Har kisi ko nahi milti pyaar ki saugaat hain..................................Aqsh.

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MuddatoN baad aayi muraadoN ki raat hai
Sulagte hue armaan aur rimjhim si barsaat hai



SitaaroN se saji, kitni haseen yeh raat hai
Behke behke se kyuN, aaj mere jazbaat hain

Pyaar ke rangoN se, rangi hain yeh fiza bhi
Hosh hai guum, kuch aise halaath hai

Tujhse milkar ab toh, jeene lage hai hum
Meri saanseiN bhi, teri dee hui khairaat hain

PalkhoN par saje, har ek khwaab kah rahe
Laga le gale ki, bade haseeN yeh lamhaat hain

DooriyaN mitakar, jee leiN is pal ko “Aqsh”
Milti nahi har kisi ko, pyaar ki yeh saugaat hain.



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«Reply #1 on: May 28, 2013, 06:30:35 PM »
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MuddatoN baad aayi muraadoN ki raat hain
Sulagte armaan hai aur rimjhim si barsaat hain



SitaaroN se saji, kitni haseen yeh raat hain
Behke behke se kyuN, aaj mere jazbaat hain

Pyaar ke rangoN se, rangi hai yeh fiza bhi
Hosh hai guum, kuch aise halaat hai

Tujhse milkar ab toh, jeene lage hai hum
Meri saanseiN bhi, teri dee hui khairaat hain

PalkhoN par saje, har ek khwaab kah rahe
Laga le gale ki, badi haseeN yeh lamhaat hain

DooriyaN mitakar, jee leiN is pal ko “Aqsh”
Milti nahi har kisi ko, pyaar ki yeh saugaat hain.






Justtttttttt Beautiful Aqsh ji....

Bahut Bahut Khooooob..Bahut Hi khoobsurat Ghazal..

Har Ek Ashaar Ishq Ke Khumaar Mein dooba Hua...

Loved It....

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«Reply #2 on: May 28, 2013, 06:31:43 PM »
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Its Fabulous Aqsh ji & Wow u hav penned so beautifully & clearly the feelings Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #3 on: May 28, 2013, 06:34:39 PM »
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Just superb Aqsh Mam.Bahut-bahut khoobsurat ghazal kahi hai aapne.I really love it.
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«Reply #4 on: May 28, 2013, 06:36:38 PM »
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MuddatoN baad aayi muraadoN ki raat hain
Sulagte armaan hai aur rimjhim si barsaat hain


SitaaroN se saji, kitni haseen yeh raat hain
Behke behke se kyuN, aaj mere jazbaat hain

waaah waaah Aqsh ji bohut umda likha hua hai..
beautiful formation of words with meaningful feelings.

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«Reply #5 on: May 28, 2013, 06:38:45 PM »
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Waah Waah.. bahut bahut khoob Aqsh ji... Usual Smile
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«Reply #6 on: May 28, 2013, 06:46:08 PM »
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waah waah bahut khoob
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«Reply #7 on: May 28, 2013, 06:55:23 PM »
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Justtttttttt Beautiful Aqsh ji....

Bahut Bahut Khooooob..Bahut Hi khoobsurat Ghazal..

Har Ek Ashaar Ishq Ke Khumaar Mein dooba Hua...

Loved It....

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

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aapka bahut bahut shukriya khwaish ji..
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«Reply #8 on: May 28, 2013, 06:55:59 PM »
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Its Fabulous Aqsh ji & Wow u hav penned so beautifully & clearly the feelings Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
thnx bhupinder kaur ji a lot...
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«Reply #9 on: May 28, 2013, 06:56:30 PM »
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Just superb Aqsh Mam.Bahut-bahut khoobsurat ghazal kahi hai aapne.I really love it.
aapka bahut bahut shukriya sudhir ji...
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«Reply #10 on: May 28, 2013, 06:57:43 PM »
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MuddatoN baad aayi muraadoN ki raat hain
Sulagte armaan hai aur rimjhim si barsaat hain


SitaaroN se saji, kitni haseen yeh raat hain
Behke behke se kyuN, aaj mere jazbaat hain

waaah waaah Aqsh ji bohut umda likha hua hai..
beautiful formation of words with meaningful feelings.

Clapping SmileyClapping SmileyClapping SmileyClapping SmileyClapping SmileyClapping Smiley
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thank you soooooo much sahal...
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«Reply #11 on: May 28, 2013, 07:00:22 PM »
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MuddatoN baad aayi muraadoN ki raat hai
Sulagte armaan hain aur rimjhim si barsaat hai[/b]



SitaaroN se saji, kitni haseen yeh raat hai
Behke behke se kyuN, aaj mere jazbaat hain

Pyaar ke rangoN se, rangi hai yeh fiza bhi
Hosh hai guum, kuch aise halaat hain

Tujhse milkar ab toh, jeene lage hain hum
Meri saanseiN bhi, teri dee hui khairaat hain

PalkhoN par saje, har ek khwaab kah rahe
Laga le gale ki, bade haseeN yeh lamhaat hain

DooriyaN mitakar, jee leiN is pal ko “Aqsh”
Milti nahi har kisi ko, pyaar ki yeh saugaat hain.





good one,ma'am but in the poem this type of mistakes to be avoided and i think you know urdu very well so you should aware all such things. these type of basic mistakes dose not leave good impact --please don't mind and one shuold correct immediately the mistakes

thank you
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«Reply #12 on: May 28, 2013, 07:00:36 PM »
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Waah Waah.. bahut bahut khoob Aqsh ji... Usual Smile
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thnx a lot touhid ji..
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«Reply #13 on: May 28, 2013, 07:01:44 PM »
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waah waah bahut khoob
thnx saini sir....
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«Reply #14 on: May 28, 2013, 07:02:53 PM »
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thnx mb ji....
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