ha.nstaa to ho gaa aap bhee yazdaa.n kabhii kabhii:Ghazals

divyam

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1) chehre badaltaa kitne hai insaa.n kabhii kabhii
"ha.nstaa to ho gaa aap bhee yazdaa.n kabhii kabhii"

2) naadaa.n kabhii hai bantaa to haiwaa.n kabhiii kabhii
hotaa huu.n dang dekh ke insaa.n kabhii kabhii

3) bazm-e-tarab me.n yaad hai naam-e-khudaa kise!
karte hai.n yaad gardish-e-dauraa.n kabhi kabhii!

4) qaabil samjhta khud ko woh jannat ke waaste!
gairo.n pe kar diya hai jo ehsaa.n kabhii kabhii

5) daulat pe is qadar to na itraao dosto
mehlo.n ko hote dekha hai veeraa.n kabhii kabhii?

6) jis raah me.n hai Ghar mera us raah se guzar!
tuu puura kar de dil ka yeh armaa.n kabhii kabhii

7) kal jin ke sa.ng khele, woh pyaase hain khuun ke
dekhu.n to dil me.n uThta hai tuufaa.n kabhii kabhii

8.) :Ghaafil:, khudaa ne tujh ko diya kaisa hai hunar!
kaaGhaz me.n qaid karta hai gaehaa.n kabhii kabhii

-Mayank


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abdbundeli

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Re: ha.nstaa to ho gaa aap bhee yazdaa.n kabhii kabhii

«Reply #1 on: February 22, 2009, 02:54:26 PM »

Quote from: divyam on February 22, 2009, 12:12:14 PM

1) chehre badaltaa kitne hai insaa.n kabhii kabhii
"ha.nstaa to ho gaa aap bhee yazdaa.n kabhii kabhii"

2) naadaa.n kabhii hai bantaa to haiwaa.n kabhiii kabhii
hotaa huu.n dang dekh ke insaa.n kabhii kabhii

3) bazm-e-tarab me.n yaad hai naam-e-khudaa kise!
karte hai.n yaad gardish-e-dauraa.n kabhi kabhii!

4) qaabil samjhta khud ko woh jannat ke waaste!
gairo.n pe kar diya hai jo ehsaa.n kabhii kabhii

5) daulat pe is qadar to na itraao dosto
mehlo.n ko hote dekha hai veeraa.n kabhii kabhii?

6) jis raah me.n hai Ghar mera us rah se guzar kar!
tuu puura kar de dil ka yeh armaa.n kabhii kabhii

7) kal jin ke sa.ng khele, woh pyaase hain khuun ke
dekhu.n to dil me.n uThta hai tuufaa.n kabhii kabhii

8.) :Ghaafil:, khudaa ne tujh ko diya kaisa yeh hunar!
kaaGhaz me.n qaid karta hai gaehaa.n kabhii kabhii

Bahut khoob divyam ji! Waaqiyee bahut khoob! Likhtey rahiye; aur yoindians wa zamaaney ko padhhney kaa mouqah deytey rahiye!
- abd bundeli


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divyam

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Re: ha.nstaa to ho gaa aap bhee yazdaa.n kabhii kabhii

«Reply #2 on: February 22, 2009, 04:00:07 PM »

Garg saahab,

aap ko Ghazal pasand aaii, jaan kar be-inataha masarrat huii.. mai.n aap ka aabhaari huu.n.. par agar aap is par kuchh tanqeed aara dete to mujhe aap jaise khuna-mashq shayar se kuchh seekhne ka aur apni kamii ko duur karne ka mauqa milta.. Usual Smile

Khair, mai.n samjh sakta huu.n ki waqt ki kamii ke liye, aisa karna mumkin nahiii hai.n.. phir aap ne meri arzee par Ghazal ko paDha aur pasand kiya, is ke liye behad aabhaari huu.n..

Mayank


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abdbundeli

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Re: ha.nstaa to ho gaa aap bhee yazdaa.n kabhii kabhii

«Reply #3 on: February 22, 2009, 04:08:58 PM »

Quote from: divyam on February 22, 2009, 04:00:07 PM

Garg saahab,
aap ko Ghazal pasand aaii, jaan kar be-inataha masarrat huii.. mai.n aap ka aabhaari huu.n.. par agar aap is par kuchh tanqeed aara dete to mujhe aap jaise khuna-mashq shayar se kuchh seekhne ka aur apni kamii ko duur karne ka mauqa milta.. Usual Smile

Khair, mai.n samjh sakta huu.n ki waqt ki kamii ke liye, aisa karna mumkin nahiii hai.n.. phir aap ne meri arzee par Ghazal ko paDha aur pasand kiya, is ke liye behad aabhaari huu.n..

Mayank

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- abd bundeli


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Roja

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Re: ha.nstaa to ho gaa aap bhee yazdaa.n kabhii kabhii

«Reply #4 on: February 22, 2009, 04:11:28 PM »

Wah wah Divyam ji... bahut khoob... bahut khoob

Aapko ABD ji jaison ka aashirwad mila hai... Expect more like this

from you. Good work


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divyam

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Re: ha.nstaa to ho gaa aap bhee yazdaa.n kabhii kabhii

«Reply #5 on: February 23, 2009, 03:49:24 PM »

Quote from: Roja on February 22, 2009, 04:11:28 PM

Wah wah Divyam ji... bahut khoob... bahut khoob

Aapko ABD ji jaison ka aashirwad mila hai... Expect more like this

from you. Good work

Thank u Roja,

sach faramaaya hai tum ne, Abad ji jaise shayar ka aashirwaad milna, waqaii khushnaseebi hai..

par ek bataao tum ne mujhe pehchaana nahii.n :D

Mayank


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javedarshad

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Re: ha.nstaa to ho gaa aap bhee yazdaa.n kabhii kabhii

«Reply #6 on: February 24, 2009, 04:55:48 AM »

Divyam Ji
Adaab

Mashallah bahut khoob

shaid pahle bhi kisi jagah maine andia diya tha aap ke ahsasat bahut achche hain, bahut umda kahte hain,

koshish jari rakhain , saqeel aur tool alfaz ke istemal khoob kiya hai,main badi mushkil se ker pata hun.

aise hi likhte rahain

javed


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divyam

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Re: ha.nstaa to ho gaa aap bhee yazdaa.n kabhii kabhii

«Reply #7 on: February 24, 2009, 03:18:27 PM »

Quote from: javedarshad on February 24, 2009, 04:55:48 AM

javed saahab,

aadaab!

Ghazal ki paseendagii ke liye aap ka mamuun huu.n.. aap ne jin lafzo.n se meri taareef kii hai, us se meri bohat hausila aur izzat afzaaii huii hai. Usual Smile

aur is se pahle meri pahli Ghazal par aap se mulaaqaat ho chuki hai, jis par aap ne daad dii thee, us ke liye bhi ek baar phir se shukriya.. Usual Smile

koshish jaari rahegii, ba-shart aap paDhte rahe.n:)

Mayank


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Talat

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Re: ha.nstaa to ho gaa aap bhee yazdaa.n kabhii kabhii

«Reply #8 on: February 24, 2009, 03:30:11 PM »

Bohot bohot Khoob Divyam Ji..Mashallah bohot achcha likha hai...!!


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