Hamaaraa muskuraanaa bhi unhain achchhaa naheen lagtaa!!

by abdbundeli on February 24, 2009, 10:57:59 AM
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«Reply #15 on: November 07, 2009, 07:38:58 PM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on November 07, 2009, 10:01:12 AM
Thanks Roja!

Dil kee gar dil mein rahey,
Koun kahey, kyaa hoya?
Shabnam beychaaree, 'abd',
Rahee azal sey roya!

              - abd bundeli


Wohi lehere palat aati hai kankar laut aate hai
Wohi kankar samete shaam ko ghar laut aate hai

Bas ek awaz hai khench liye jaati hai jo dil ko
Bas ek diwar hai hum jisko chu kar laut aate hai

Charage-gul ke jalne ka samaa sasvir karne ko
Ye saaye shaam tak chalte hai thak kar laut aate hai

Wohi halat hai is udasi aakhon ki jo pehle thi
Wohi ek pal ki barish se samandar laut aate hai..
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«Reply #16 on: November 08, 2009, 09:12:47 AM »
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Quote from: Roja on November 07, 2009, 07:38:58 PM

Wohi lehere palat aati hai kankar laut aate hai
Wohi kankar samete shaam ko ghar laut aate hai

Bas ek awaz hai khench liye jaati hai jo dil ko
Bas ek diwar hai hum jisko chu kar laut aate hai

Charage-gul ke jalne ka samaa sasvir karne ko
Ye saaye shaam tak chalte hai thak kar laut aate hai

Wohi halat hai is udasi aakhon ki jo pehle thi
Wohi ek pal ki barish se samandar laut aate hai..

"Wohi ek pal ki barish se samandar laut aate hain.."
Bahut hee gahrey ahsaas-e-gam kaa izhaar kartey hain ye alfaaz!
Bahut achchhey, Roja!
 
Gouhar-saa jhalaktaa hai kam hee, magar, andar hai!
Mein kyaa karoon jo meyree aankhoun mein samundar hai!!
Lahraaye har lamhey wah, beychain tarannum-saa:
Aaou, ki, azal sey hee mushtaaq, khulaa dar hai!!

                                - abd bundeli  
  
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«Reply #17 on: November 08, 2009, 10:22:24 AM »
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Badi jaandaar Gazal hai aapki...ABDji......aur achha saath diya hai Rojaji ne bhi...Daad kabool kijiye aap dono... Applause Applause Applause Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

EK TARFA RAHA ISHQ MERA
PYAAR UNHE RAAS NAHI AAYA
LAUT AAYEE SADAAYEN MERI
KANO SE UNKE TAKRAKE PAAS MERE
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«Reply #18 on: November 08, 2009, 11:06:54 AM »
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Quote from: smardia on November 08, 2009, 10:22:24 AM
Badi jaandaar Gazal hai aapki...ABDji......aur achha saath diya hai Rojaji ne bhi...Daad kabool kijiye aap dono... Applause Applause Applause Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

EK TARFA RAHA ISHQ MERA
PYAAR UNHE RAAS NAHI AAYA
LAUT AAYEE SADAAYEN MERI
KANO SE UNKE TAKRAKE PAAS MERE

Thanks smardia  ji!

Harjaayee woh, sabhee ko
Deytaa pyaar-dulaar!
Mein kaisey kah doon, meyraa
Hai ik-tarfaa pyaar?

             - abd bundeli
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«Reply #19 on: November 08, 2009, 11:49:14 AM »
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Khuda hai wo jo deta sabhee ko pyaar-dular
Harjaayee usko kaise main kehdu yaar
Mai karta hu pooja uski,usko he pyaar
Uski nazaron mai hain hum sab ek samaan

Fark chahat ke nazariye ka hai mere yaar
Uski chahat aur hai meri chahat aur hai
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«Reply #20 on: November 09, 2009, 02:17:47 PM »
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Quote from: smardia on November 08, 2009, 11:49:14 AM
Khuda hai wo jo deta sabhee ko pyaar-dular
Harjaayee usko kaise main kehdu yaar
Mai karta hu pooja uski,usko he pyaar
Uski nazaron mai hain hum sab ek samaan

Fark chahat ke nazariye ka hai mere yaar
Uski chahat aur hai meri chahat aur hai

Saayeen sab kaa eik hai:
Sach kahtey ho, yaar!
Iseeliye to eik-saa,
Kartaa sab ko pyaar!

         - abd bundeli
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«Reply #21 on: November 09, 2009, 02:21:25 PM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on November 08, 2009, 09:12:47 AM
"Wohi ek pal ki barish se samandar laut aate hain.."
Bahut hee gahrey ahsaas-e-gam kaa izhaar kartey hain ye alfaaz!
Bahut achchhey, Roja!
 
Gouhar-saa jhalaktaa hai kam hee, magar, andar hai!
Mein kyaa karoon jo meyree aankhoun mein samundar hai!!
Lahraaye har lamhey wah, beychain tarannum-saa:
Aaou, ki, azal sey hee mushtaaq, khulaa dar hai!!

                                - abd bundeli
 


Thanks dear Uncle ji
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«Reply #22 on: November 09, 2009, 02:27:20 PM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on February 24, 2009, 10:57:59 AM

Zaraa-saa muskuraanaa bhi unhain achchhaa naheen lagtaa!
Hamaaraa paas aanaa bhi unhain achchhaa naheen lagtaa!!

Yahaan ham wasl ko beychain they, khwaaboun ki duniyaan mein!
Kareyn kyaa, yeh fasaanah hi unhain achchhaa naheen lagtaa?

Hamaaree raat kat jaatee hai yuun hi jaagtey-rotey;
Hamain sapney dikhaanaa bhi unhain achchhaa naheen lagtaa!!

Hamain lagtaa hai, royengey akeyley hi, kaheen chhup kar;
Galey milkar, rulaanaa bhi unhain achchhaa naheen lagtaa!!

Na jaaney ham mein aisee baat kyaa hai, chhitakatey hain woh?
Uthhaa, nazareyn milaanaa bhi unhain achchhaa naheen lagtaa!!

Kisey maaloom thaa, yeh dil-lagee zaalim hai khaaroun-see;
Diloun key gul khilaanaa bhi unhain achchhaa naheen lagtaa!!

Bahut mushtaaq they, gaatey suneyngey aaj ham jinko:
Hamaaraa gungunaanaa bhi unhain achchhaa naheen lagtaa!!

Bahut maayuus hain; par, giley-shikwey kareyn, to kaisey?
Hamain ghar par bulaanaa bhi unhain achchhaa naheen lagtaa!!

Hamaarey paas aanaa bhi unhain achchhaa naheen lagtaa!
Hamaaraa muskuraanaa bhi unhain achchhaa naheen lagtaa!!
 
Kaheen mahshar na aa pahunchey, ki, bas, ham yuun hi mar jaayen?
‘Abd’ sey dil lagaanaa hi unhain achchhaa naheen lagtaa!!
               
                                                        - abd bundeli



Bahut Hi Khubsurat Gajal Likhi Hai Abd Ji Aapne Nice and Beautiful Creation  Applause Applause
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«Reply #23 on: November 09, 2009, 02:28:11 PM »
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Quote from: Roja on November 07, 2009, 07:38:58 PM
Wohi lehere palat aati hai kankar laut aate hai
Wohi kankar samete shaam ko ghar laut aate hai

Bas ek awaz hai khench liye jaati hai jo dil ko
Bas ek diwar hai hum jisko chu kar laut aate hai

Charage-gul ke jalne ka samaa sasvir karne ko
Ye saaye shaam tak chalte hai thak kar laut aate hai

Wohi halat hai is udasi aakhon ki jo pehle thi
Wohi ek pal ki barish se samandar laut aate hai..


NIce and Excellent Creation Roja Ji Applause
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«Reply #24 on: November 16, 2009, 11:27:07 PM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on November 08, 2009, 09:12:47 AM

 
Gouhar-saa jhalaktaa hai kam hee, magar, andar hai!
Mein kyaa karoon jo meyree aankhoun mein samundar hai!!
Lahraaye har lamhey wah, beychain tarannum-saa:
Aaou, ki, azal sey hee mushtaaq, khulaa dar hai!!

                                - abd bundeli
 


Waqt judayi ka hai,
Ab hame juda hona hoga
Bhulakar tamaam baatein ABD
Ab hame umer ber rona hoga...
 tearyeyed
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