HAR BAAT PE HO CHARCHA ,ACHHA NAHI LAGTA

by nazar ghouri on October 05, 2009, 11:37:00 PM
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«Reply #15 on: July 03, 2010, 10:17:32 PM »
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bahoot hi khoob likha gouri sahab....daad kabool karen
bahot bahot shukriya sahab aap ne pasand kiya aur daad se nawaza.
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«Reply #16 on: July 04, 2010, 06:20:30 PM »
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Wah nazar sahib kya kahene yaara bahoth qoob dad behad o hisab ,, apki is taqleeq ko padke janab munnawar rana sahib ke khuch asher zahen me aa gaye .. ji issi radeef pe kahe gaye hain

Siyasi guftagu mat kijiye acha nahi lagta
Rafo pe fir rafo mat kijiye acha nahi lagta

Bahaya kijiye do char anso bhi mahubbat me
Ibadath be uzu mat kijiye acha nahi lagta

……………..munnawar rana sahib…………………
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«Reply #17 on: July 05, 2010, 05:59:24 AM »
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Sunder Qlaam hai aapka..... Applause Applause Applause
Daad nahi du tou achha nahi lagta
Kuchh nahi likhu achha nahi lagta

Gulshan mai bahaar aaye aur tum naa aao achha nahi lagta
Aao aur phir humse bina mile chale jaao achha nahi lagta


HAR BAAT PE HO CHARCHA ,ACHHA NAHI LAGTA,,
APNAAON SE BANE FAASLA ,ACHHA NAHI LAGTA,,

KABHI TO MASLIHAT KI BAAT KAR AAE DOST,,,,         (MASLIHAT=hikmat,policy)
HAR WAQT JAZB-E-ANA ,,ACHHA NAHI LAGTA,,,,         (ANA=EGO)

GUFTAGU MAIN APNI KUCH TO MITHAAS PAIDA KAR,
ITNA BHI RUKHA LEHJA,, ACHHA NAHI LAGTA,,,

KABHI KABHI HO TO ACHHA BHI LAGTA HAI,,,,,
BAAR BAAR ROOTH JAANA,, ACHHA NAHI LAGTA,,

KUCH MERA BHI QASOOR SHAMIL RAHA HOGA,,,,,
SAB ILZAM US PAR LAGANA,ACHHA NAHI LAGTA,,

WOH NAADIM HAI GALTI PE APNI LEKIN MUJHE,,
PHIR USI SE DHOKAA KHANA ,ACHHA NAHI LAGTA,

MEIN DUSHMAN SE BHI HAATH MILA LETA HOON,,
MAKKAARAON SE HAATH MILANA,ACHHA NAHI LAGTA,
                                
                                           NAZAR GHOURI
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«Reply #18 on: July 05, 2010, 06:50:02 AM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Nazar Saheb!!!!

Zabardast Peskash..Bahut Ache Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #19 on: July 05, 2010, 08:05:42 AM »
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Nazar g nazar na lage aap ki Gazal ko....
Badi nafeez ban padi hai...
Ho iska Charcha achha lagta hai... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Kabhee tou jhuk phalo se ladi shakho ki tarah
Yu akadd me n gujaar zindagi achha nahi lagta

Kuchh tou khule haath se baant tu jag ko warna
Teree uplabhdhiyon ka charcha achha nahi lagta


Mehngaayee is kadar badh gayee hai kay ab
Kharche ki charcha karna achha nahi lagta

HAR BAAT PE HO CHARCHA ,ACHHA NAHI LAGTA,,
APNAAON SE BANE FAASLA ,ACHHA NAHI LAGTA,,

KABHI TO MASLIHAT KI BAAT KAR AAE DOST,,,,         (MASLIHAT=hikmat,policy)
HAR WAQT JAZB-E-ANA ,,ACHHA NAHI LAGTA,,,,         (ANA=EGO)

GUFTAGU MAIN APNI KUCH TO MITHAAS PAIDA KAR,
ITNA BHI RUKHA LEHJA,, ACHHA NAHI LAGTA,,,

KABHI KABHI HO TO ACHHA BHI LAGTA HAI,,,,,
BAAR BAAR ROOTH JAANA,, ACHHA NAHI LAGTA,,

KUCH MERA BHI QASOOR SHAMIL RAHA HOGA,,,,,
SAB ILZAM US PAR LAGANA,ACHHA NAHI LAGTA,,

WOH NAADIM HAI GALTI PE APNI LEKIN MUJHE,,
PHIR USI SE DHOKAA KHANA ,ACHHA NAHI LAGTA,

MEIN DUSHMAN SE BHI HAATH MILA LETA HOON,,
MAKKAARAON SE HAATH MILANA,ACHHA NAHI LAGTA,
                                
                                           NAZAR GHOURI
                                          HYDERABAD,(INDIA).
                                          CELL:09885375957
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«Reply #20 on: July 05, 2010, 11:03:22 AM »
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Very goog reply Koyalji....
Sochne ka ek alag dhang...
Haasay aur Vyang dono ka put diya hai aapne.... Applause Applause Applause Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Applause Applause Applause

Irdhan(fuel)k bhavo ki bahut hai charcha
Aaj Bharat Band hai aur rota hai chachaa

Badh gaya hai ab ghar chalane ka kharcha
Dikhla diya he sarkaar ne yeh kaisa parcha



Nazar g nazar na lage aap ki Gazal ko....
Badi nafeez ban padi hai...
Ho iska Charcha achha lagta hai... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Kabhee tou jhuk phalo se ladi shakho ki tarah
Yu akadd me n gujaar zindagi achha nahi lagta

Kuchh tou khule haath se baant tu jag ko warna
Teree uplabhdhiyon ka charcha achha nahi lagta


Mehngaayee is kadar badh gayee hai kay ab
Kharche ki charcha karna achha nahi lagta

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«Reply #21 on: July 08, 2010, 08:05:02 AM »
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Wah nazar sahib kya kahene yaara bahoth qoob dad behad o hisab ,, apki is taqleeq ko padke janab munnawar rana sahib ke khuch asher zahen me aa gaye .. ji issi radeef pe kahe gaye hain

Siyasi guftagu mat kijiye acha nahi lagta
Rafo pe fir rafo mat kijiye acha nahi lagta

Bahaya kijiye do char anso bhi mahubbat me
Ibadath be uzu mat kijiye acha nahi lagta

……………..munnawar rana sahib…………………
bahot bahot shukriya A.Qadeer bhai ,aap ne ek chooti si koshish ko itna sarah ke likhne liye hausla badhgay,teh dil se shukriya aap ka
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«Reply #22 on: July 08, 2010, 08:06:43 AM »
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bahot bahot shukriya aur bahot khoob ,smardia ji..bahot achha laga aapka daad dene ka yeh andaaz..
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«Reply #23 on: July 08, 2010, 08:09:06 AM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Nazar Saheb!!!!

Zabardast Peskash..Bahut Ache Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

bahot bahot shukriya khwaish sahib aapka.
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«Reply #24 on: July 08, 2010, 08:11:13 AM »
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bahot bahot shukriya koyal saheba,aur daad qubool karein un ashaar ke jo aap ne yahaan darj kiye hain
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«Reply #25 on: July 08, 2010, 09:39:59 AM »
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Aapka tahe dil se aabhaar Smardiaji....
Aapne bhee bahut achha likha hai.... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Very goog reply Koyalji....
Sochne ka ek alag dhang...
Haasay aur Vyang dono ka put diya hai aapne.... Applause Applause Applause Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Applause Applause Applause

Irdhan(fuel)k bhavo ki bahut hai charcha
Aaj Bharat Band hai aur rota hai chachaa

Badh gaya hai ab ghar chalane ka kharcha
Dikhla diya he sarkaar ne yeh kaisa parcha



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«Reply #26 on: April 01, 2013, 04:46:10 AM »
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So Nice,,,,,,
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«Reply #27 on: April 18, 2013, 09:24:27 AM »
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pehli baar aapko padh raha huN huzoor, par yakeen maaniye, bahut hi umdaa likha hai aapne, bas maza aa gaya padh ke... par itne waqt se kahaaN gaayeb haiN aap saaheb, aap jaise logoN ko padhne ka dil karta hai, aate raheN....!!
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