Hamney khojaa unhain: is jagah, us jagah!

by abdbundeli on July 13, 2010, 06:14:33 AM
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #15 on: August 12, 2011, 09:20:40 AM »
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Bahut hi umda peshkash hai aap ki ABD Ji
Dil ko chhoo gayee
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«Reply #16 on: August 13, 2011, 04:36:30 AM »
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Quote from: Rajesh Harish on August 12, 2011, 09:20:40 AM
Bahut hi umda peshkash hai aap ki ABD Ji
Dil ko chhoo gayee

Bahut bahut shukriyah Harish ji!
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«Reply #17 on: August 13, 2011, 06:54:12 AM »
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kaisi ye rutt aayee dekho
apne hi humse aaj darne lage!!

thukraya jinhone taumar hume
gair wahi aaj humpar marne lage!!

kahan gaye woh log jo baste the kabhi saanso me
kuch mile the kal bhule se dekh hume jinki saanse hi ukhadne lage!!

woh bhi aya tha jab panaahon me machalte hue
aankhen unki bhi aaj babad siskne lage!!

dhoond lun ga shayd kabhi apna koi lekin
chot kha chuke itna ki kadam bhi aage barhne se ab hichakne lage!!
!!
!!
bahut hi umda aur lajawab peshkash Abd ji--malli ji u r also fantastic
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abdbundeli
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«Reply #18 on: August 14, 2011, 04:25:12 AM »
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Quote from: sarfira on August 13, 2011, 06:54:12 AM
kaisi ye rutt aayee dekho
apne hi humse aaj darne lage!!

thukraya jinhone taumar hume
gair wahi aaj humpar marne lage!!

kahan gaye woh log jo baste the kabhi saanso me
kuch mile the kal bhule se dekh hume jinki saanse hi ukhadne lage!!

woh bhi aya tha jab panaahon me machalte hue
aankhen unki bhi aaj babad siskne lage!!

dhoond lun ga shayd kabhi apna koi lekin
chot kha chuke itna ki kadam bhi aage barhne se ab hichakne lage!!
!!
!!
bahut hi umda aur lajawab peshkash Abd ji--malli ji u r also fantastic

Waah! Shukriyah!
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sarfira
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«Reply #19 on: August 14, 2011, 04:36:43 AM »
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waah Sahab Abd ji--
khamosh juba se sukriya kah gaye aap!!!
sukriya to aapka hume karna hai ki aapne itna behtareen nagma pesh kia--

aap chuninda shayron me se hain jinki rachnaye hume Sufiyana ehsaas karati hain--

aap kuch jada time dia karen hume plzzz
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«Reply #20 on: August 15, 2011, 04:24:59 AM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on August 12, 2011, 05:38:37 AM

Khud hee gaayab rahey ho, poochhtey ho mujhsey hee:
Kahaan chaley gaye hain khojney waaley meyrey?

Abhuun na aaye sajanwaan,
Sakhee ri mori, baadar garjyo!

Purwaiyaa lahree, tan-man kon jurhaay, gayee!
Paachheyn-paachheyn ghahree barkhaa rut aay gayee!

                           - abd bundeli

Mai gayab nahi thi uncle ji...bas aap nahi aaye aur hum b nahi aaye.. Usual Smile


Sneh hriday ka hriday basaye dua teri khushhali ka...
Waqt kabhee aisa na aaye aashu bharen tere naino mein..
Her din rahega intezar tera sanam, naina base hai dwaar mein
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malli
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«Reply #21 on: August 15, 2011, 04:29:20 AM »
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Quote from: sarfira on August 13, 2011, 06:54:12 AM
kaisi ye rutt aayee dekho
apne hi humse aaj darne lage!!

thukraya jinhone taumar hume
gair wahi aaj humpar marne lage!!

kahan gaye woh log jo baste the kabhi saanso me
kuch mile the kal bhule se dekh hume jinki saanse hi ukhadne lage!!

woh bhi aya tha jab panaahon me machalte hue
aankhen unki bhi aaj babad siskne lage!!

dhoond lun ga shayd kabhi apna koi lekin
chot kha chuke itna ki kadam bhi aage barhne se ab hichakne lage!!
!!
!!
bahut hi umda aur lajawab peshkash Abd ji--malli ji u r also fantastic

Sarfira ji aap ka bahut bahut shukriya jo Uncle ji ka aur mera likha pasand kiya aur tarif kiya..... aap bi bahut hi umda likha hai. Last four lines too good and touching. daad kabul kijiyega zarur Usual Smile

Chand ko kya maloom hua mohabbat chakor karta hai
Is kali ko maloom kya mohabbat kisor karta hai.. icon_thumleft
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«Reply #22 on: August 15, 2011, 05:22:27 AM »
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Quote from: malli on August 15, 2011, 04:29:20 AM

Sarfira ji aap ka bahut bahut shukriya jo Uncle ji ka aur mera likha pasand kiya aur tarif kiya..... aap bi bahut hi umda likha hai. Last four lines too good and touching. daad kabul kijiyega zarur Usual Smile

Chand ko kya maloom hua mohabbat chakor karta hai
Is kali ko maloom kya mohabbat kisor krta hai.. icon_thumleft
than q ji
humara woh chand tha magar
chakoriyat ka use ehsaas nhi tongue3
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malli
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«Reply #23 on: August 15, 2011, 07:24:20 AM »
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Quote from: sarfira on August 15, 2011, 05:22:27 AM
than q ji
humara woh chand tha magar
chakoriyat ka use ehsaas nhi tongue3

hahaha...

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«Reply #24 on: August 15, 2011, 07:51:35 AM »
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Quote from: malli on August 15, 2011, 04:24:59 AM
Mai gayab nahi thi uncle ji...bas aap nahi aaye aur hum b nahi aaye.. Usual Smile


Sneh hriday ka hriday basaye dua teri khushhali ka...
Waqt kabhee aisa na aaye aashu bharen tere naino mein..
Her din rahega intezar tera sanam, naina base hai dwaar mein


wah wah Malli ji Usual Smile
bht hi pyara likha hai aapne
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abdbundeli
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«Reply #25 on: August 16, 2011, 05:56:06 AM »
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Quote from: sarfira on August 14, 2011, 04:36:43 AM
waah Sahab Abd ji--
khamosh juba se sukriya kah gaye aap!!!
sukriya to aapka hume karna hai ki aapne itna behtareen nagma pesh kia--

aap chuninda shayron me se hain jinki rachnaye hume Sufiyana ehsaas karati hain--

aap kuch jada time dia karen hume plzzz

Bas aapkee duaa hai,sarfira ji, warnah main to kuchh bhee naheen huun! Aapkeen baateyn dil-o-jigar ko chhoo gayeen hain! WOH aapko khush wa seyhatmand rakhey, yahee meyree dua hai!

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«Reply #26 on: August 16, 2011, 06:07:47 AM »
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Quote from: malli on August 15, 2011, 04:24:59 AM
Mai gayab nahi thi uncle ji...bas aap nahi aaye aur hum b nahi aaye.. Usual Smile


Sneh hriday ka hriday basaye dua teri khushhali ka...
Waqt kabhee aisa na aaye aashu bharen tere naino mein..
Her din rahega intezar tera sanam, naina base hai dwaar mein

Roja ji, khush rahiye! Seyhatmand rahiye! Aapkey 'sneyhiltaa aur sahrudaytaa' sey bakhoobee waaqif huun! Shukriyah!

Mujhey bhi roz, 'abd', intizaar rahtaa hai!
Wo lahoo aaj bhi meyree nashon mein bahtaa hai!
Aik hee arsh key neechey hain, usee saaye mein,
Fir bhi ham itney door kyon hain, koyi kahtaa hai?

                            - abd bundeli
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«Reply #27 on: August 16, 2011, 06:16:02 AM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on August 16, 2011, 05:56:06 AM
Bas aapkee duaa hai,sarfira ji, warnah main to kuchh bhee naheen huun! Aapkeen baateyn dil-o-jigar ko chhoo gayeen hain! WOH aapko khush wa seyhatmand rakhey, yahee meyree dua hai!

                                 - abd bundeli
aapki duaon ke lie behad sukriya--aap b sada khus rahen Usual Smile

Abdbundeli aur Vb--ye do naam--alfaazon aur ehsaason ke jadugar hain--baht bada fan hu mai aap dono ka ji--
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«Reply #28 on: August 17, 2011, 02:05:57 PM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on August 16, 2011, 06:07:47 AM
Roja ji, khush rahiye! Seyhatmand rahiye! Aapkey 'sneyhiltaa aur sahrudaytaa' sey bakhoobee waaqif huun! Shukriyah!

Mujhey bhi roz, 'abd', intizaar rahtaa hai!
Wo lahoo aaj bhi meyree nashon mein bahtaa hai!
Aik hee arsh key neechey hain, usee saaye mein,
Fir bhi ham itney door kyon hain, koyi kahtaa hai?

                            - abd bundeli

Abhi kya kahne abhi kya sunne
Yuni khwahishon ke fashar mein
Kabhi be sabaab kabhi be khalal
Kahan,koun, kis se bichad gaya
Kisne kab kisko gunwa diya
KABHI PHIR MILNGE TOU POUCHNA HUMSE...
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«Reply #29 on: August 20, 2011, 08:56:35 AM »
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Quote from: malli on August 17, 2011, 02:05:57 PM
Abhi kya kahne abhi kya sunne
Yuni khwahishon ke fashar mein
Kabhi be sabaab kabhi be khalal
Kahan,koun, kis se bichad gaya
Kisne kab kisko gunwa diya
KABHI PHIR MILNGE TOU POUCHNA HUMSE...

Theek hai, Roja ji, leejiye yeh padhiye:-

Zameen teyree khushkhiraam, aasmaan teyraa!
Nazar sey door hai gulfaam aashiyaan teyraa!!

Guzar rahey hain lamheyn aaj, yaad mein kis kee?
Raah mein kis, kahaan hai naqs-e-paa nihaan teyraa?

Qadam-qadam pai khaar-o-sang khairmaqdam ko,
Haaziree dey rahey hain: haq hai rahnumaan teyraa!

Teyraa fatwa thaa: chalaa aa, waheen miloongaa mein!
Kyaa yahee khulq-e-khush-adaa hai meyhrabaan teyraa?

Kahaan bihist? Kahaan yeh samoom-o-reyg-e-rawaan?
Kyaa isee khaak sey banaa hai kahkashaan teyraa?

Kyoun mujhey aaj us waqaar pai shak hotaa hai?
Rahaa hun, dour-e-ibtidaa sey qadradaan teyraa!

Ab 'abd', kyaa kahoon? Teyree ajeeb hai hastee;
Khaar teyrey hain, gul bhi, aur gulistaan teyraa!!

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