji!
            - abd bundeli
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«Reply #12 on: November 07, 2009, 07:33:31 PM »
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Quote from: k.shael on November 07, 2009, 10:07:57 AM
Wah Wah !!! Behtreen Ghazal Abd Ji, Aur Waqai Aap Har Mouke, Kisse, Baat Ko Bade Behtreen Dhang Se Lafzo Me Utarte Hai..Har Sher Lajawab Laga..Aur Sher Padke Shayri Ka Ek Aalag Hi Mukam NAzar Aaya..Wah Wah!!!! Clapping Smiley  Clapping Smiley  Clapping Smiley

Aur Bahut Hi Khoob Reply Diya Aapne Bhi Roza Didi, Bahut Hi Aacha Laga Dil Ko... Clapping Smiley  Clapping Smiley

Shally.

Thanks shally
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«Reply #13 on: November 07, 2009, 07:37:54 PM »
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Quote from: Roja on November 01, 2009, 02:14:59 PM
Ishq se dar mat ishq toh-meherban ho jayega
Sehta jaa zulm-o-sitam, tu safal ho jayega

Ek muddat se wafa ki raah per hai
Aur bade aage hamara imtihan ho jayega

Dil hai khud swayambu kab sunta hai apni baat ko
Hum kare is-raar, to vo badgumi ho jayega

Hum to uske ho gaye lekin daga vo de gaya
Kya khaber thi le ke dil vo be-emaan ho jayega

Ye mere mehboob, meri zindagi hai tere haat
Tera kya bigdega jo tu meherbaan ho jayega?

Ho bura koyi to usse bhi karo accha sulooq
Nek tabiyat ek din ko beguma.n ho jayega

Dil sitam seh sakta hai lekin, yeh darr hai "Roja"
Waqt aayega bechara bejuban ho jayega..


Bahut Khoob Roja Ji
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«Reply #14 on: November 07, 2009, 07:38:36 PM »
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Thank you Rajesh Harish ji
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