Hamain kab khataa kee sazaa deejiyegaa?

by abdbundeli on August 08, 2010, 01:40:51 PM
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Hamain kab khataa kee sazaa deejiyegaa?
Rizaa hai hamaaree: bajaa deejiyegaa!!

Kaheyn, khwaab-e-baaraan mein, kyaa kuchh huaa hai?
Gunahgaar huun to qazaa deejiyegaa!

Binaa sir utaarey guzar jaayengey ham:
Ta'aanuk agar bey-mazaa deejiyegaa?

Hamain roknaa hee zarooree agar ho:
Rah-e-wasl mein jaanguzaa deejiyegaa!

Agar ham ney beydard ho kuchh kiyaa hai:
Dahar tak musalsal azaa deejiyegaa!

Naheen hai 'abd' beywafaa naam ko bhee!
Wafaayee key badley khazaa deejiyegaa?

- abd bundeli
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«Reply #1 on: August 08, 2010, 02:05:28 PM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on August 08, 2010, 01:40:51 PM
Hamain kab khataa kee sazaa deejiyegaa?
Rizaa hai hamaaree: bajaa deejiyegaa!!

Kaheyn, khwaab-e-baaraan mein, kyaa kuchh huaa hai?
Gunahgaar huun to qazaa deejiyegaa!

Binaa sir utaarey guzar jaayengey ham:
Ta'aanuk agar bey-mazaa deejiyegaa?

Hamain roknaa hee zarooree agar ho:
Rah-e-wasl mein jaanguzaa deejiyegaa!

Agar ham ney beydard ho kuchh kiyaa hai:
Dahar tak musalsal azaa deejiyegaa!

Naheen hai 'abd' beywafaa naam ko bhee!
Wafaayee key badley khazaa deejiyegaa?

- abd bundeli

Sabhi ashaar zabardast lage.....bahut umdaa adaayegi aur rawaangi nazar aai......ehsaas bahut gehraai tak le jaate hue dikhe ....very nice creation....Bulandi Ji

tahe dil se daad hazir hai....

yunhi likhte rahen...
duaaon ke saath...
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«Reply #2 on: August 09, 2010, 04:40:11 AM »
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Quote from: Anshumali on August 08, 2010, 02:05:28 PM
Sabhi ashaar zabardast lage.....bahut umdaa adaayegi aur rawaangi nazar aai......ehsaas bahut gehraai tak le jaate hue dikhe ....very nice creation....Bundeli Ji

tahe dil se daad hazir hai....

yunhi likhte rahen...
duaaon ke saath...

Bahut-bahut shukriyah Anshumali ji! Aapkee duaaoun kaa hi to yah asar hai, janaab!
                   - abd bundeli
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«Reply #3 on: August 09, 2010, 06:30:03 AM »
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bahut Bahut Khoob Abd Saheb Ji.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Humesha Ki Tarah lajawaab!!! icon_salut
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«Reply #4 on: August 09, 2010, 06:33:41 AM »
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Bohat khoob bhaiyya...

Hai dena riwaj tera sakhiyaa
Maza na sahi jaam be_maza dijiyega...

SG
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«Reply #5 on: August 09, 2010, 02:33:36 PM »
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Quote from: khwaish on August 09, 2010, 06:30:03 AM
bahut Bahut Khoob Abd Saheb Ji.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Humesha Ki Tarah lajawaab!!! icon_salut

Bahut-baht shukriyah janab!

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«Reply #6 on: August 09, 2010, 02:36:53 PM »
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Quote from: Sajid_Ghayel on August 09, 2010, 06:33:41 AM
Bohat khoob bhaiyya...

Hai dena riwaj tera sakhiyaa
Maza na sahi jaam be_maza dijiyega...

SG

Shukriyah Sajid bhai!

Sazaa tumhaarey haath hai,
Mazaa tumhaarey haath!
Ham beybas hain, chaahiye
Hamain tunhaaraa saath!!

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