Hamko mouqaa hi kahaan thaa, ki, baith kar rotey!

by abdbundeli on August 21, 2010, 08:20:23 AM
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Hamko mouqaa hi kahaan thaa, ki, baith kar rotey!
Tum nahin ho, to kyaa hai wah, ki, jisey ham khotey!!

Mulk shaadaab hai, mousoof sabzhkheyz safar;
Phir bhee lagtaa hai, jaa rahey hain ham waham dhhotey!

Kuchh na kuchh to zaroor hee huaa hai: ham warnah,
Khud apnee raah mein har soo babool kyoun botey?

Wo to ham hain, ki, jahannum bhi hai jannat hamko:
Yuun to, hotey hain roz zaahidoun sey samjhotey!

Ham kisee aur key hokey raheyn, mumkin hi naheen!
Khaas wo hi hain hamaarey huzoor iklotey!

Laakh qurbaaniyaan dey deejiye: honaa kyaa hai?
Ab bhi qaabiz hain us yazeed-e-bad key padpotey!

Zindagee dar-b-dar na ho, iseeliye mein ney,
Us sey nazdeekiyaan rakkheen hain jaagtey-sotey!

Naaz-o-andaaz kaa rakhaa hai khyaal har lamahey,
Taaki wah, yun hi rahey roo-b-roo meyrey hotey!!

Dafn huun qabra-e-khak mein hazzaar saaloun sey:
Hoz-e-kousar mein kab lagaauungaa, 'abd', gotey?


हमको  मौका  ही  कहाँ  था , कि, बैठ  कर  रोते !
तुम  नहीं  हो , तो  क्या  है  वह , कि , जिसे  हम  खोते !!

मुल्क  शादाब  है , मौसूफ़  सब्ज़ाखेज़  सफ़र ;
फिर  भी  लगता  है , जा  रहे  हैं  हम  वहम  ढोते  !

कुछ  न  कुछ  तो  ज़रूर  ही  हुआ  है : हम  वर्ना ,
खुद  अपनी  राह  में  हर  सू  बबूल क्योँ  बोते ?

वो  तो  हम  हैं , कि , जहन्नुम  भी  है  जन्नत  हमको :
यूं  तो , होते  हैं  रोज़  जाहिदों  से  समझोते !

हम  किसी  और  के  होके  रहें , मुमकिन  ही  नहीं !
ख़ास  वो  ही  हैं  हमारे  हुज़ूर  इकलोते !

लाख  कुर्बानियां  दे  दीजिये : होना  क्या  है ?
अब  भी  काबिज़  हैं  उस  यज़ीदे बद  के  पड़पोते !

ज़िंदगी  दरबदर  न  हो , इसीलिये  मैंने ,
उस  से  नजदीकियां  रक्खीं  हैं  जागते-सोते !

नाजो अंदाज़  का  रखा  है  ख्याल  हर लमहे ,
ताकि  वोह  यूँ  ही  रहे  रूबरू  मेरे  होते !!  

दफन  हूँ  क़ब्रे खाक में  हज़ार   सालौं  से :
होज़े कौसर  में  कब  लगाऊँगा , 'अबद ', गोते ?

                         - अबद बुन्देली

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«Reply #1 on: August 21, 2010, 08:25:47 AM »
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Hamko mouqaa hi kahaan thaa, ki, baith kar rotey!
Tum nahin ho, to kyaa hai wah, ki, jisey ham khotey!!

Mulk shaadaab hai, mousoof sabzhkheyz safar;
Phir bhee lagtaa hai, jaa rahey hain ham waham dhhotey!

Kuchh na kuchh to zaroor hee huaa hai: ham warnah,
Khud apnee raah mein har soo babool kyoun botey?

Wo to ham hain, ki, jahannum bhi hai jannat hamko:
Yuun to, hotey hain roz zaahidoun key samjhotey!

Ham kisee aur key hokey raheyn, mumkin hi naheen!
Khaas wo hi hain hamaarey huzoor iklotey!

Laakh qurbaaniyaan dey deejiye: honaa kyaa hai?
Ab bhi qaabiz hain us yazeed-e-bad key padpotey!

Zindagee dar-b-dar na ho, iseeliye mein ney,
Us sey nazdeekiyaan rakkheen hain jaagtey-sotey!

Naaz-o-andaaz kaa rakhaa hai khyaal har lamahey,
Taaki wah, yun hi rahey roo-b-roo meyrey hotey!!

Dafn huun qabra-e-khak mein hazzaar saaloun sey:
Hoz-e-kousar mein kab lagaauungaa, 'abd', gotey?


हमको  मौका  ही  कहाँ  था , कि, बैठ  कर  रोते !
तुम  नहीं  हो , तो  क्या  है  वह , कि , जिसे  हम  खोते !!

मुल्क  शादाब  है , मौसूफ़  सब्ज़ाखेज़  सफ़र ;
फिर  भी  लगता  है , जा  रहे  हैं  हम  वहम  ढोते  !

कुछ  न  कुछ  तो  ज़रूर  ही  हुआ  है : हम  वर्ना ,
खुद  अपनी  राह  में  हर  सू  बबूल क्योँ  बोते ?

वो  तो  हम  हैं , कि , जहन्नुम  भी  है  जन्नत  हमको :
यूं  तो , होते  हैं  रोज़  जाहिदों   के  समझोते !

हम  किसी  और  के  होके  रहें , मुमकिन  ही  नहीं !
ख़ास  वो  ही  हैं  हमारे  हुज़ूर  इकलोते !

लाख  कुर्बानियां  डे  दीजिये : होना  क्या  है ?
अब  भी  काबिज़  हैं  उस  यज़ीदे बद  के  पड़पोते !

ज़िंदगी  दरबदर  न  हो , इसीलिये  मैंने ,
उस  से  नजदीकियां  रक्खीं  हैं  जागते -सोते !

नाजो अंदाज़  का  रखा  है  ख्याल  हर लमहे ,
ताकि  वोह  यूँ  ही  रहे  रूबरू  मेरे  होते !!  

दफन  हूँ  क़ब्रे खाक में  हज़ार   सालौं  से :
होज़े कौसर  में  कब  लगाऊँगा , 'अबद ', गोते ?

                         - अबद बुन्देली




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abad jiiiiiiiiiiiiiii kya kamal ki peshkash hai aap kiiiiiiiiiii
kasam se kya baton kya hua ............... shabd nahi hai

aap ne jis tarah se urdu ka istemaal kiya hai
sach me bhut khubi hai aap ki kalam me
itna acha urdu ka jaan kaar maine dekha hai pehli baar
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«Reply #2 on: August 21, 2010, 08:47:07 AM »
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bht hi pyari hai ye aapki gazal... usi sher ko kitni khubsurti se aapne gazal bana diya......

waah ji aapka jawab nahin.....
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«Reply #3 on: August 21, 2010, 09:54:04 AM »
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aaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

abad jiiiiiiiiiiiiiii kya kamal ki peshkash hai aap kiiiiiiiiiii
kasam se kya baton kya hua ............... shabd nahi hai

aap ne jis tarah se urdu ka istemaal kiya hai
sach me bhut khubi hai aap ki kalam me
itna acha urdu ka jaan kaar maine dekha hai pehli baar

Aapki duaa hai, 'Rahi2001' ji! Bahut-bahut shukriyah!
Khush rahiye! 'Sapariwaar saanand' rahiye!

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«Reply #4 on: August 21, 2010, 09:57:19 AM »
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bht hi pyari hai ye aapki gazal... usi sher ko kitni khubsurti se aapne gazal bana diya......

waah ji aapka jawab nahin.....


Bahut-bahut shukriyah  'KOYAL46' ji! Yah aapki duaa hi to hai, jo yah sab ho paataa hai!

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«Reply #5 on: August 21, 2010, 03:30:01 PM »
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  Waah waah Abd ji bahut achhi ghazal likhi hai aapne. Dhero daad aapko. Thumbs UP
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«Reply #6 on: August 21, 2010, 05:22:48 PM »
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Abd Bundeli sahab Aadaab O tasleem

Behad Khoob kalaam se nawaza hai Janab ..... dil se daad hazir hai....

Likhate rhaiye....
Khush rahiye......
Khuda Hafez..... Usual Smile
         
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«Reply #7 on: August 21, 2010, 06:34:46 PM »
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Bundeli Ji.. Aadaab ! bahut hi khoob rahi .....aapki yeh peshkash ...bahut umdaa ehsaas piiroyeN hai aapne...dil se daad..... ! yunhi behtar kalaam padhne ka mauqaa dete rahiye ... likhte rahiye... khush rahen...

duaaon ke saath...
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«Reply #8 on: August 22, 2010, 03:57:28 AM »
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  Waah waah Abd ji bahut achhi ghazal likhi hai aapne. Dhero daad aapko. Thumbs UP

Bahut-bahut shukriyah, 'tamanna.pt' ji!

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«Reply #9 on: August 22, 2010, 04:02:03 AM »
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Abd Bundeli sahab Aadaab O tasleem

Behad Khoob kalaam se nawaza hai Janab ..... dil se daad hazir hai....

Likhate rhaiye....
Khush rahiye......
Khuda Hafez..... Usual Smile
         


Bahut-bahut shukriyah, ParwaaZ ji!
WOH aapko poorey khaandaan key saath khush wa tandurust rakhey!
Namaskaar!

     - abd bundeli
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«Reply #10 on: August 22, 2010, 04:08:37 AM »
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Bundeli Ji.. Aadaab ! bahut hi khoob rahi .....aapki yeh peshkash ...bahut umdaa ehsaas piiroyeN hai aapne...dil se daad..... ! yunhi behtar kalaam padhne ka mauqaa dete rahiye ... likhte rahiye... khush rahen...

duaaon ke saath...


Namaskaar Anshumali ji! Bahut-bahut shukriyah! Aapkee duaa sey jo ban padtaa hai, haazir kartaa rahtaa huun! Aagey bhi, jab tak US kee marzee hai, likhnaa jaaree rakhuungaa!
WOH aapko khush wa seyhatmand rakhey!

                                  - abd bundeli
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