hamse kya huyi khataa saheb?

by prashantsingh on February 24, 2013, 03:04:18 PM
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Ahl e bazm aadaab,
ya.Nha is bazm mein meri momin khan 'momin' ki zameen mein pahli ghazal hazir e khidmat hai..


Hamse kya huii khata saheb?
Jo ho itnaa khafa khafa saheb

ik kaa.Nta dil mein chubha saheb
ab zahar do yaa davaa saheb

baazaar mein itnaa  bikaa saheb
sar sharam se mera jhuka saheb


banaane mein laga ik umr jise
vo deevaar hi mujh pe   giraa saheb

luteraa koii aaya hi naheeN go
shab bhar tha kivaa.D khulaa saheb
[ Go - although / हालाँकि ; Kivaa.D - gate / दरवाजा ]
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«Reply #1 on: February 24, 2013, 03:24:23 PM »
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bahut khoob
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«Reply #2 on: February 24, 2013, 03:36:04 PM »
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sukriyah dost!
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wha wha bhut khub ji
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«Reply #4 on: February 24, 2013, 03:46:13 PM »
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bahut khoob
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«Reply #5 on: February 24, 2013, 04:40:32 PM »
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Rajan saheb aur anmol bhai,
ghazal pasand farmaane k liye dili sukriyah qubool karen!
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«Reply #6 on: February 24, 2013, 04:42:55 PM »
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Quote from: prashantsingh on February 24, 2013, 03:04:18 PM
Ahl e bazm aadaab,
ya.Nha is bazm mein meri momin khan 'momin' ki zameen mein pahli ghazal hazir e khidmat hai..


Hamse kya huii khata saheb?
Jo ho itnaa khafa khafa saheb

ik kaa.Nta dil mein chubha saheb
ab zahar do yaa davaa saheb

baazaar mein itnaa  bikaa saheb
sar sharam se mera jhuka saheb


banaane mein laga ik umr jise
vo deevaar hi mujh pe   giraa saheb

luteraa koii aaya hi naheeN go
shab bhar tha kivaa.D khulaa saheb
[ Go - although / हालाँकि ; Kivaa.D - gate / दरवाजा ]

Wah bahut khoob bahut bahut khoob  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #7 on: February 24, 2013, 05:32:30 PM »
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waah waah beautiful
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«Reply #8 on: February 24, 2013, 07:38:34 PM »
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Quote from: prashantsingh on February 24, 2013, 03:04:18 PM
Ahl e bazm aadaab,
ya.Nha is bazm mein meri momin khan 'momin' ki zameen mein pahli ghazal hazir e khidmat hai..


Hamse kya huii khata saheb?
Jo ho itnaa khafa khafa saheb

ik kaa.Nta dil mein chubha saheb
ab zahar do yaa davaa saheb

baazaar mein itnaa  bikaa saheb
sar sharam se mera jhuka saheb


banaane mein laga ik umr jise
vo deevaar hi mujh pe   giraa saheb

luteraa koii aaya hi naheeN go
shab bhar tha kivaa.D khulaa saheb
[ Go - although / हालाँकि ; Kivaa.D - gate / दरवाजा ]

waah waah janaab
kya khoob ghazal se nawaza bazm ko
dil khus ho gya
gehre arth lie aapki ghazal bht hi lajawaab h
daad daad daad

khus rhie
aate rhie
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«Reply #9 on: February 24, 2013, 09:21:49 PM »
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Un Sabh`ii dostoN ka mamnoon hooN jinhone naacheez ki aik adna kosish ko pasand farmaaya hai...!
Tah e dil se sab ka sukr_guzar hooN!
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«Reply #10 on: February 25, 2013, 10:37:03 PM »
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bahut bahut khoob ji.....!!!
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