Har harf mukammal tha, lafjo.n ka samandar tha....:Ghazals

vipul kumar

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Ambar pe sitaaro.n ki basti me basar tha.....
Kal raat jal gaya jo, mera hi shahar tha.....

Butkhana ban gaye kal is shahar ke darwaaje,
Har dar pe jhuk raha tha, mera hi wo sar tha....

BeZaari usuulo.n ki mujhe khaa gayi wagarna,
Irada kabhi apna bhi ik meel ka patthar tha.....
[BeZaari=gariibi]

Barbaad hoke YaaRa soudo.n me mohabbat ke,
Ro ro ke batata hu yahan dil tha, jigar tha.....

Haatho.n pe naam kiska mehdi se wo likha tha,
Kyo mujhko dikhati thi, main paraya agar tha....

Tasveer jala dena, yaado.n ko mitaa dena,
Socho to mohabbat ka itna sa safar tha.....

Ik daur-e-karbalaa tha, mayyat thi shahiido.n ki,
Us roz kayaamat thi, talwaar thi, sar tha....

Jo ruuh me rahtaa hai saanso ka aks bankar,
Kis muh se kahiye k wo shakhs sitamgar tha...

Kuchh log jisko YaaRa kal kaatkar gaye hai.n,
Ik shokh parinde ka us daal pe ghar tha....

Kis dil me kya chhupa hai kaise ye koi jaane,
Kal jo hua hai rusvaa, wo shakhs payamber tha....

Wo khwaab nahi hai ab maine use dekha hai,
Gairo.n ke saath kal wo meri niind se baahar tha...

Saagar me shaayari ke main duub ke niklaa hu,
Har harf mukammal tha, lafjo.n ka samandar tha....

Ab jaa ke utara hai kahin baar-e-ghazal hamne,
Shero.n ka ik jaziira meri ruuh ke andar tha.....

Sunte hai mar gaya wo kal bhiid me logo.n ki,
Wo shakhs jisko apni tanhaayi se dar tha....

Todaa hai uska dil bhi Gairo.n ne aaj YaaRa,
baato.n me uski aaj nidaamat ka asar tha....!!
[nidaamat= Pachhtava]


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Re: Har harf mukammal tha, lafjo.n ka samandar tha....

«Reply #1 on: January 02, 2011, 05:01:27 AM »

wah janaab kya ghazal likha yaar.
very touchy--behad umda.
dil se daad ji.
khus rahiye.
sukriya


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Re: Har harf mukammal tha, lafjo.n ka samandar tha....

«Reply #2 on: January 02, 2011, 06:40:17 AM »

behad dil chhute jazbaat hain aapki iss gazal k vipul ji.....
bht hi achchi aapki har ek gazal behtareen hoti hai
yunhi likhte rahiye...bht umdaaaaa


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Re: Har harf mukammal tha, lafjo.n ka samandar tha....

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Re: Har harf mukammal tha, lafjo.n ka samandar tha....

«Reply #4 on: January 23, 2011, 07:40:41 AM »

Quote from: vipul kumar on January 02, 2011, 04:50:49 AM

Vipul ji....
kamal likhte hain janab aap to .....har sher pe lakhon daad janab


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